**FLAMES OF DESIRE**MG FF#17 NOTE ON PG-190

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FLAMES OF DESIRE #17
A gentle brush of his fingers,
Sending shivers down my spine.
In the love I see in his eyes,
Is a love that equals mine.

He greets me with a smile,
And leaves me with a kiss.
If he were to ever leave me,
I couldn't imagine what I'd miss.

Maybe it's his touch,
Or the way he makes me feel.
But whatever it is,
I'm head over heels.
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~😳A SNEAK PEEK-ABOUT WHATS STORE IN FUTURE😳~

What is this, if not passion
The feeling of something unusual
Waiting to be caressed, wanting to explode,
What if I get that heavenly touch
For which my body has been aching
Will I remain what I am
Or will the entwining of the bodies
Lead me to something ethereal
I am confused, do not know how to react
But what I know is that I yearn for that touch
A soothing touch of caress
And a wild sensation of fulfillment.

~GEET HANDA~
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"We lie in each other's arms eyes shut and fingers open and all the colors of the world pass through our bodies like strings of fire."
(thank u so much cute-aly for this beautiful banner)
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins now😳)
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~MY OTHER WORK~
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
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Hello guys welcome to this new thread of FLAMES OF DESIRE...
Now this story is on a crucial phase where maaneet got married with all the ritual and elders blessing...and now It will be very intresting to see how geet copes up been mrs. khurana and most importantly with maan's temper...So stay tuned to see the celebration of their loveEmbarrassed...and ofcoures for flames of desire...
Pls shower ur comments n likes as u do always...and belive me i love reading them...
Pls add me if u want pm's...and stay tuned as i said flames of desire begins nowEmbarrassed...
And lastly BIG PAPPIES N JHAPPIES TO ALL MY READERS WHO WAITED PATIENTLY FOR THIS LONG...
love u lots,
varsha😊
(C) 2012 Varsha Khedekar, All Rights Reserved
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{Thank u so much swthrt (deepali aka sexy sasu mom) for this beautiful edit😳}
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congrates on new thread dear
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HUMARI ABSENCE MIEN NEW THREAD ...😲😲

BUHAT NA-INSAAFI HAI ...😡😡😡



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thank u so much for all the likes and comments...love u lots😊

