MG OS {DIL KI DARKAN} [NELU]

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... 😊MY 2ND OS😊...
[MANEET]= 😳{
DIL KI DHARKAN }😳


MAAN: MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUCTION... SOFT HEARTED PERSON WITH ONLY FAMILY ND GEET [LOVE OF HER LIFE BT DIDN'T TELL HER ]... IN OFFICE HIGH TEMMER ND ARROGENT...

GEET: SWEET GIRL... MAAN'S SECRATARY... LOVE HIM BT DON'T WANT 2 TELL HER...


GEET: SIR, yyad hai uss din golpape khane main jite thi toh apne wada kiya tha main jab bhi apse kuch mangunge to mujhe doge, yaad hai???

maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA apne wada kabhi nahi bhulta... kya chaiye tumhe????

geet: kal sunday, toh agar aap free ho to mujhe aap ka kalka din chahiye...

maan: kya? ...ok...

geet: thnk u sir...

maan: mai tumhe kal subhe pick karunga ok??

geet: no sir... main aapko phn karke bataunge apko kaha anna hai, aap waha aa jana!!!

maan: kyun?? hum sath nahi ja rahe...

geet: nahi oh mujhe kuch kaam hai...

maan : thik hai...

geet: ok main abhi ghar jau?

maan: thik hai... dadima se kehna mujhe thora late hoge
...

geet: thik hai.. bye

maan: bye..

SUNDAY MORNING IN OUTHOUSE...

GEET MESSAGING MAAN: xyz hill... at 10 am... see u soon

IN KM


maan repling geet: ok...

AT 10AM XYZ HILL, FULL SILENT PLACE...:::

GEET: HMMM!! YEH JAGA SAHE RAHE GE BAAT KARNE KE LIYE...

MAAN: KESE BAAT GEET???
GEET: AAP AA GAYE CHLIYE, AAIYE BATIYE...

BOTH SEAT IN A BENCE...

GEET HUGS MAAN... :o

MAAN WAS SOCKED: KYA HUA GEET...??

GEET: KUCH MAAT KAHIYE... AAJ mera din hai, so main jo chahe karunge... ok???

maan: bt geet baat kya hai???

geet: kuch nahi... apke dil ki dharkan sun rahe hu... kitne tezz chalte ha aapki darkan, hai na???

maan: sabke aase hi chalte hai..

geet: nahi sabki nahi hote {crying}

maan felt that: kya hua tum ro kyun rahe ho??? bolo geet kya baat hai...

geet: mujhe apse wada chaiye... doge na??

maan: kesa wada??
geet: aap pore 2 month mere sath rahenge... har din,har pal, har
second, rahenge na???

maan: main tumhare sath pure zindagi reh sakta hu... aur rahunga bhi

geet: par main nahi reh sakte...

maan: kyun geet?? kya tum mere pass nahi reh na chahte??

geet: nahi maan {without office she always call him maan} apke sath kon nahi rehna chahe ga??

maan: toh phir sirf 2 months kyun????

geet: inke pass jinne ke maksad nahi hota woh kaha jiyada din ji pate hai??
maan: saAf saaf batoa baat kya hai...

g: main annath hu, koi family nahi hai, koi dost nahi apke siwa, apke outhouse main rehte
hu.. koi maksad nhi hai jinne ke liye... thore din pehle doctor ke pass gaye the,
unho ne kaha merA dil bohot kamzor hai.. mujhe jinne ki koi waja agar nahi mile
to 2 months coma main chale jaunge yeh phir maar jaunge... {crying}

M: geet ye kesa behuda mazak kar rahe ho??? tumhe main kabhi kuch nahi ho dunga... kabhi nahi...

g: aab kuch nahi ho sakta...

m: tumhe jinne ki waja chahiye he na???
THIK HAI... ABSE TUM MERE LIYE JIOGE.. MAAN KE LIYA...
G: NAHI MAAN... AASA NAHI HO SAKTA... MAIN apko aur pareshani nahi de sakte... aap hi mere zindagi main iss liye maine
apko yeh baat bataye.. toh main 2 months kushi se rehna chahte hu apke sath...

m: TUM ZINDAGI BHAR KHUSH RAHOGE, MERE SATH.. AAB chalo..
g:kaha maan??
m:doc ke pass??

g: nahi maan...
m: mene tumse pucha nahi hai.. it;s an order... gari main batho...

both was silent in drive... bt maan was fully brocken inside.. he wants his geet always safe
he can do anything 4 geet...
maan thought: main dunga tumhe zinne ki waza, tumhe mere liye zinna hi hoga...

