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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Geet ek punch lagana chaihiye Maan ko fir jaa ke coffee banana..

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Destiny's play

Years ago she was waiting for him in a room, decorated with flowers for a blissful life, her eyes filled with dreams of a happy future, her nervous heart full of love and her whole being waiting to be claimed by him

and

Today they are in their empty room, dreams brutally broken, her butchered heart sans any feelings and her entire being refuses to love anymore...

She voiced out her stand that she cannot give him that place in her heart,

freed him from the vows that bonded them together for his new life ahead😒

Maan 's guilt increasing by leaps and bounds, her declaration adding to it,

numb heart missed a beat loosing his priceless possession.

Dard ki ab aur gunjaaish hi nahi bachi

itna bas gaya hain dil mein

ke uska har ehsaas hi mit gaya

The dark room, the chill air, the distance between killing but one ray of light shows the way through the dark, an effort to walk ahead and reduce the distance and wrapping the one in the warmth of your embrace

I don't know wether it makes sense or no but this is what I felt for the last part and Maan taking an initiative for making amends to start afresh

Silence of the end or maybe for new beginning...

Fabulous update Muski

The cold dark room, their numb hearts and their respective pains you just wove everything so beautifully, could actually feel it all alive

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Just loved it!!!

😃

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

A much needed reality check!

Maan has a long way to go...

Dadimaa understands all her unspoken words

She comforts her and also affirms Geet's stand😊

Geet all set to leave but

surprise suprise😳

Maan accompanying her

Meera and Dev did all the shopping for Geet for her new beginning in the world of colours and happiness😛

I may sound silly but actually I enjoyed Maan's move

and Geet's self assurance and restraint all along brought out a different facet of Geet just like a young girl😳

Maan trying to behave normal not wanting to push her yet very firm on his stand😊

Loved Maan's outburst

He so honestly declared that all her happiness, feelings and life are bonded with him and his unspoken words too that he was here for good

Till date it was only him but today it was only Geet and her happiness

😳

The last sentence was the best

Hubby ko coffee chahiye😉

wifey shocked😲

Fantastic one

After so much pain some light moments

Maan on the right track to make amends

Geet shell shocked with change in events

Can't wait for the next one

Already waiting

And very sorry for being late

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Oh I like this...so maan is trying to get geet to open up a bit and give her all the comfort and love she deserves...

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

ahaan ... Good going Maan
I hope he doesnt hurt Geet more.

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

loved the update

glad that maan and geet are back in the US

they have privacy!!!!

guessing maan is going to be using tough love to break geets shell around her heart

can't wait for the next update

please update soon

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Hmmm.. he is playing very safe...

He is using her words to keep her close to him...😊

otherwise Maan ke paas kuch nahi ...ki wo usse roke sake...😡

he wants to take care of her...but it is not so eassy...

lets see ..how will Geet react ...???😕

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

😲 coffee!!!!!!! what is maan upto now?

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

wonderful ... much needed one !!!

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#430

waw!!!!now the story is gonna be soo much interestng!!!maan is going to mange geet anyhow and will make her comfortable with him eventually.can't wait fo more.