~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 76

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Posted: 11 years ago
aisa kya kiya ranjit ne jo maan usse baat nahi karta
is maan not his real son..?
excited that maan & geet will meet at his birthday party
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Posted: 11 years ago

updating so fast...

kya baath hai poo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ maangeet forever sam where is ur comment haa?? Huh
@ praff look I am back now
@ Dr.rose wooww gulabi thanks for comment. And yeac I marked you suggestion thanks for that
@ sam yaar u know tum meri nervousness door kardiya thanks really I am revealed after seeing your comment.
@ Harshitha hold on baby maaneet met in this update enjoy
@ geet_9713 woww another telugu nice meeting you. O born at Guntur only. Guntur mirchi hello
@ preeti 555 looking like ur hard core fan of SRK no SRK in this update hehe sorry
@ seewt sampa
wow you are back thanks for ur comment you make me feel reveal as I am hell nervous on last update thanks for that. I thought that you left this story as ididn't see ur comment welcome back
@ Ridhimaa you are looking for maaneet na they met now enjoy buddy.
@ cute tommy I don't want to expect more being new writer but I get 59 now I am happy yaar. You said right so after getting will update next one
@ im pooja verma hmmm confusion it was indeed suspense story soo thoda wait karlo maaneet met in this update enjoy.
@ sandy mg welcome sand I am waiting for you
@ Dumas yes Ranjith indeed very bad tempered you will know in next update fully
@ niveditha chand haha yes he is not there real son. What next wait and see buddy wink wink. SRK pe drool over mat karo ab read the update now lol
@ I dunno keep guessing buddy enjoy the suspense ride plz wait to know more
@ pari agarwal tum na kab suderogi chal hat mai tereko ans nahi dungi haha wait karle hehe wink wink. Rahul dad and mr. khurana were business parteners but rahul didn't joined with his dad as MR.khurana expected as he gives least interest to Rahul. There is no sected behind it will give details in next update chill cherry
@ golden moon yes they met janeman enjoy reading now
@ madhiri and priya 1408 yes maan was not there real son. Maaneet will meet enjoy the update
@ dreamy, tamanna, dhadakdhadak 22, Angel smily, sona rai, valli 3o, Tyro, Manikka, Tamanna.m, Sanjukta, silver love, Love 2 soma, Sri 91, maanshi, Billy ritu, Trishad cute, Mehak 173 thanks u soo much girls for ur precious comments.
@ satana where ru
@ ishitha where is ur comment babes
@ nov 2012 welcome to you buddy
@ jeev didi hehe thanks for suggestion will try for it I am reading update twice already will try to give good update
@ surish, Freya, thanks for ur comments on part 7
@ all I will feel happy if you guys give comment not one word plz I am taking my time to write update soo plz give some comments its request


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Posted: 11 years ago
ADHOORI ZINDAGI





Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingof me"
arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff

Thanks to all who given likes and comments. encourage me in the same way


part 9

(check page 22 for Replies I given to all)




