DANCE WITH ME-MG SS-UPDATED PT 09 PG 56 ON 27-04-14 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Woww ..! Nice Concept . 😊

so MaaneeT Gonna dance ...

Will be waiting ..

Pls Do Pm when u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
behna love ittt.maaneet dance dekhne milegaa😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
congrates on new work dear
dont forget to pm me
awesome prologue
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
SIRI dii prolouge padh ke maja aa gaya
waiting for 1st update
so maan will dance with geet now
wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new story
haayee maan toh geet ki awaaz sunke hi flat ho gaya
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is going to pair up for dance competetion with Geet...

very interesting prologue...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue
awesome dear...
wow this is gonna be very interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Banner credit goes to Sonia KN it is so beautiful dear😃





PART 01

Maan feels some kind of tingling sensation hearing the sweet voice and the phone disconnects due to lack of range.Maan dint understand for a few seconds as he stood holding his mobile to his ear where he was shocked to hear a girl's voice so sweet & melodious that he dint know what to do.On that time he heard some commotion & saw that Sameera is following towards him so he too keeps his mobile in his back pocket & stands there smiling at her.Sameera came & smiled & asked,"Who was that?"Maan said feeling happy,"Hey am selected to the Dance With Me competition'my partner & choreographer phoned me now!"Sameera said,"Oh!"But she felt some jealousy for the girl who's gonna dance with Maan.









Maan Singh Khurana'famous actor & beautiful dancer'he was very friendly,humble,generous but very hot tempered when the time comes'his success has made him so proud that most of the people call him as egoist too..but he is so kind to everyone & Sameera was smitten by him.She wanted him to be hers always but Maan never thought her like that..he thought her as only friend..a close friend where he can share his sorrows & happiness.Sameera gave a forced smile & said,"Congratulations Maan'u r getting one step to climb towards ur success!"Maan was happy and he gave his Maan Singh Khurana pleasant smile & said,"Thank u Sameera!"Sameera said holding his hand,"Come lets go..we've a party to attend..to celebrate ur success!"Maan nodded & both went together.They entered the party venue & was both happy when they entered but after few hours of the entry Maan came outside bad tempered & had took his car driving it towards some lonely place.Maan was so bad tempered that he dint even notice that is he alone or not.













He wanted to pour out his emotions to his mother & started cursing Sameera & complaining to his mother.Sameera had proposed him in front of the others in her drunken state & when he refused it telling that she's only friend then she took the situation to her favor & forcefully made Maan to say yes to her proposal & here he was cursing the time & fate & was complaining seeing towards the sky where his mother always saw him twinkling in the universe as a star.On that time a soft giggle came from his behind & Maan turned towards the sound to see a girl standing in the darkness.Maan saw her & said angrily,"Do u think am funny Miss?Shove off Miss..i dont want to lose my temper with u!"She giggled once again & said,"I thought that i have problems bigger than this world is having but seeing u i can say that my problem is not bigger in front of your problem!"Maan said arrogantly,"Wow..thank u for the certificate now piss off!"That girl said,"Dont u want to solve the problem'its better to solve the problem rather than cursing it or regretting it!"














Maan lifted his head & nodded while said doubtfully but arrogantly too,"Why do i have to tell u the problem?U r a stranger to me..& its better u go home as it is dark..& these days girls are not safer at this time!"That girl was amazed which Maan saw in her body language as her face was fully in darkness & she also cant able to see his face as he too stood in darkness from her view.That girl said slowly,"But i dont know that my mind is saying to help u!"Maan was amazed this time & laughed sarcastically,"Miss'u r gonna help me?U dont even know abt me.What do u do if i try to harm u?Am a stranger to u!"Maan noticed a heart shaped bracelet in the moon light & her right hand which was milky white in color.Unknowingly he felt a magnetic pull seeing the heart shaped bracelet but he shoved off his thoughts.Maan thought seeing her stature,"I think she's beautiful..& her melodious voice..her giggle is so lovely'i have heard her voice somewhere!"













That girl said confidently,"I think u r an gentleman'u r not like those people who are B***ards who pounce on us lustfully!"Maan said sarcastically,"Here is the news to me..well people think me as a b*****d not a gentleman Miss so u better run away from me before i lose my control!"That girl said sweetly,"Look..am in biggest problem..but i think u r in the problem too just like me..so shall we work mutually?"Maan saw that girl just like an alien & thought,"What type of girl is she?She's asking a stranger to help..well she's also stranger to me..its better to consult her as my mind is blank..& i can help her as she's also blank just like me!"Maan said,"Ok!But tell me who are u?"That girl said,"I dont think the identity is allowed..as long as we wont meet each other ever after this conversation.Maan thought,"But why my senses are saying that am gonna meet u?"But said politely,"Ok'.solve my problem & then i will solve ur problem!"













That girl said,"Am an engineer in Architecture but professionally am a dancer'i have a very good life but am harassed in my work..becoz the boss of me always harrasses me to have sexual contact with me.Am fed up..i have to cope with world & in my home too.Am fed up..can u give me suggestions in this?"Maan took a deep breath & said,"Expose him to the world & be in safer side that u have to do this in secret so that u will be safe & ur dignity too & be friendly with him always & stab the knife behind his back so that he wont see ur face forever or know that u r behind all this!"Maan sesned her smile as he saw her face muscles stretch & she thanked him excitedly.That girl said appreciatively,"I knew u will give way to cope with this problem thank u!And u wanted me to help with ur problem..so here it is..do expose her plans in front of the world so that she cant come near u!"













