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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet


what i will became mad 😕

tu phele hi mad hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

😭 kaun bola yuje isa mai nahi hu

sob sob tum hai sirf tum hai

tum hi ho meri pagal ab tum hi ho huh😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome awesome update dear.loved it a lot.
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again I read both updates...

thanx for editing again for me...I am really happy and thankful to u...

so what I understand is that Geet was Geet Handa and may be Khurana Family knew her from childhood...now she is Geet Kapoor aka GK and in clutches of one LimeLight thirsty woman who is using her...

why can't Geet fight back to that lady...why didn't she slapped her, pushed her when she injected her...I am really feeling too much pain reading that...what is that in injection some drugs...may be she had made Geet dependent on those drugs that is why Geet can't retort back...I really want to kill that woman...

what happened in past that Maan has to leave for abroad...but what surprised me is the way Maan's family welcomed him...no body went airport to recieve him...what type of surprise they gave him...he was coming back he can give surprise with his sudden arrival not vice-versa... his father didn't meet him nor Maan greeted his father...they are so cold towards each other...is there any reason for this type of behavior...

Maan's past is somewhere related to Geet...Geet is seeing dreams for future incidents I think...and Maan's soul is experiencing same thing...

I have asked so many questions but don't think that u have to give answer immediately...I know I will get all answers slowly when story progresses...it is just I am expressing my self what I understand with the whole story until now...

thank u again...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




again I read both updates...

thanx for editing again for me...I am really happy and thankful to u...

so what I understand is that Geet was Geet Handa and may be Khurana Family knew her from childhood...now she is Geet Kapoor aka GK and in clutches of one LimeLight thirsty woman who is using her...

why can't Geet fight back to that lady...why didn't she slapped her, pushed her when she injected her...I am really feeling too much pain reading that...what is that in injection some drugs...may be she had made Geet dependent on those drugs that is why Geet can't retort back...I really want to kill that woman...

what happened in past that Maan has to leave for abroad...but what surprised me is the way Maan's family welcomed him...no body went airport to recieve him...what type of surprise they gave him...he was coming back he can give surprise with his sudden arrival not vice-versa... his father didn't meet him nor Maan greeted his father...they are so cold towards each other...is there any reason for this type of behavior...

Maan's past is somewhere related to Geet...Geet is seeing dreams for future incidents I think...and Maan's soul is experiencing same thing...

I have asked so many questions but don't think that u have to give answer immediately...I know I will get all answers slowly when story progresses...it is just I am expressing my self what I understand with the whole story until now...

thank u again...



hai thanks for reading it again

i did pruposefully as my likes are less

to hold my commentators

u almost touched all

and now wait and see 😉

there is alot to be revealed

be with me in this journey

and tuje ek badi hug bantha hai boss

so i big hug to u😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

ADHOORI ZINDAGI





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arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


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thanks u sooo much praff



Hey cherries how ru all. I know I was late this time also so I am giving a badawala update.

A Big thanks for warm welcome cherries i am soo happy here is next part Do let me know ur views.


PART 3


Dadimaa mai bathadethi hu aap ko maan bhai Sharma raheho
( dadimaa I will tell you bro is shying)
said aniee with teasing tone and winked at dev and meera.
She has to be like an angel drawn from heaven said aniee
She has to fill my bhai life with happiness said dev
She has to draw colors in my veer ji's life said meera
At last her eyes has to be like our little angel ge''''
Aniee's words were halted by dadimaa's glare. But it was enough for him to go into his beautiful memory that he was trying to forget.
At the same time aniee's mobile rang with the name "GK" flashing on the screen aniiee flew away saying will meet later bhai.

Annie's face was blooming with happiness as at last she got GK's call. She was not at piece from last night because GK didn't call her nor picked her call, she didn't get sleep also thinking about all possibilities. May be she gone for outdoor shooting, maybe she was busy with family or friends but these thoughts were going on was doing roller coaster in her mind. First time in her life she scolded herself for not asking anything about GK. If she asks also she won't answer anything will wisely change the topic. Daily they will talk on the phone but in true senses it was she who will bal bares all things about what's going on in her life about her family and all. But GK will listen to her sometimes laugh at her cute funny talks. Annie was hell confused at first why GK was just saying hmmm or will answer only her questions like did you take your lunch where are you etc. GK will only call or pick her call's only she will be at home but daily she will ask where are you to get faint smile from GK that's what she want. After some days Annie understood that GK is not that type girl whom, the world believes that she was rude and arrogant but why these came she didn't know.

She ran to her room just like a bird and thumped on the bed lifted the call that was buzzing from last few minutes. A warm tear escaped from her eyes
"Pari nain" is the only word that she can say after receiving the call with thudding heart due to her marathon run.


Annie loves geet allot she herself also don't know exactly why she loves her a lot more than her own family. And specially her eyes that attracted her most she felt she knows her from ages, "pari nain" is the word came to her mind after seeing her first time that's why she will call GK with that name only. As usual there was a dead silence prevailed on other side, Annie expected the same as it was the thing happening every time with GK. Only she knows how much she is missing GK but see she is not bothering about her at all she thought. More tears rolled down on Annie's eyes with that silence fearing her more, muffling her cry she tries to speak normal not wanting to worsen the situation more she asked
"Where are you pari nain?"

Annie expected GK at least will give her faint smile as always, but all in vain it was silence only she got worrying her more. But she can listen some faint sounds on other side but it was not loud enough to listen. She just closed her eyes to get hold on her thoughts that was fearing her like hell then she listen her "pari nain" heart breathe but why it was giving negative vibes for her she thought. But she signed in relief after listening to her heart beat smiled peacefully

"One day you will definitely kill me" said Annie with little bit sadness for not getting response
"Chutki if you again say any word anything about your life then there is no one worsens than me got it"
got instant reply from her "pari nain" none other than "Geet kapoor".






Geet herself was surprised with her sudden statement. Geet don't know what relation they were sharing but she cont tolerate if her chutki says anything of this sort. she will do ant thing for her, she didn't told anything about her life to chutki, she didn't want to burden her chutki with her painful life who was still kid by heart. She knows it was her bubbly and chirpy nature she was saying this to make her talk but if it was funny talk also she cont tolerate this. Her chutki is the one who will make her feel that she also a living human being and makes her smile.
With that Annie's all negative vibes and sadness was gone instantly. This time she wants to do bangra as she makes her talk at last she very well know Geet won't sit silent after listening to this dialogue . She pattered her back proudly and geet said chutki wow she was on cloud 9 now. UN knowingly geet also call Annie as chutki name only she even didn't tell geet that her bhai will call her like that only. May be that's why Annie loves her that much, her bhai was not with her all these time and about friends everyone tries to use her name and power no one gives her love and affection she was craving. Her family was very strict especially her father was very careful with her, in all these over protectiveness of family she feels empty and searched a friend and sister by herself she got "Geet" an angel in her life. But Annie won't hide anything form family with full happy mood she goes to her maa telling her she got friend in the form of GK. She is princess of family then how can her mother restrict her seeing her happy face, so hide it from her father Ranjith who won't obey for this.
Geet was a heroine and very talented but rude and arrogant was her tags the filmy life has given to her. And about gossips with everyone was full of swing so naina hide it from his father as she know he was man with traditions much concerns about family respect. Naina feared with his anger soo much but loves her daughter so she gives Annie an assurance that she will handle her dad. But when Annie was crying like kid for a friend her dad got hyper and starts arguing with naina for hiding that from him, at he didn't know who was that friend as he was least bothered about her name and etc naina and Annie signed in relief for that and thanked god several times.
"Chutki kuch tho bolo"
("Chutki speak something")
said geet breaking the silence at last

Annie beta time for tit for tat game starts now said to herself and grinned with her idea. So she kept num said nothing


"Chutki naraz ho kya?"
"Chutki are you angry?"
asked geet making baby face.

Wow "meri pari nain" will look soo cute na thought Annie but she wants to enjoy this game. It was very rare that geet will talk something she got the opportunity to listen to her minyfing seccion so she kept num.

"Tuje patha haina mai tume sirf ghar se call karthu hu aur kal raath"
("You know it right I will call you from home only and last night")
Geet words faded away as she reminds what that lady did to her bringing tears in her almond hazels.

"pari nain kya hua muje bathavo kisi ne much kiya kya ek bar kaho mai uski jaan thodunga nahi tho mera naam anvesha khurana nahi hai"
("pari nain what happen tell me did any one said anything just tell me ones I will kill that person if not my name is not anvesha khurana")
Geet smiled hole heartedly but it was faint seeing her chutki's sherny avatar. Aniee also smiled loudly listening her "pari nain" faint smile.

"Hogayana teri silent war ab bathado muje kya chal raha hai"
("So yours silent war finished now tell me what's going on")
said geet changing the topic wisely.

But Annie was not that much ignorant as everyone will think about her when it comes to her dear one's and she was matured enough to know that she was changing the topic. Not wanting to prolong the topic much that was bothering geet more she continued with her naughty talks
"Ha geet tuje patha haina aaj kya hua"
("Yes geet do you know what happened today")
She bites her lips for calling her as geet. Checked her room surroundings if anyone is there and signed in relief
"Annie thum bhina ek badi pagal aur kamina hai"
("Annie you are a big mad and stupid")
Annie cursed herself for doing this but it was loud enough to listen. Geet laughs out loudly this time shocking annie as she won't laugh this much with her naughty talks also. But aniee puts her all thoughts aside said
"Ha ha haso meri haal dekh kar tuje kitna hasi aaraha hai tum meri dost ya nahi huh"
("yes laugh watching my condidtion you are laughing at me you are y friend or not huh")
Said annie and continued
"aur tuje kya patha kisi ne ye naam sunliyatho meri baanbajadegi sab, batha nai kyun"
("and do you know if anyone listen to this name they will give me galiyas, don't know why")
Geet was not understanding anything why she cont take her name and chutki said she also don't know why.
"Chalo chaddo ye sab bathavo ab, bathaneki kuch nahi hai tho mai call raklunga"
("ok then leave it all tell me now, if there is nothing to say I will cut call")
said geet do distract her mind

"Nai isa mat karo aaj na"
("No don't do that today")
Annie go on with her nonstop chatter while geet listening to her.






While in the same palace maan was in his lavished room that was decorated with his choice, was trying to calm his mind which was clouded with thoughts of his little angel geet. He won't forgive his dad for what he did in the name of family pride and respect. He don't know his angel was alive or not, No it cont be he don't want to think in that line also. God will be heartless only if he did that, "God" he smiled for thinking about him which is good for nothing. He was trying to forget all these and after these many years he was here for his goal to search his angel. Don't know why he still believing that she was still there somewhere in this world.


He was child at that time so he was unable to fight back but this time he won't do that he will win this time. Her angel was just like a teddy for him she was cute and innocent. He brought drawing book from his bag and with soo much love staring at that which has his angel eyes pictured beautifully by himself only. Her eyes were just like "pari nain" he picturized in his childhood he just likes her soo much. But where is she he don't have any answers for his questions.


Breaking his thoughts his mom enters his room switching on the lamp brightening the room with aarthi thali in her hand. Maan instantly changes his face expressions and smiles at her maa.




"Beta abhi tak tum fresh nahi hua jake fresh hojavo I will arrange your breakfast"
Said naina seeing his plight she very well knows that he is trying his best to hide his reveries, she herself wants that only. Maan just nodded his head went to freshen up naina leaves the room not wanting to disturb him more.
Maan was staring at the mirror after his bath with deep thought, his cell buzzed taking a break for his thoughts and by seeing the id he pick it with hope.



( don't drool over him now update mai dyan de)


"Sir I got to know she was alive and was in India only but we are unable to locate where she is exactly"
A voice came from other side but it was enough for him to smile with hope.


"The information which you given was costs my life"
said maan." The detective understood what he meant, he was searching for her from soo many days. But everything about her was a mystery at last he came to know that she was in India only. Maan comes here in the search of her angel only. Maan tells him to take his pay from his London office.
"Sir my work not at finished I will search for her still" said that detective. He doesn't know what relation they were sharing but he knows she was very special for him. Maan cuts the call with that
The pain he was bearing and fears he has upto now gone instantly, Wow my angel was here in India his happiness has no bounds. How she will look now still with those doy shaped eyes with innocent smile he thought. Maan she was 3-5 years only when you both are together and you are may be 8-12 only. Now she will be soo matured and will be like no don't give comparison's she is very special for you right. Maan says to himself. He doesn't want give any name to their relation but he wants to meet her see her wants to play hide and seek with her. Man get some hold you were 23yrs now and you want to play with her she is not your toy got it his thoughts were going on.

Annie who came to call his bhai for breakfast after getting good lecture from her mom for her long time call admiring her bhai lovingly.
"Bhai come down every one waiting for you only" said Annie startling him with sudden entry
"By the way bhai you can admire yourself after getting ready also don't come down like this"
said Annie got glare from maan for making fun of him

"Bhai ek aur baath ab muje aap ki help nahi chahiye kyun ki "GK" call kiya muje"
("bro one more thing now I don't want your help because "GK" called me")
Said Annie happily but her face expression changed as she want help from her bhai this time only he can help him. Gives a funny smile to maan. Maan understood that her chutki was going to do something
"Bhai tomorrow is "GK" birthday I want to meet her this time at any cost please help me" said Annie


"Aur humari bade potha birthday bhi kal hi hai"
("And our grandson birthday also tomorrow only")
said dadi who entered the room with Maan's fav black coffee
This time Annie was gone as she forgets her bhai birthday she was praying to god to save her now how can she forgets his bhai birthday and "pari nain" birthday also tomorrow only. Suddenly her devil mind got some idea he pattered her back in proud.



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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god me first

first let me do bhanghra🥳

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Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
will read later ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update yaar...
loved it...
geet calls annie as chutki...chutki is on cloud nine hearing chutki from geet ...only her bahi call her like that now geet...
chutki calls geet as pari nain...
geet and annie bond is so sweet...
here maan thinking about his angel...his pari nain...he also gave the same name to geet when he was small...
but whappend in past that..??
he got call from detective and he got to know about his angel who is living in india...
chutki wants to meet geet so that she wants help from maan...
wow maan and geet shares same bitrth day date...
i hope maan will accompain annie to meet geet ...then he will find his pari nain ...


waiting for the next part...

my friend i will read part 2 afterwards...and see what changes u have made in that part...


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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ud
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