"I did everything for this family reputation but see naina maa is blaming me maan is my son only god's gift for me I won't tolerate anyone saying he is not my son he is our son only he is my life naina but I won't accept what maa said I did mistake you will believe me right" asked Ranjith holding naina hands with anger as dadi said maan was not his son. Naina just nodded her head seeing his rage she was helpless now who can make him understand she prayed to god to make everything alright and side hugged him.
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"Maan you are sleeping like lag wake up man" said Amy trying to wake up maan who is sleeping peacefully. By now Mansee also woke up with his nonstop disturbance she glanced at maan rising her head slightly stared at his face for few minutes Amy again tried to wake him up she slapped him at ones on his cheeks making Amy to fall on floor for her sudden act screaming high maan woke up at last listening to the sound.
He laughs out loudly seeing Amy on floor who is busy giving glares to mansee and stool was still rolling on floor making loud sound. Ritzy enters the room listening sounds as she was passing by that room started laughing her head out but muffled seeing Amy facial expressions
"Care to give explanation Mansee for this and you both stop laughing like manics got it" asked Amy making maan and ritzy to laugh out again. Amy realized what he asked to Mansee for god sake she is patient yaar and you are asking for explanation from kid hats off to you thought Amy giving now what expression to maan and Ritzy.
Maan cell again vibrated making him to remember outer world he signaled ritzy to take mansee taking his mobile from side table ritzy tried to take her way mansee hides her face in maan's neck hugging him tight
Nodding her head in no. Maan signed reciprocated her hug but ritzy knows he have to leave her so she tried again but mansee snapped her hand wildly ritzy tried her cards at last.
"See mansee your maa is waiting for you come baby if you won't come she will go by leaving you so come with me now she brought lots of chocolates for you and toys also she wonaa play with you"
When ritzy saying all these mansee stared at her blankly she didn't understand what she was saying but mentioning word maa makes her smile widely. She jumped on her spreading her arms leaving maan ritzy assured through her eyes she will handle everything and left from there. Maan was seeing at ritzy in amaze at same time surprise he is about to ask some thing
"It's normal for doctors she did her duty only we have to lie also when it comes to patients" said Amy thoughtfully
"heyy cutki yes I am fine I am with Amy yaar calm down plz" said maan without a break after lifting the call listening aniee's outburst mean while Amy snatches the phone form him to get hold of situation
"Bhai now don't try to take excuses I know Armaan bhai was not here so tell me where are you" aniee continued without listening to him
"Beta aniee baba Armaan malik was here only and can you plz talk with normal voice my ears will bleed now" said Amy dramatically
"Oh my god today was really big day for me at last I listened to you voice bhai how are you when you came to India I missed you soo much" said aniee jumping with happiness smiled and naughtily as now she can do everything the way she wanted to
"Beta aniee pahele bathavo kya kaam hai you won't praise me without anything I am not dumb like dev now tell me"
("Beta aniee 1st tell me whats the matter you won't praise me without anything I am not dumb like dev now tell me")
Said Amy taking his seat aniee grinned ear to ear sheepishly
"Wow you are getting smart bhai not bad listen to me don't say anything just listen"
"Ok done you can take rest now when Amy is here so what to fear" and they hanged up
"Amy I know you are saving me but I am getting some negative vibrations seeing you listening to aniee silently from last 15 minutes" asked maan suspiciously
"It's between bro and sister talk you won't understand it forget it" said amy and continued "lets rock the party maanu lets go now" saying soo he dragged him from room
As their way out maan saw Ritzy was talking to some nurse he enquired about mansee
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"Ritzy how is she I mean she is not ready to leave me right is she sad or playing normally" asked maan with concerned face.
"Sir she was angry on me you know she got soo wild but it's all normal for me I tried to distract her by showing toys and all but she was searching for you only still" replied ritzy
"But I am not getting anything why she was attached to me that much when she met me few hours ago only" asked maan again with confused expressions
"Maan her state mind was difficult to understand she won't allow anyone near her but she was not ready to leave you up to now we all discussing the same only may be when mansee hugged you she felt protective her heart accepted it easily" said Dean joining with them and continued
"Maan don't forget what I said about Ranji plz take care of him ok" maan assured him with slight smile
"Amy inform to aniee I may not catch up party have some emergency" said dean in Amy ears while maan was busy talking with Ritzy about manse
"Maanu come yaar we have a lot things to catch up come fast" saying soo Amy dragged him maan followed him silently but still wondering what his friend up to now.
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It was already 9 pm aniee along with dev and meera went to Khurana mansion as preparations were also done. But silence welcomed them they straight away go to dadi room she was now reading geetha sitting in her room she was calm by now they signed in relief. Seeing trio she gives them warm smile chanting something closed geeta and kept aside.
"Dadi everything was done now get ready we have to leave within half an hour" said meera sitting beside dadi
"I am not feeling well meera you guys go and carryon and ha don't inform ranjith about it ok" said dadi meera was startled listening this as Dadi was one who pestered them to set everything for party but what happened to her.
she was unable to understand anything why dadi refusing to come and the mansion they decorated till now for party was new to her she didn't goes to that place until now she tried to know from aniee but aniee only told her what she know. Form now she understood it was there old mansion where aniee was born but aniee told her no one likes this place much so they shifted to the mansion they were living now she was not at convinced looking like aniee also don't know apart from that thought meera. She gives a questioning look to dev and aniee.
" dadi maa plz just get ready if you are not feeling well we all will be there na so plz go get ready for maan bhai" pleaded aniee she know for maan bhai dadi will do everything.
"Aniee beta using my tricks on me only ok you guys go I will come" said dadi making them smile widely
"Now you two listen to me carefully get ready fast don't take two hours the way you did for Rahul bro party ok" said dev eyeing both aniee and meera "
"Ok baba plz madam ji's get ready soon" pleaded dev seeing their glares left from there hurriedly to save him from them. Aniee and meera followed him to take revenge for making fun of them.
With lots of buckering from dev aniee and meera got ready and trio along with dadi maa left to party they informed to Ranjith and naina that they are going to chopra's party as per dadi instructions. But seeing their condition trio got tensed but dadi assured them Ranjith was tired because of office work and naina was sleepy so don't think much. Dadi maa knew by now Ranjith understand what they were doing but 1st she wants Ranjith get out of his stubborn behavior after what ever happened he was stuck up with their itself in name of family reputation they last soo precious things and also hapeness of this family because of that god please make everything all right after this day I want maan life to be filled by smile and colors prayed dadi while stepping out of mansion.



