**FLAMES OF DESIRE**MG FF#17 NOTE ON PG-190 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Crying coz you gave short update...
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Annie itna badmash hai yaar
😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 Aww my cutey pricess dnt wanna wake all night for playing games
😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 Whose is calling maan n what was the sound
plzz plzz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesome part...
loved it...
waiting for next part...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updating meri maa😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
OMG what a super duper update ...hillarious too🤣
Annie ki IQ to geet se bhi better he 😆
raat bhar sote nahi he par game khelte he😆
someone is calling maan ...seems like Twist is coming 😉😃
waiting eagerly for ur next twist ...loved the whole baby update👏🤗
but baby update hi tha 🤔 2 times read kiya phir bhi jaldi finish hogaya😛
plz update long wala next time ok ..me waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

OMG what a super duper update ...hillarious too🤣

Annie ki IQ to geet se bhi better he 😆
raat bhar sote nahi he par game khelte he😆
someone is calling maan ...seems like Twist is coming 😉😃
waiting eagerly for ur next twist ...loved the whole baby update👏🤗
but baby update hi tha 🤔 2 times read kiya phir bhi jaldi finish hogaya😛
plz update long wala next time ok ..me waiting ...

here u go😉 bada wala update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
{Thank u so much SHRUTHE for this beautiful banner}
Giving u back to back two updates so i want the like mark above 320 (which is d regular one)...warna next update short dungi😆
~PART-56~
~You are the fire that burns the passion within my soul~
Their gaze met and he naughtily smiled and blowed a kiss towards her, while our shy angel blushed and turned around hiding from his gaze...
"pagli hai" he audibly sighed and was about to disconnect the call, when heard a painfull moan followed by breaking of glass on the other side...
"who is there" he clutched the mobile more tightly, but the line went off...leaving behind the dreadful silence...
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The moan echoed in his senses but he composed himself and turned around, looking for his angel to sooth his soul...He was startled when saw her walking away with annie and naintara upstairs...He rushed towards them but dadi stopped him, saying..."beta thoda sa toh sabar kijiye...geet ko aap hi ke room mai le ja rahe hai" she naughtily shook her head looking at his desperation...then patted on his back and left from there...
Maan heavily sighed and sat on the sofa, removing his bluetooth in frustration...Vicky looked at him amused and nudged dev, saying..."yeh bhai toh bilkul majnu ban gaye hai"...to which dev nodded and slowly whispered back in his ear, saying..."shadi ke baad aisa hi haal hota hai" and shook his head, giving maan his sympathetic look...
"acha fir toh mai kabhi na shadi karu"...vicky sadly pouted..."ha lekin affairs bohat saare karunga...woh toh safe hai na" he suddenly started grinning from ear to ear and dev smacked on his head, saying..."sudhar ja...abhi bhi time hai"...
They continued their tussel, while on the side our poor dulha was busy thinking about his bride...He kept looking at his watch now and then, while all the boys cheekily giggled and surrounded him on the couch...
Vicky sat besides him, while manisha blocked the seat on the other side...deliberately grabbing his arm and pulling maan closer...
"hayeee mere maanu jaanu...yaha akele kyu baithe ho" manisha asked him...nuzzling his face on maan's shoulder...while poor guy backed away, gulping down his saliva...He looked at dev for help, but dev looked away...naughtily pretending to admire some piece of decoration...
Maan cursed him under his breath, and was about to ran off from their...when vicky's grabbed his other hand and pulled him closer...
"maan bhai aapko sab aata toh hai na...agar nahi aata toh mai sikha dunga" vicky loudly exclaimed in his ear and maan gave him his murderous look, one for having such a touchy friend and second for being such a devil brother...
"ha maan sir...you can ask vicky...usko sab aata hai" adi blushed while saying this, remembering all the naughty ideas vicky gave him to woo pinky...While manisha pouted and grabbed maan's hand and pulled him closer..."nahi maanu janu...you come with me...mai aapko sab sikha dunga" manisha blushed and cupped his cheek...giggling with all naughty thoughts running in his mind...
All the boys continued there rattling, when maan some how freed himself and screamed on top of his voice...silencing everyone...He sat far away from them, and closed his eyes...calming himself for his most awaited first night...He looked at his siblings and friends pouting at the far end...and smirked with the terror, he could see on their faces...
