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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

awww this geet is sooo innocent...loved the effect maan has on her...kaisa na hoti😳😳😳

yay!!!!!!! she spoke to him...(moi jumping up n down) 😃😃😃

woah finally even he said hiii atleast...😊 lovvvddd the update Avi 😊😊

song i havent heard this one...will hear it now

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

First of all thank you so so so so so much for giving us such long and cute,serene and beautiful chapter...Though,It was the longest chapter by far i guess but still when it ended, There was a craving to read more and more...Feeling was similar to the time when clock used to struck 10 of the night and screen used to freeze at Maan's or Geet's face at the end in GHSP...😊

I like this maaneet,I love them ,I adore them..and I want to hug both of them right now...and before them,I want to hug you tight for creating them and presenting them in such a beautiful way...🤗

There were many things in this chapter which straight went into my heart..Like Geet missing her grandpa and hopes he would be able to enjoy these wonders of Mother nature one day..Thought it was a one line from you but It has told alot about Geet's character especially her caring nature and maturity that she has gained before her age..Usually our parents think this way whenever their kids are not with them ...!!!

Then Maan buying a shawl for Dadi though It was actually for Geet as he knew she had no woollens with her ...His "Hmms" in reply to geet's questions...and his wish,"meri har dua tum ho geet.."..Despite being little cheesy,the context and situation in which these words were uttered by him,brought a silly grin on my face as something warm covered my heart.....

Sharmeen's presence and Naureen's magical lines were cherry on the top...😳

It was indeed Maan's best birthday,i guess...😆 and he got his birthday gift too..He got a chance to put that ear ring in her ear lobes..

Her face was flushed when he said "Hi" and My face was like this "😃😉",when he said "Hi"...!!!!

Chapter was "bliss" for a reader like me...LOVE you so much avi...🤗

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago