my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back, di, lovely to see you here in GF.
thanks a lot for posting it here.
read ur pm.
i am so glad ur are here.
awesome, lovely updates.beautifully written.
in both of ur ff's i.e. ilwe and my teacher, maan's character is wrapped ina shadow, surrounded with secrets and that is what makes it so interesting and intriguing.
waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
loved ur long update and writing
plzz sepration ya mis understanding mat krna maneet k bich
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Two things that I absolutely loved in the whole update.

"Your past is always your past. Even if you forget it, it remembers you."

Marriage is not a noun; it's a verb. It isn't something you get. It's something you do. Its the way you love your partner every day.

Really impactful. Said a lot in just few words. That has been always ur strength. Amazing reading the part. I hope she comes clean about her past with maan before he gets a chance to. It would ensure less misunderstandings and make maan believe that the innocence in her eyes is not a facade. Though I have sm difficulties in understanding exactly which lines were said by maan n which by geet bcz of ur free running style..it was awesome. You can try color coding the dialogues if time permits. Otherwise even then its cool. And get a banner for ur fiction. Wud make it visually more appearing and garner u much deserved readers :)

And wait did I just read Dia was in Maan's apartment so late in the night. Dude where is the social teacher student protocol. That is so unacceptable from a guy of morals like Maan. With geet,she is hiswife. But guy needs to know where to draw the line with other students. He is allowed to burn in jealousy and so is she! Waiting to read more which is focused on present,the mushy,sensous, forget it all present..coz I know past wud have a lot of pain :'(!! Update soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi! Reet,
Really enjoyed n loved to read especially the way of discribing the nature .
Your writng ve a poetic touch .I liked to read such kind of stories.Thank u Reet.
Hope ths one ll be a sweet romantic story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The chemistry you have created between them is crackling...I can feel the sizzle. The button part was adorable.
Adored the part of him dragging her to the kitchen. So much haq on her. Loved it.
Jealous of Dia. I don't blame her... chipku kahin ki... who leaves their diary in a prof's home.
What a revelation about their relation!
I never saw it coming.
Very nice surprise.
You know as long as your updates are I crave more.
You are a wonderful story teller.
Thanks for updating Reet...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update.
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.. maan weds geet ;) eargely waiting for past plz update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
it was a long chapter bt i never wanted it to end 😆
vikas is such a cheapo hate him
enjoyed d jealous side of them 😆
luvd d update
waiting fr nxt plz do update soon 😳
thnx fr pm
Edited by .Tulip. - 12 years ago
pingu.tingu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow so many parts ..off to read will comment later :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Just read all parts
awesome ff
and the way u write is just superb
now eagerly waiting 4 nxt upd

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