He patted himself mentally for achieving the perfect peace around, when his mobile buzzed with incoming message...He ignored it and closed his eyes, savouring the perfect silence...when again his mobile buzzed with another message..."who the hell is disturbing me on my wedding night" he cursed the sender and again closed his eyes...not interested to even have a glimpse of it...
His mobile kept on buzzing and maan irritatingly pulled it out...to smack it somewhere...when dadi came to maan asking him to go to his room...He hurriedly got up, but quickly straightened himself...as dadi started laughing at his desperation..."dadi now please you don't start...your devil grandsons have already irked me to the core" maan moaned and dadi gave him her understanding look and caressed his cheek..."chaliye ab jayiye...meri bachi wait kar rahi hogi" she exclaimed and maan smiled, nodding his head in shy yes...
He started walking upstairs and all the devils followed him right behind...Maan gave them his murderous glare but stubborn devils continued following him right to his room...
They all finally reached at his door step...and pinky stopped them, saying geet needs little more time to get ready...Maan sighed and waited patiently outside the room, while all the curious souls gave him amused stares...like he was some alien...
"god kaha fas gaya mai" maan shook his head, sympathizing with himself...and walked little away, avoiding their intimidating gaze...While all the devils again started arguing with each other...to win the tussel...
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While on the other side, naintara and annie helped geet to sit inbetween the huge king size bed...which was covered with rose petals and flower garland...giving it a perfect look of floral canopy...
"geet...bilkul ghabarana nahi...maan veer ji jo kahe karte jana ok" naintara worriedly caressed her cheek, feeling scared for her angel's first night..."aur agar thoda dard ho toh...I mean if it pa...ummm woh..."...naintara hesistated to tell her about the pain, which she is about to go through being a virgin...when annie unknowingly intervened saying..."meri sweet si bhabi itna tension mat lo...hamari geet sab sambhal legi...hai na geet" annie asked geet, hugging naintara sideways...while geet nodded her head in shy yes...
Naintara smiled, thinking her baby has become a big girl now and caressed her cheek...while annie again adjusted her veil and kissed on her cheek...bidding her their goodbyes...
Annie started walking out of the room, taking naintara with her...when remembered her ongoing evil plan and ran back to geet...asking naintara to give them last few minutes...Naintara smiled and left the room, giving her babies their own little time...and annie pounced on geet, asking her if she is following all the instructions correctly...
"ha maine sab waise hi kiya...dekho unko kitne message kiye hai" geet showed annie her mobile, which she was securely clutching all throughout...and annie slyly smiled, imagining the expression on maan bhai's face...after reading them...
"awww my sweet baby...you are my angel"...annie lovingly pulled her cheek..."now keep on texting him, till he is aroused...ok"
"ummm...par unko yeh acha toh lagega na" geet pouted her lips, and annie winked back at her, saying..."acha nahi...maan bhai will love it"
"sachiii" geet brimmed with delight, and annie kissed on her cheek, saying..."muchiii"
Geet giggled and cutely adjusted her veil, and annie kept looking at her...somewhere feeling worried with her innocence...
"acha geet agar tujhe darr lage...I mean maan bhai agar gussa kare toh mujhe bulayegi na" she cupped her cheek and geet nodded flashing her sweet smile...Annie finally kissed on her forehead and helped her setting her veil and left, before looking back at her for the one last time...
She came out and came face to face with all the boys, who were arguing with girls for blocking the door...She gave vicky her threatening glare, and pushed him away...looking for her maan bhai...
Maan walked towards towards them, simply not interested in their cat fight...and was about to sneek into his room, when annie grabbed his hand and pulled him back...
"bhai aise cheating nahi chalegi...pehale shagun do phir andar jaane dungi" annie teasingly smirked, now completely blocking the door with the help of other girls...
"ok kitne chahiye" maan was in no mood of argument, so simply gave in...and annie brimmed in delight, right away demanding 10 lakhs...
"10 lakhs???? are you gone mad" maan was hell shocked...while all the boys gasped, equally startled with this girls demands...
"bhai bas 10 lakh hi toh mange...kaunse 10 corer maang liye...jo aap itna shock ho rahe ho" annie pouted, cutely pulling maan's sleeve...giving him her puppy look..."bhai please de do na" she cribbed and maan sighed, rubbing his forehead...
Annie continued her rattling, and that is when maan's mobile again buzzed with another incoming message...He looked down at his mobile, frustrated with the intruder...Poor guy was already irritated with aniee's demands...and now this continuous incoming messages pissed him off...
