DANCE WITH ME-MG SS-UPDATED PT 09 PG 56 ON 27-04-14 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover


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4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part.maaeet married now .
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates siri...lovd itt a lottt...uff wo chudail sameera geet ko dhamki de rhi thi...iss liye geet ne maan ko mana kr diya tha...maan KM aa gaya...siri ye RK kya krrh h yaha?????
dadi ko pata chal gaya k maaneet ek dusre se pyaar krte h...maan ne geet ko forcefully show chodne se rok liya...
wah maja aa gaya geet ne kya thappad mara h uss chudail ko...again 30 marks...
haayeee maaneet's passionate kiss...aakhir geet ne apni feelings conffes kr di...oye ye kya maan ne tho shaadi hi kr li geet se...eagerly waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow maan and geet are married 😊so happy 😊
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago


RECAP

Geet sighed while he said abruptly,"But...!"

For she saw him sharply with curious eyes.

He said huskily,"I can romance with u!"

She blushed furiously while he said,"Jaan before we give social issue dance lets dance for that rumba dance!"

She blushed & was let down to the ground.Before they dance they cleaned the god's place & went inside Maan's room with full rituals.

Maan had took care of everything while he carried her inside his room she asked,"Maan were u waiting for my confession?"

Maan nodded yes to her while she asked further,"So that's why u had prepared all this for me?"

Maan said simply,"Jaan i was getting ready to kidnap u & marry u!"

She was shocked & said,"What?"

He said simply,"Yeah!"

He let her on the ground & turned on the mp3 player which played Kurbaan Huva song for which they danced passionately.After their passionate dance they slept each other in one bed & in each other's arms totally tired.

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PART 09



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Next morning Maan got up and saw Geet sleeping serenely inside his arms.He was fascinated how much she's comfortable with him and he swelled with pride as he got what he wished his beloved was sleeping peacefully inside his arms.He was half naked and her soft right palm was on his left chest.His heart skipped the beat seeing their position and slowly bent down and pecked her petal lips.Geet was shocked feeling his rough lips and snapped open her eyes.Her almond eyes widened with shock.He chuckled while she blushed seeing his half naked state.She was tempted to move her hands over his perfect physique greek god body.Maan sensed her turmoil and took her hands and kept on his perfect rock chest.She widened her eyes feeling the hard chest and that round nipples.A groan escaped from his rough lips and she withdrew her hand not wishing to tempt him.But he had his own will and he snaked his strong arm around her small petite waist and pulled her towards him banging her lower part to his lower part.She widened her eyes once again and blushed profusely as she had felt his hardness hardening.

Maan spoke shamelessly,"This i what i feel when u always tantalize me with ur sexy eyes and gorgeous body!"

Geet cudnt hear his shameless words and hid her face inside his chest making him more groan.Geet tried to get up but Maan pulled her back and said,"Jaan,aren't u forgetting something?"

Geet was puzzled and looked around her when he came close to her and whispered her in her ears,"My morning kiss!"

Geet blushed furiously hearing it and nodded no to him.Maan pouted and loosened his grip when she got up immediately.Maan pouted once again and was abt to speak when he felt the soft lips against his mouth.

Now it was his turn to get shocked as Geet had pecked his rough lips and ran screaming loudly,"I love u Maan!"

Maan saw her retreating back and chuckled.He went to the gym to work out.Maan started doing his tai-chi still thinking abt Geet only.How they met?How they got along and her talent which impressed him first.Then her innocence when she does the mistake and tries to argue then she would pout cutely.Her grumpiness and her childish acts which he enjoyed every bit of it.He felt alive these months when he met her.He not only made MSK to express but to accept his mistakes.He knew he had done mistake by leaving SD in that troubled times to pursue his career and he was guilty for that but he wanted to rectify his mistakes by taking the responsibilities and he had done by making Geet as his wife last night.His first responsibility in which he can love his partner equally like his career and nourish her.Give her all the happiness and give her all the respect which will be given by an partner by an lovable husband.Geet too was no less as when she was doing her work outs she was recalling the last night events.How she confessed her love to Maan and how he married her in KM in front of the god.She had an immense trust on Maan and today morning's little romance.Her life was worth living now with Maan with all the spices in life.

On that time Maan got a phone from his secretary and gave information related to Sameera and his dance competition.He groaned like an angry cat hearing the news and cut his phone.

On that time Geet entered and asked,"What's up?

