MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141) - Page 13

Originally posted by: honeygrape

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nice one...finally they speak, be it very few words...glad that they spoke...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Loved it..

This is what those years of being estranged did to them. The picturesque what that you write appeals to me a lot.

I loved these lines..

Little waves crashed over tattered stones; rumbling as they retreated back to their sea; back to their paradise

Those memories were precious stones which had turned sand in her little fists now. However hard she tried holding them, they would flow by and still remind her of the passed out time!

Thanks for updating!

Please continue soon...

What should I call you? your name seems too long? Frosty?😆.. pls leave me a name...😃

Little waves crashed over tattered stones; rumbling as they retreated back to their sea; back to their paradise

Those memories were precious stones which had turned sand in her little fists now. However hard she tried holding them, they would flow by and still remind her of the passed out time!

Originally posted by: yappingduck

that was beautiful... 👏

Originally posted by: love2_soma

geet n maan r back with each other...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: memyselfndI

Wow absolutly delightful! Pls continue!!!!

Originally posted by: aanya84

awesome update .simply love u🤗 . aww i feel so sad for maan (though i am angry on him for leaving geet for 8 years😡)bechara got a zor ka zatka by seeing geet in someone else arms.u described geets emotion brilliantly .i know when she saw maan she wanted to hug him tight but that one single ring must have stopped her doing soo😭.loved the way maaneet were admiring each other😳lets see how their coffee date proceeds . but seriously i just wanted to bang my head somewhere when maan asked geet for coffee yaar ek hug to banta tha(geet nahi kar sakti to atleast maan could have showed his possessive side na😆)

plzzz update soon me waiting 😃

thank u for the pm

love aanya🤗

(i agree with dqno1 give us some name to call u )

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Originally posted by: Shefali16

so they meet finaly...
its quite awkward for them...
dnt knw wt wud hapen nxt
bt one thng is the universal truth...there is no control over heart...
superb update...as always

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

nice update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear