DANCE WITH ME-MG SS-UPDATED PT 09 PG 56 ON 27-04-14 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
thoroughly enjoyed it...
its like visualizing maneet on the stage...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing performances.. of Maneet.. back-to-back.. Sam J... Hope nothing will happen to Geet.. Nice update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
geet was pondering overher feelings
ahaan she was jealous after all maan is only hers..how can she allow sam idiot to distract them lol
omg precap is scary hope maan comes in time n we get maahi moment
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Posted: 12 years ago







RECAP

Then Maan once again twirled her & she did split & he lifted her from her left thigh & Geet spread her hands loose just like she needs to support.On that time Maan kept her foot on the ground & she shook wobbly wobbly & held her head when Maan draped himself with red coat & came towards her & closed Geet's face & held her tightly sucking the blood with his vampire teeth & left her.When he was sucking he purposefully bit Geet's neck sharply & Geet shuddered feeling that her stomach is tightening.On that time in background the there was the sound of werewolf & Maan turned with ferocious expression with mixed hunger which was satisfied by Geet's blood & Geet fell on the floor.Maan went to his coffin & opened the lid & slept inside it closing the lid.

The sounds turned on around them & everyone applauded seeing their performance.Judges gave full on 30 marks for that too for which Maan was so happy.Maan was more happy seeing Geet had become just like the puppet where he was the master of her.But it was his wild thoughts which made him to manhandle her but still it got 30 performance.Everything was so good & time was running to its own accord & that time was Sameera who was seeing Geet out of jealousy.She wanted to hurt her as she had misbehaved with her throwing from the room.

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PART 05

It was blissful to Maan to see Geet dancing for the bharatanatyam rhythm where she was herself practising to keep beautiful steps for the song.Next week was the b'day of Rajesh Khanna who did his tributory in bollywood film industry & they're giving debut of that dancing to his songs in which he acted.So Geet was somewhat giving her best to get Maan prepared to get one whole 30 in next performance too!But Maan was getting distracted as she was slowly dancing for the Thillana-Raaga Brindavani-she was looking like a peacock dancing to the season of rain when it comes & when ti rains on that time the peacock dances gracefully.There was a grace in Geet's dance for the song.



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=vBMT71LD9N4[/YOUTUBE]



Maan was seeing Geet slowly slowly showing the dance steps & shaking her waist in front of him.Geet dint aware of Maan's gaze & she was in her own land.Maan saw her shaking behind slowly when his eyes darkened & came forward sthealthily.But on that time Sam came there & saw Maan's advances towards her.She was dancing to herself practising before she preach Maan.Sam dint like the way Maan was walking towards her.Sam stood in front of Maan to distract him but he was fixed his eyes towards Geet's direction.Sam saw how he walked away from her & her blood boiled.On that time Geet's grip loosened for some reason & she tripped to her feet & was abt to land on the ground but not anymore as she was captivated by him inside his embrace.She inhaled his masculine scent which was so beautiful.He smelled of cotton fabric with body wash with light cologne talc & her most favourite smell Maan.Geet panted feeling the strong muscular arm & their eye locked.






Chocolate brown eyes to almond eyes was so beautiful which showed so much passion & dark desires.Sam saw them & was stunned to see the body language of them.Sam saw them intently when she felt that passion is oozing from their every part of the body & it was not artificial but natural.Sam's nostrils flared with anger while both Maaneet's eyes were locked.Those pair of deep oceans were drowning each other in the dark desires.In a nanosecond Geet's heart tempted her to kiss his gorgeous sculpted M shaped lips.She moved her palm & cupped his bony right cheek which was hot due to the raging emotions which were brewing inside him.Geet felt a change in his eyes when she came into contact to his rough cheek.His eyes had turned into dark & was panting heavily.


















Geet saw his full sculpted M shaped lips & traced it from her right hand thumb which reached to his corner of his finely sculpted M shaped lips.Maan softly shuddered feeling her soft thumb & her pad rubbed his upper M shaped lip.His upper lips gave a shudder & slowly moved it rubbing it to her pad of her thumb.Geet's breath caught immediately but she saw his scorching gaze which had turned dark more.She rubbed the pad of her thumb on his lower lip & he closed his eyes feeling it.The touch was heavenly & it made to forget his surroundings.Maan opened his eyes feeling the lack of her warmth when she was blushing furiously withdrawing her hand from his lips.Maan lifted her soft chin from his long right fingers & slowly rubbed his lips to hers.When his lips came into contact of her petal ones on that time both gasped & it was the start of their kiss which was expressive.Maan nibbled her lips softly & licked it hungrily.Geet closed her almond eyes to relish his kiss while he kissed her passionately.He immediately entered with his tongue & plundered the treasure of geet's sweet mouth.She moaned while their tongue toyed & danced to the rhythm.Her hands moved & gripped his biceps while his hands snaked her small waist squeezing it softly.Her nails scratched to his biceps while he dug his fingers inside her waist flesh.