Maan said,"Sameera's gonna enter to my competition as wild card and this time RK will be there with her!"

Geet stroked his spine softly and spoke soothingly,"Dont worry Jaan,they not gonna defeat us!"

Maan nodded and thought,"I hope so!"

Geet thought,"Dont worry Maan,am not gonna let u down!"Both Maaneet came to the studio to practise their steps.At the performance both Maaneet were confident.When they were announced then they came to stage and felt everything go mute.Both were lying on the floow wearing black and white costume.Geet wearing white costume and Maan black.This time the challenge was not to use their hands.Both Maaneet turned and got up on their feet and their hands are tied till their elbows.They had folded their hand which was tied till elbows.

Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Hai
Khote Par Sab Khara Bhala Ha
Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Hai
Khote Par Sab Khara Bhala Hai



Maan gave an evil smile and got up while Geet's was so soothing smile.Maan eye gestured that he's the king and he needs drugs.He provokes the mind to take drugs forcefully but Geet who is so soothing gives a pretty smile and says that drugs are unhealthy things it kills the man.But Maan wont listen to Geet and he still provokes and their starts the war between the good mind and bad mind.

Jooth Sach Ka Kya Pata Hai
Ek Gham Ek Badi Bala Hai

Chaal Dhaal Sab Ek Jaisi Saara

Kuch Hi Napa Tula Hai
Sach ke Sar Jab Dhua Uthe To
Jooth Aag Mein Jala Hua Hai



Maan says with evil smile that drugs gives u a stable mind the mind which wont have any two minds like bad mind and good mind but only one mind which asks for more drugs.This drugs are good for u it keeps ur mind under the rule of one mind.But Geet says with that pretty smile that if u have drugs then also u will have two minds.One mind says not to take it and another mind says to take it.So to be the slave of one mind u no need to take the drugs.Come to me u dont need to be act as slave as i dont want u to but if u listen to the bad mind then it will surely make u slave.

Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Hai
Khote Par Sab Khara Bhala Ha
Kala Hai To Kala Hoga Maut Ka Hi

Masala Hoga Chuna Kathar Zindagi

To Supari Jaisa Chala Hoga



Ignore Shampa and imagine Geet there.

Maan said smiling evilly drugs breaks all the relation which makes u feel burden.Drugs breaks all the burden which is imposed by the good mind.Dont listen to good mind just consume the drugs and go to ur own dream world.But Geet smiled prettily and soothingly and said that drugs complicates relations and makes it as burden.Drugs breaks all the relation which is imposing in front of u as burden.

Baap Ne Jana Nahin To Paapiyon Ne Paala Hoga
Thukk Se Nikal Gaya Tha Bhook Se Nikala Hoga
Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Hai
Khote Par Sab Khara Bhala Hai

At this Maan starts fighting with her and they both dance like that and he overpowers Geet by showing the gesture that she's slave and presses her under his feet.But Geet pushes him angrily and he gives evil smile as he had provoked her.



Maan says after having drugs no one will stop u and no one will break u so listen to me and have drugs.But Geet gives her smile and says softly that if u consume drugs then no one will stop u but no one will save u from the death.Death is the result if u consume drugs.On that time Maan opposes and once again starts warring with her.



Woh Jo Ab Kahin Nahin Hai

Uspe Bhi To Yakin Nahin Hai
Rehta Hai Jo Phalak Phalak Pe
Uska Ghar Bhi Zameen Nahin Hai
Akal Ka Khayal Agar Woh
Shakal Se Bhi Haseen Nahin Hai
Pehle Har Jagon Par Tha Woh
Suna Hai Ab Woh Kahin Nahin Hai



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Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Hai
Khote Par Sab Khara Bhala Hai
Bhala Bura Bura Bhala Khote Par Sab

Khara Bhala Hai Bhala
Bura Bura Bhala Khote Par Sab

Khara Bhala Hai

At once Geet wars with Maan defeats him and stops to provoke to consume drugs.This acts made both Maaneet earn 30 once again which made both Maaneet to dance with jo.But someone was there who was burning in jealousy and they were none other than RK and Sameera who was made their dance so poor in front of the judges and they got 25 marks.Geet smirked seeing Sameera as she was boiling in anger.But Sameera cant do anything to get full 30 marks as Maaneet.


PART 08

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
am glad you are coming back with this
gonna re read so as to remind myself what happened last
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating guys on Page 56
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part after a long time maaneet morning romance was cute and sam can never overpower them

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