Maan said sadly,"But she's a friend!I cant hurt my friends like that!Ur condition is different while mine is complicated!"That girl said,"Well then do tell her the reality that u wont love her & u think as a friend only.If she refuses to accept that then do teach her lesson in healthy way as she's ur friend & am sure she'll understand that she cant force anyone & tie forcefully in the relationship!"For a second Maan felt this plan as a futile but when he thought he too approved the plan & he too thanked her & both departed to their destiny.



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After this incident both Maan & that girl dint meet but they taught their respective persons a very good lesson & Sameera understood that she's tying Maan in forceful lesson & she left Maan & took the flight towards London.That was the last Maan saw Sameera.After one week of these incidents,Maan came to the Dance With Me reality show studio where he was about to meet Miss Geetanjali Handa his Choreographer.Maan dint know anything about her & he dint even know that he has met her.Yes she was the same girl who he talked when he was flustered due to Sameera's evil plans.Even Geet dint knew about Maan too & the person who she talked.She has solved her problem & today she was working under a woman called Savitri Devi Khurana as senior Architect who is a humble,generous & loving person.She was the one who appreciated her dancing & gave support to participate in Dance With Me competition.













Today Miss Geetanjali Handa stood inside their Rehersal room where she was waiting for Maan chewing gum.Maan slowly entered inside the room & saw the room was empty when he turned towards his right side to see a girl standing setting a MP3 player & was listening to the song.Maan was mesmerised seeing her.Her beauty was some what undescribable.Her almond eyes which were closed for song & her lush lips which was ranting the lyrics softly was somewhat mouth watering to Maan.Maan's mouth went dry seeing the epitome of beauty.Geet was slowly dancing listening to the music where she slowly twirled her body to the music.She was listening to the music Every Night In My Dreams I See You I feel You from Titanic.Maan saw her gracefulness'he thought she is some kind of angel where she needs wings.She was beautiful & her body bowed to the every lyrics of the song.Maan gawked at her.Geet who was circling her hip turned one round when she saw Maan.She gave a sweet smile to Maan which made him his breath caught in the throat.Geet slowly moved towards him taking a clean round smiling at him.



Please listen to the song from this link:-


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=UTRn_ysZwB8[/YOUTUBE]



Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you

That is how I know you go on.
Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on




Geet stretched her hand & whispered in Maan's ear,"Geetanjali Handa!"Maan who was mesmerised with his beauty said his name after some time,"Maan Singh Thurana!"Geet asked amused,"What?"Maan said,"Am mean Maan Singh Khurana!"He almost whispered inside her ear.Geet nodded & said gracefully bending,"May i have the pleasure?"Maan smirked,"Sure!"And he held her right hand and encircled his right hand around her small waist.Slowly he twirled her & in immediate he hoisted her in his arms.Geet was dancing casually with his partner but for Maan he was feeling that butterflies are fluttering inside his stomach.




Near'
Far'

Wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more'
You open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime

And never let go till we're gone
Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on





For the lyrics he have to give expression which he was not giving as his eyes always showed dark desire seeing Geet in his arms & twirling inside his arms.Geet said softly,"U need to give expressions Mr.Khurana!"Maan smirked,"Am a king expressions Miss handa!"Geet said confidently,"Then prove me Mr.Khurana!"Maan smirked & immediately he twirled & lifted her in his arms where Geet was enjoying the dance with him.Geet said,"U know Salsa?"Maan nodded & he started but Geet said,"U need to mix up Salsa & Rumba!"Maan asked stunned,"Rumba..i havent heard it!"Geet asked with wide eyed,"U havent?"Maan innocently nodded no to her.When Geet started to teach him to the song.






Near'
Far'

Wherever you are
I believe that
The heart does go on
Once more'
You open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

You're here
There's nothing I fear

And I know that
My heart will go on
We'll stay
Forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on





IGNORE SHAMPA HERE IN THESE PICS & PLEASE IMAGINE GEET IN HER PLACE'..



When Geet started to teach on that time Maan cant able to bare her sweet sweet innocent touches when he ended up dancing with her intimately to the song.When they ended on that time both Maaneet were panting not becoz of dance but the desires which were building inside them.Geet thought this as tiredness & sat and clutched her chest while Maan went far away from her try to avoid her so that he calm his desires.First time he felt like this to someone & he dint know that it was Geet.Maan knew that he was attracted towards the girl & tried to calm his desires towards her.




Precap-Maaneet's first performance on the stage Dance With Me'

Note-Please help me..can u give any song of hindi which will be intense & new where i can explain their performance along with lyrics & song.Need help in that case do suggest me any song which intense lyrically & professionally where i can show that both Maaneet's chemisty is ok in dance competition.

Note2-Sorry for giving a boring story above but i needed a grip to start the story so there it is'now starts the Dance With Me competition along with both Maaneet's love story!Do share ur views..how was it!

PROLOGUE

PART 02

FB link-https://www.facebook.com/notes/sriranjini-maaneetian/dance-with-me-updated-part-01/283354495135108

Blog link-https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/05/17/dance-with-me-mg-ss-updated-part-01/


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
bahut aacha ss h i loved it
both solving eachother prob.s
n now dancing wid each others
lolz geet work in khurana construction only 😆
wase dii ise boring kaheghe 😲 toh mast kisko kahege
prachi thinking
waiting for next
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice start so yeh dono apne problems ki solutions ek dusre se li hai and it worked. Now both met but still couldnt recognise eachother. Waiting for the next part.

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