"bhai aaj kanjusi nahi chalegi...I want 10 lakhs...warna andar jaane nahi dungi" annie stubbornly exclaimed, screaming into maan's ear, who looked quite stunned reading the first message that popped up on his mobile screen...which was from geet...
~what are you wearing honey~
He read and re-read again, then went back to confirm the sender...Poor guy in shock, literally looked down at himself, checking out what was he actually wearing...then again nervously checked the mobile screen, if he read it correct..."yeh toh sach mai geet ne bheja hai" poor guy gulped down his saliva, then looked up at annie's face...who was now poking on his arm..."bhai aap pehale aise toh na the...aapki shadi kya ho gayi, aap behan ko bhool gaye na" annie pouted making a fake baby sad face, then pretended as if wiping her tears...while all the girls shook their head in sympathy...
"maan sir aap yeh thik nahi kar rahe annie ke saath" pinky caressed annie's cheek, then gave maan her disapproving look...while boys argued with girls, accusing them for showing crocodile tears...
"bhai inko ek futi kaudi mat dena...nautanki hai sab" vicky pulled maan sideways, then slowly whispered in his ear..."bhai instead you give us money...hum inn chipakaliyo ko sambhal lenge...aur aapko puri raat security denge, jab tak aap suhagraat ache se na mala le" he shamelessly winked at maan, then grinned, naughtily raising his eyebrows...
Maan sighed, looking at his both devil siblings, seriously thinking of whom to murder first...But then shrugging off his all evil plans, he decided to better concentrate on his bride and try to have a sensible suhagraat...
Poor guy with no option left, gritted his teeth and pulled out his cheque book and signed two cheques for both annie and vicky...and angrily handed it over to them..."now both of you take this...and don't show me your faces till next morning" he dangerously threatened and almost pushed them away...making his way into his bedroom...
"ufff...yeh bhai kitne desperate hai" annie shook her head in disapproval, then looked at vicky...who was grinning with the blank cheque in his hand...Both of them giggled, highfiving eachother...then ran off taking all the girls and boys with them...
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Finally maan entered in his room, and quickly closed the door shut...Poor guy heaved a sigh of relief, and turned around looking for the object of his admiration...His gaze brimmed with delight, when he saw her smooth outline, covered under the veil...waiting for him on his bed...He felt a shiver ran down his spine, when he saw her cutely curling her toes...and hiding the intricate mehndi design of her feet from his lascivious gaze...
Lover boy looked away with the arousing glimpse he got...her creamy feet looked delicious, and the toe ring added that luscious appeal...
making it look incredibly sexy...
Maan smiled to himself, and smacked his forehead to behave his wildly running erotic thoughts..."dude she is all yours...take it slowly" he ordered himself and took his primitive steps towards his wife...He desiriously scanned her top to bottom, and wondered if she is as excited as he is...Her gentle movements under the veil, felt cutely adorable...as if she was struggling to stay still...He heard her slow melodious whispers, like she was murmuring something to herself...Uff this will be one incredible night, he thought and smirked moving closer to her...He was about to sit next to her, when his mobile again buzzed and he hurried to swtich it off...and found the message was from geet...
"geet" he whispered in confusion, and wondered who must be sending all this...when his doll is sitting right infront of him...
"umm" he heard his angel moan, and sighed asking her..."geet...tum hi ho na"...to which she cutely nodded her head and maan smiled, shaking his head in amusement...Who will be under that veil other than her, he thought...and gently sat besides her, keeping his mobile aside...The zeal of facing her as a husband was something incredible...he felt protective, possessive and what not...The mere thought of feeling her as his wife, made him shiver with urgent needs...He sightly shifted towards her and she scrunched back, like a shy toddler...Maan laughed and pulled her closer, and slowly lifted her veil...revealing the marvellous beauty inside...
He kept looking at her spell bounded, and she softly faced him...smiling with her dove hazels...He leaned in mesmirized and without waiting kissed on her supple cheeks...Geet blushed and moved back in his arms and maan forwarded himself by placing feather like kisses on her chin and down below...Geet tightly clutched her cute little mobile in her palm and curiously scanned his face, whispering..."woh...are you aroused"...she fluttered her lashes, and stared at him...while maan still lost in the moment, gently placed her on the bed and hovered over her petite frame...He kissed lower down her chin, towards the curve of her neck and back again to her supple cheeks...
"bolo na...are you aroused" she again moaned, now with her closed eye...and maan just moaned whispering a yes on her juicy lips...