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"Amy we are going for disc only why you are behaving weirdly and this suit from where you got it" asked maan checking his dress in morrior which he wearied was given to him by Amy
"God cont he follow what I said why he have to ask soo many questions and that dev aniee I will see their end after party" self thought Amy
"I already said no questions you are looking perfect now" he checked time perfect 11.30pm
"Now come on maanu tie this around ur eyes as per bet you lose the game so you have to do what I said got it you are my slave now " said Amy handling him piece of cloth giving him loop sided smile
"What are you gone nuts at this time I have to go home now when we are back you started game by cheating on me you won that now all these" blasted maan on Amy with serious tone up to now he said nothing to his friend as he don't want to hurt him. He was soo disturbed from morning and his friend was testing his patience. Amy face was changed into sad and hurt expression
"Maanu I am sorry yaar I know I am friend for you only for name sake but not in true senses" saying soo he tried to left from there
"Is there anything left in your drama or shall we leave are yaar help me tie this please" said maan struggling to tie cloth around his eyes
"Maanu glycerin got wasted yaar you are forget it huh" said Amy placing glycerin bottle on table. (Thanks to Manish "Golden petan awards") maan smiled widely listening to Amy knowing his friend was back to himself was trying to make the atmosphere lighter
"Sorry Amy" said maan with guilt expression "maanu follow me silently" said aAmy helping maan they left to their destination maan just followed him not knowing what changes will be brought up after this night
"GK its perfect now shall we leave?" asked swetha after giving last touch up to geet.
"One sec swetha whats gng on tell me 1st you stormed in to mansion you urself talked with sheela saying ur taking me out but she told me that "show off" will come will take me out you know right I just hate him thanks to you I am safe from his lustful eyes" said geet finally taking deep breathe. The min swetha entered she is on her back get her ready at last

"GK no questions Rahul said to you right just follow me and yeah tie this no word from now until we reached our destination did you get that "show off" but he is Hotty for your sheela right" chuckled swetha making geet to get irritated.
"And if you wonna thank tehn thank Rahul not me for Rahul everything was possible he can do anything. Sheela was waiting for his one call from long time when he asked for you she just accepted without even listening anything" said Swetha

"Whatever lets go now I am feeling suffocated" said geet making her way out glancing at her maa's pic thinking "Its GK maa now talking not ur geet forgive me maa"
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The whole mansion looking like new bride with different flowers colorful lights and guests were waiting for the birthday boy eagerly along with dev, meera, dadi maa specially aniee for her GK no her "pari nain" . She already planned everything so all guests know some special one also coming so they were soo excited for their entry. All guests were youngsters only very close family friends all know maan as Khurana's big son and were Running KC at London but meeting him was a dream for them so they were very excited and was enjoying the party music.
The lights went off suddenly everybody started murmuring dev announced welcome the birthday boy and also birthday girl all of you taking mike. Maan was giving tough time to Amy with his questions while geet was least bothered for all these.The lights focused on them Amy was helping maan while Aniee helping geet the left both in middle of hall untied their blind folds at same time maan geet are facing to each other. The whole hall ecoched with clapping sounds the music was playing in full volume maan and geet both opened there eyes at same time but due to light effect again closed their eyes after few minutes opened there eyes met time stood stand still as their eyes met rose petals were showering on them as per Aniee's plan but looking like the god was blessing them with love by showering flowers.
prev: Part8 next.Part 10


Haha right time to stop ab socho what will be his reaction
2300 words I am trying not to give big update but helpless sorry will update next after getting 40 likes


dedicating this SS to trio

muskan di, aniee di and valli di

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

pooja


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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
maan maansi bond is too cute loved it
finally birthday party
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey pooja. i loved the update. u know what u r killing me with curiosity. coming to the update its really wonderful. mai to grinning like fool while reading. thank god. mere mumma ne mujhe pakda nahi. pakd liya tho sab kuch khatam. no if at all after that. my life will be hell.


waise who is this swetha. how she related to rahul and geet. what will be maaneet reaction after seeing each other. me wondering. plz update soon. kuch gadbhad mat karna yaar party ko. plz plz its my request.

Edited by maangeetforever - 11 years ago
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mansi is soo much attached to maan...😊
awesome update loved it continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
mansi n maan's bond loved it...
finally bday party
loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
u stopped at cliff
why do i feel like they both know each other
maanse is so attached to maan
is maanse some where related to maan

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