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{Thank u so much SHRUTHE for this beautiful banner}
Me super duper happy sweeties...328 likes after such a long time...silent readers jaag rahe hai n me happy...pls yeh continue karo...then me also will be eager to give regular update😃
~PART-55~
~You are the fire that burns the passion within my soul~
"bas ho gaya jaan...now please dont cry" he wiped her tears, and cupped her cheeks...while she sadly pouted with her again watery hazels..
She twisted her lips and looked away from him, as a sudden teasing smile covered his lips..."I didn't knew my wify is such a cry baby"...maan smirked, and geet looked at him shocked with his remark..."mai rondu nahi hu samjhe aap" she folded her hands, giving him her cute threatening glare..while maan couldn't help but smile at her jhoota gussa..
He pulled her in his arms, and kissed on her nose...and geet instantly blushed, hiding herself in his soothing embrace...She forgot all about her pain, her longing, as maan cocooned her, caressed her, loved her with all his care...Her hazels sparkled, everytime their gaze met...while a glowing smile covered her lips, welcoming the enticing future ahead...
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Finally they reached khurana mansion and naintara wholeheartedly welcomed them by taking their aarti...Geet cutely kicked the rice filled pot and entered with her right foot ahead...Maan held her hand for support and they walked in, with all the cheering and clapping around...
The newly weded couple, were made to seek blessing from babaji...and later were asked to sit in the middle of the hall...while their friends and sibblings surrounded them with their teasing...
"so bhai finally shadi karke kaisa feel ho raha hai" vicky giggled, winking at maan...while all the devils started laughing at maan's embarrassed state...
"arre koi geet se bhi pucho...my baby should not feel left out" annie sat besides geet and deliberately pushed her closer to maan...While our cute little bride blushed, and looked down...sweetly whispering, "mujhe bohat acha lag raha hai"...and vulnerably scrunched closer to maan, as everyone gasped at her sweet response, then bursted into fits of laughter...
"awww my cutie pie" annie pulled her cheek, while maan couldn't stop himself from drooling over his cutely bold wife...
Everyone giggled and continued teasing them when dadi and naintara came their...asking maan and geet to complete the last set of rituals...
"dadi abhi aur kya baki hai" maan was hell irritated by now, as his devils siblings could not keep their mouth shut...He gave his threatening glare to all of them, then pleadingly looked at dadi...asking her to relieve him for tonight...
"maan beta we are almost done...bas ek aakhiri rasam baki hai" dadi gave him her understanding look and quickly took them to the sitting arrangement besides...She made them sit on the fluffy mattress and kept a kukum water thali infront of them...Geet giggled with excitement and leaned closer to maan, whispering..."aap gussa mat karo na...mujhe yeh game khelana hai" she gave him her angelic smile and maan sighed giving into his wify's demands...
Both the love birds where lost in their own sweet little world, not bothered about all the teasing around them...Annie cheekily looked at them and winked at vicky, gesturing him to join her teasing..."vicky tujhe pata hai...maine aisa suna hai ki dulha aur dulhan puri raat jaagate hai"...annie instantly blushed turning crimson red, boldly hinting everyone her naughty thoughts...Maan gulped down his saliva, thinking what his baby sister is upto and geet looked at him worriedly, slowly whispering..."mujhe nahi jagana puri raat" then looked down pouting, worried for her princess sleep...
"umm acha...aisa kya karte hai dono puri raat??" vicky slyly faked innocence, then deviliously grinned looking at maan's embarrassed yet angered face...
"ofcoures yeh games khelate hai...aur kya karenge" and as soon as everyone heard annie's last set of words, they bursted into fits of laughter, holding their stomach...
The game started and dadi asked maan and geet to search the ring in the red water...Geet hurried before maan and desperately started searching for the ring...Maan laughed looking at her excitement, and allowed her to win by just pretending to play along...Geet cutely struggled and everyone started cheering for her to win the game...but to her bad luck, without any efforts maan got the ring first and smirked, hiding it in his palm...Geet innocently cribbed and twisted her lips, as her all attempts were turning futile...She looked beside at maan and from his smirk, knew she lost the battle...
She noticeably leaned towards him and closer to his ear..."woh mujhe yeh game jitna hai...warna sab mujhe chidhayenge"...she cutely whispered and everyone naughtily giggled, looking at them openly cosying around...
"hmm" maan nodded and without getting noticed slided the ring into her hand...while geet brimmed with delight and grabbed it securely in her palm...She sweetly mouthed him thank u and maan sighed looking at her in amusement..."what will I do with her" he thought and waited for her to end the show, when felt her softly touching his palm...and tugging on his finger, under the water...He looked at her in confusion, when she again leaned over him and he moved back, feeling scared of her unusual demands..."geet sab dekh rahe hai" he tried putting some sense in her brain, as now dadi too naughtily shook her head...giving him her knowing smirk...While on the other side, poor baby girl, blinked her lashes and pouted looking at him backing away...
"woh...aap mera haath nahi pakadoge?" she innocently asked, as her filmy knowledge about this game said, that groom grabs bride's hand and she wriggles to break free...
Maan looked at her amused with her demands and grabbed her hand..."aur kuch" he asked, leaning closer and geet blushed...shaking her head in no...
Everyone cheered and clapped as geet shyly announced herself as winner...Dadi proudly kissed on geet's forehead and slightly pinched maan's ear, saying..."abhi se joru ka ghulam ban gaya"...and everyone smiled and congratulated geet for winning the game...Maan kept looking at her, admiring his angel...when his mobile buzzed and he excused himself to take the call...He looked at the caller id and found it from a private number..."hello" he spoke on his bluetooth, but the line went silent with just sound of heavy breath on the other side..."kaun hai" he repeated again, turning around, looking at his blushing geet...who was all surrounded with his devil sibling and friends...
Their gaze met and he naughtily smiled and blowed a kiss towards her, while our shy angel blushed and turned around hiding from his gaze...
"pagli hai" he audibly sighed and was about to disconnect the call, when heard a painfull moan followed by breaking of glass on the other side...
"who is there" he clutched the mobile more tightly, but the line went off...leaving behind the dreadful silence...
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No precap and dont be mad for the short update...one more is on its way😉...
But i want comments and likes for both ok😳
(C) 2013, Varsha Khedekar, All Rights Reserved.
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~NOTE~
Sorry sorry big wala sorry...I was about to update again...but running out of time...to format the content
Its a very long update and won't be able to do the editing part in half n hour...as i have to leave outstation in within 2 hours...Pls bear wid me, as running out of time...will update surely tommorow night or day after tommorow...woh bhi long wala...
Till then enjoy this short part...byeee miss me😊
And pms after i update next part...dont have time now
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