He gently licked her bottom lip, while his hand went down her shoulder...caressing its way down...He reached her palm, aiming to interven their hands...but found her tightly holding something...He fluttered opened his eyes, while his lips left hers and he looked down for the object in her hand...
Geet too opened her eyes, as maan gently pulled the mobile from her hand and placed it on the table besides...
"yeh sab kya badmashi laga rakhi hai" he asked her, with a teasing smirk plastered on his face...as he remembered what erotic messages she had forwarded him a while ago...His whole body rippled with pleasure, as he saw her innocently blinking her hazels...then biting her lower lip, to subside the pleasurable husky moan..."ummm woh...maine kya kiya"...she still cutely tried defending herself, as her raw knowledge about intimacy, boldly stated that the girl should always try to act innocent...to increase her husband's arousal...
Maan smiled and rubbed his forehead, as her cute antics now seduced him beyond his limits...He sensuously dipped his head in the crook of her neck...and bit on her creamy flesh, forcing her to moan with pain and pleasure...Geet wriggled, as now his whole body weight pinned her petite form into the mattress...while his hands teasingly searched for her breast, which were always secretly the center of his attraction...
"geet" he groaned in sheer pleasure, as his manhood now twitched...
screaming for attention...
Geet gulped down her saliva, as he briskly pulled himself away from her...and hurried to get rid of his sherwani...She watched him in fascination, involuntarily imagining the naked guy from the video and his firm tight assets...Her innocent mind drifted towards the scene, where the guy bites the girl, and she screams for more...
"woh ladki ne kitna zor se scream kiya tha...aur maine...umm jhalli" she pouted and twisted her lips, feeling let down with her lack of preparation..."unko toh sab aata hai...woh waisa hi kar rahe hai jaisa woh ladka kar raha tha" she sadly sighed, drowning in her own reveries...when felt maan's naked upper body hovering over hers...
Maan hungrily kissed his way down her lips, devouring her milky flesh with his teeth and lips..."tum mujhe pagal kar dogi" he moaned and nibbled on her cleavage, pulling the veil completely off her body...
His hands instinctively caressed her swell above her cloths, searching for its perky head...Geet arched her body in response and his hands went behind her, untying her choli for better access...
He was so overwhelmed with both lust and love, that he couldn't stop imagining what beauty this piece of cloth is hiding behind...He lasciviously licked his lips, while his hands hungrily pulled her blouse away...revealing her bra covered voluptous assets...He couldn't take his eyes off, as his angel shied, hiding them with her hands...and turned away from his intoxicated gaze...Maan smiled and leaned in closer, and passionately hugged her from behind...spooning her body, with his taut one..."tonight I want to fullfill all my desires...and you won't stop me samjhi"...he huskily moaned in the crook of her neck, then sensuously bit on her earlobe, followed by sucking on it...
"ummm" geet moaned in response and turned around in his arms...looking at him shy yet curiously...Maan naughtily smiled and kissed on her cute little nose..."aise kya dekh rahi ho" he asked her, softly pecking her pulm lips...while she sweetly smiled and cupped his cheek, whispering...
"ummm...aapko toh sab kuch aata hai...kya aapne bhi woh nange punge videos dekhe hai" she asked in one go, then enthusiastically waited for him to respond to her million dollar doubt...
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Precap :- abhi toh SR shuru hua hai😳😉😆...
Hello my darling readers...bada wala sorry for being away...me back wid updates...n pls pardon my delay...
Enjoy this update n let me know ur view...will be waiting...
love u lots,
varsha😊
(C) 2013, Varsha Khedekar, All Rights Reserved.
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

updating meri maa😆



😆 hum bechain hai bachi
meri pm padho and reply karo😳
Edited by kiran_rati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
both siblings r just hilarious
annie and vicky is such a cute siblings😆
poor maan
vow blank cheques
hope i too maans sister
maan is tooo desparate man☺️
i still blushing with this short update of maaneet romance
now i am waiting for total SR
plz dont bring any haddi btw them
cont soon dear
Edited by kiran_rati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
aur itna tadpayegi yaar... for a full fledged update

anyways

just loved the way everyone was irritating maan

and poor he had to stay away from them

and annie yeh kya kiya bichari geet ko kya karne keh rahi hain

she is so innocent tat she does not know wat maan is doing with her.. and the last question omg wat will maan answer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
everyone teased maan a lot and he was more desperate on seeing geet
geet came with her que
ab waiting for next

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