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Posted: 12 years ago
Reet,
Am so happy to see your reply.I didint even expect in my dreams:)
what ever I ve told abt your FF and the writng style is true.The way u described the nature ,Maan & Geet was in a poetic way.I fall in love with ths FF.

Pls dont stop in the mind way.You are a talented writer.
Ths part also very touchy.No words is enough to say.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thread 2 added


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THREAD 2 CHAP 23 ONWARDS
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Posted: 12 years ago
reet didiii :D
remember me?? ramya aka ramyayuppy here 😳 im one of ur crazy fan while in love with enemy
n we spoke few times too 😳
thanks to dreamy4ever as she suggested me tgis n im shocked to see u here
dint get to know that u r back n strted writing also :(

Anyways enough of my bakbak
ohhh godd diii im sooo soo luving it
Geet arrogant thick headed n maan her teacher n jus dint let her enter the class on first day
its like he is her enemy i agree with geet he acted like he is hating her
and their fights retorts ufff
and their growing fondness actually geet's
bcoz maan is always fond of her in his own ways right..
He is really concerned about her
n now starts the new feelings in her which frightened her n she starts the avoiding game..
but all she do is come back to him 😳
now its maans turn for indifference
hell yarr once he is close nxt moment hates her n turns his back to her!!!
but still possessive!!! boy u really need sum knock on ur head!!
phewww!!! ramya gng mad!!
and their kisss 😳 u r death to us ddiii 😉
now starts their little romance but still soo much of confusion!!!
what is this maan always saying to himself i have my right on her dont I???
dont tell me they are married!!
He always thinks abt revenge n stil cant part from her n cryingas she doesnt remember maan
n here geet dont even think abt maan atleast once!!
thank god u cleared these cinfusions now they r married n geet waited for him but he dint return back :(
everything is anants dirty game 😡
now this vikas i hate himm for sure
he is the one who is hell bent om destroying everything between maaneet
why dint maan deny geet dat he dunt sleep wuth dia
n vikas ohhh hell i hate his existence in this ff
thanks to dia who knocked some sense to geet
ohhh wat geet facing now is far more painful dan wat maan faced
Geet is payimg for her sins but the sin she commited is becoz of the anger of betrayel and dat stupid vikas who took charge of geets numb situation n did it all
maan still caring for her but showing his cincern im way of taunts
geet opposed his help for her in studies
satya please he is the only one who can knock sime sense to maan
pleasr sort out things between them
now wat when will arjun tell geet about maann!!

did u get the head n tail of my blabberings diii???
well all i wanna say is i luved this to core❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .ramya-gurtian.

reet didiii :D
remember me?? ramya aka ramyayuppy here 😳 im one of ur crazy fan while in love with enemy
n we spoke few times too 😳
thanks to dreamy4ever as she suggested me tgis n im shocked to see u here
dint get to know that u r back n strted writing also :(

Anyways enough of my bakbak
ohhh godd diii im sooo soo luving it
Geet arrogant thick headed n maan her teacher n jus dint let her enter the class on first day
its like he is her enemy i agree with geet he acted like he is hating her
and their fights retorts ufff
and their growing fondness actually geet's
bcoz maan is always fond of her in his own ways right..
He is really concerned about her
n now starts the new feelings in her which frightened her n she starts the avoiding game..
but all she do is come back to him 😳
now its maans turn for indifference
hell yarr once he is close nxt moment hates her n turns his back to her!!!
but still possessive!!! boy u really need sum knock on ur head!!
phewww!!! ramya gng mad!!
and their kisss 😳 u r death to us ddiii 😉
now starts their little romance but still soo much of confusion!!!
what is this maan always saying to himself i have my right on her dont I???
dont tell me they are married!!
He always thinks abt revenge n stil cant part from her n cryingas she doesnt remember maan
n here geet dont even think abt maan atleast once!!
thank god u cleared these cinfusions now they r married n geet waited for him but he dint return back :(
everything is anants dirty game 😡
now this vikas i hate himm for sure
he is the one who is hell bent om destroying everything between maaneet
why dint maan deny geet dat he dunt sleep wuth dia
n vikas ohhh hell i hate his existence in this ff
thanks to dia who knocked some sense to geet
ohhh wat geet facing now is far more painful dan wat maan faced
Geet is payimg for her sins but the sin she commited is becoz of the anger of betrayel and dat stupid vikas who took charge of geets numb situation n did it all
maan still caring for her but showing his cincern im way of taunts
geet opposed his help for her in studies
satya please he is the only one who can knock sime sense to maan
pleasr sort out things between them
now wat when will arjun tell geet about maann!!

did u get the head n tail of my blabberings diii???
well all i wanna say is i luved this to core❤️



awww...u have changed ur name

of course i remember u
how can i forget u dear

thank u so much for coming and reading this one too..
no dear ..u r absolutely adorable .

i get all ur "blabberings" darling
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic story
been a silent reader
but your work forced me to write👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reet❤️,
I loved ths part...very emotional
She went to see Arjun at that odd time ...while reading I felt somethng in my heart.Very touchy n emotionaly romantic.Reet you are an excellent ROMANTIC writer.
Feelng to reread.I know this FF is going to be finished soon bt pls give another romantic FF dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crayon-

I have read this whole story while sitting in a metro train and I was so engrossed at one particular point that I was tempted to skip my station and continue reading the story. After reading all the chapters, it all led me to the second chapter where Geet puts forth her POV regarding Othello and Iago...Geet projecting Othello as the villain...his lack of faith and assuming Desdemona's infidelity. (Not that these both situations are the same but they do have a bit of similarity in them. )When it came to herself ...it was proved that anger blinds a person...no matter what your ideologies are ...everything falls apart at one particular moment where you refuse to think calmly...it unleashes your darker shades.

To be honest...I hated Geet...And I probably would have been the one who would have actually not felt very bad using the word next victim as the other Prof used. Initially even Arjun kind of scared me...I really thought that somewhere he was crossing his line in Geet's matter as she was just any other student for him in college. It was scary but then the way things changed...I can't help but wonder about Arjun. The line... that he was doing it for Uday. The situation he is in...It's a very complex one...It's difficult to say anything about his feelings for a person like me. My teacher here I would like to believe reflects so many relationships in this FF...Whether it's Geet- Maan or Maan-Dia or even Uday-Maan. The fact they all are binded together in more than one link makes things more complex and beautiful. Geet being the daughter of Uday or the same Geet being the granddaughter of Anant or Dia reminding him of his own self. There are so many strings and that's what makes this story so amazing along with its fast pace. I totally love this.

Geet's suffering...it's painful..It is extremely painful but at one point I still feel it's going to be very difficult for everybody even in her college to act with her in a normal way because they have seen the most vicious part of hers along with the brave and repentance filled confession of her lie. The Venom like thing sometimes lasts longer...it's just like at times someone's honesty inspires you...the same way someone's fury or the vicious part scares the shit out of people. Probably people do have such darkest shades in them...everybody does but it all seems fine until it comes out...Ones it gets unleashed or say becomes clearly visible...It's impact would surely last longer.

This is one of the most amazing FFs I have read in a long time. The best part being ...you never created Arjun...Geet or even Dia just to be either hated or loved. You left it for us...Let us travel in the story you weaved and perceive it according to each reader's experiences. Amazing! 😃

P.S. Ok do I even make sense or have I just blabbered away to glory? 😆



thank you so much for the compliments .
i couldnt agree more what you have said ..
geet herself turned to othello .
in life its really difficult to decide sometimes in certain situations what a human feels for a person
who m i to judge them ?
i m just narrator ..

letting the readers judge them and decide.
thanks a lot for commenting .

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊by chance this story caught my attention...the n ur name reminded me u r the same writer who wrote ILWTE...wow what a grt storyline...will catch with all update...pls add me to ur PM list😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

😊by chance this story caught my attention...the n ur name reminded me u r the same writer who wrote ILWTE...wow what a grt storyline...will catch with all update...pls add me to ur PM list😊



hey dear
i dont pm .. you need to stalk me if u wanna read the story .i tend to update regularly if not everyday ..then the day next

thankx !

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Posted: 12 years ago
pls add me to ur pm list if you can PLEASE !

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