When they opened their eyes after a long passionate kiss they were shocked.Geet cant able to face him so dipped her head down in shame & ran from there.But Maan dint felt any shame as he had kissed his beloved..for whom he loved unconditionally & that was their first kiss too. But Sam was boiling in anger seeing Geet kiss Maan & she was getting jealous as she knew the behaviour of Maan.He always kept his co-actors & others as his friend but he never got comfortable with any of his c- actors but today he was getting comfortable & was kissing Geet in other way.Sam had guessed that he's in love with someone but she dint know that Geet was the girl.So in that blind jealousy she tried to hurt her.Geet was walking towards the lobby to get rid of incident from her mind which went on in the rehearsal room when Sam blocked her.
















Geet said,"Please Samji'leave me alone!"Geet was in verge of tears seeing the incident she dont even know herself that what was going on in her life when Sameera came to taunt her.Sameera said angrily,"How dare u throw me from that room?Am Maan's best friend & i have every right to be with him!"Geet said coolly,"U were distracting him that's why i threw u from the room.Sameera said angrily,"I thought i will be available here as Maan can be handled by me only.He has the habit of shouting & showering anger on others if the dance performance becomes lousy.But u..u handled him very well..how..how did u do it?I dont even know that this dance form exists but u made judges impressed & ur dance steps'how do u know all this when am senior to u & dont know anything abt this dance form.How?"On that time the chandelier which was dangling above Geet's head started to shake.Here Maan felt restless not seeing Geet back.He walked towards the lobby when on the way he saw both Geet & Sameera arguing.Maan frowned seeing Sameera's livid face & walked towards them when he saw that Sameera was talking to someone from her eye & it was repeatedly fixed upwards.Sameera instructed someone who was pulling that chandelier & it loosened & fell due to loose fittings.















Maan lifted his head to get that the chandelier was abt to fall on Geet's head.Maan immediately screamed,"Geet!"And he fell on her & both crawled from the falling Chandelier & the chandelier fell & broke into pieces.Sameera was shocked to see Maan there & came forward & showed her mock concern,"Geet are u alright?"On that time Maan turned & stod making Geet to stand from him & instantly he slapped Sameera.Sameera was shocked & asked with utmost outrage,"Why did u smacked me Maan?"Maan said angrily,"U do know the reason!"And he gave a utmost disgust face giving hint to her that he knows everything.Geet who was the silent spectator tried to patch up the two friends & said,"Oh its ok Maan..she was asking abt the dance steps which we're gonna practise for next dance & was also congratulating for getting full 30 in the previous performance too!Maan mocked Sameera,"Am glad she's appreciating ur talent Geet!"Sameera glared at Maan still holding her cheek when he dragged geet from her saying,"Let's go from here i want to ask u abt the previous steps'teach me correctly this time!"
















Geet nodded as she was distracted while Maan messaged Sameera,"Meet me after the practise at xyz place at 1800hrs!"Sameera was caught red handed now by Maan & she was shivering with fear.Here Maan dragged Geet & immediately pinned her to the rehearsal room door & asked with concern,"Are u ok?"His heart was beating frantically while Geet said keeping her palm on his cheek,"Am ok Maan!"Maan asked seeing her tip to toe,"U did get any scratch or sprain or wounded,tell me jaan!"Geet was amazed to see the dominant Maan & said,"Am ok Maan..dont worry!"Maan lifted her right knuckle & kissed it with concern & love & he kissed her forehead & said,"U r not gonna walk alone further.do u understand?"Geet protested,"But Maan..!"But her blabber was muted by his passionate lip lock where she melted & surrendered.




Precap-[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=0QcspJdkuA8[/YOUTUBE]



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PART 04

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved for next update
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sam caught maan slaping her fab



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Posted: 12 years ago
This was awesome
maaneet shared their first kiss sam is such a b*** but maan noted sam and saved geet also
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update ⭐️
hayeee maaneet first kiss 😳 ☺️
grrr this sam is such a b**** hw dare she want to hurt to geet 😡😡😡😡
thnk god maan saw evrything n saved geet 😊 n he did r8 by slapping sam 👏
maan worried abt geet n he dnt want her to walk alone frm nw on 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila yeh kya hogaya hai maneet first kiss☺️

sameer ki tho😡 now waiting for maan's treatment to sameera poor sam galat number dial kiya aur phas gayi😉😆

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