IN HOSPITAL...
BOTH IN DOC'S CABIN...
DOC CHECK GEET... & TELLS THAT SHE REALLY NEED SOME MOTIVE TO SURVIVE..
SHE ALSO GIVE SOME MEDICINE TO GEET...

BOTH WENT TO HOME... MAAN giveS medicine TO GEET...
g:kyun kar rahe ho aap ye sab??? kuch nahu hoga isse kuch nahi... kyun mere liye apna
waqt barbad kar rahe hain?? kyun ?? kya lagte hu main apke??? boliye??

M: TUM MERE HONE WALI PATNI HO... WOULD BE MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
2 DIN BAAD HUMARE SADI HAIN...
Geet was in socked: kya??? main nahi barbad kar sakte apke life,, kabhi nahi...
NW MAAN WAS GETTING ANGRY: kyun?? kon lagta hu tumhara? kyun mere liye inta socte ho??
kis riste se mere itni fiqar karte ho ?? BOLO??

G: APSE PYAR KARTE HU.. NAHI DEKH SAKTE APKO PARESANI MAIN... SAMJHE AAP...??

M: TOH MAIN KYA APNE PYAR KO TAKLIF MAIN DEKH PAUNGA?? BOLO?? TUMHE MERE LIYE JINNA HI HOGA
... HUMRE LIYE... HUMARE RISTE KE LIYE...DADI KE LIYE... HUMARE FAMILY KE LIYE... JIYO GE
NA?? BOLO??

GEET HUGS MAAN:{CRYING} : MAIN ZINNA CHAHTE HU APKE SATH...
...


MAAN: .

Kabhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh poochta
Main tere kaabil bhi hoon kya
Itna toh mujhe hai maloom mil ke tujhe
Behtar main insaan bann gaya
Thoda thoda, tujhse seekha
Pyaar karne ka tareeka
Dil ke khuda ki mujhpe inaayat hai tu
I love you GEET... Will u marry me???
G: i love yoo tooo MAAN... I WANT 2 MARRY YOU!!

M: MAIN KAL dadi se baat karta hu..
G: thnks MAAN for eveything that u give me...
M: SHADI KE BAAD SATH MAIN SABKE LIYE KEH DENA, THIK HAI?? {SMILING}

THE BEAUTIFUL DREAM COME TRUE...

THE 2MONTHS WAS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENT OF THEIR LIFE... THE BEST PART OF MANEET'S LIFE



.... MAAN ND GEET GOING TO CLINIC FOR CHECK-UP...
BT NOT FOR CHECK HER HEART... THEY WENT 2 COLLECT REPORTS OF PERGNENCY TEST...

PAST 1 MONTHS AGO...
HOSPITAL:
MAAN IN DOC'S CABIN
DOC:MR. KHURANA, MAINE PEHLE KAHA THA JINEE KI WAJA GEET KI LIFE VOHOT JARURI HAI ... SO i must say, aap ne geet ki zindagi badal de.. uss ki life main
itna pyar diya ke woh aab jina chahte hai ... USKE DIL KI DARKAN AAB NORMAL HO RAHE HAI..
.
. [ Me thinking arre doctor usse hum asse hi thore DHAK DHAK BOLTE HAI]

Maan: aab aur koi problen\m to nahi hoge doc???

doc: nahi mr.khurana aab sirf thore therapy ki jarurat hoge...
M: OK!! doc main geet ko kaal se therapy ke liye le aaunga... \
D: OK!! HUM KAL MILTE HAI...

MANEET WAS VERY HAPPY... THEY WENT FOR THERAPY REGULARLY...
SO GEET WAS GETTING WELL...😆 ,,, (THEY ALSO TAKE THEIR MARRIAGE TO NEXT STEP😳)

... PAST ENDS...

PRESENT IN DOC'S CABIN
DOC: SO CONGRATIONS MR & MRS KHURANA... PARTY KAB DE RAHE HAI AAP??
MAAN😊: KAL HAIN PARTY, AUR APKO to jarur aana hi hoga
GEET: JII DOC !! AAB KO HUM PEHLE INVITE KAR RAHE HAI...

DOC: OKK BABA MAIN JARUR AUNGE... THN APKO ENJOY KIJIYE, ABHI mujhe jana hoga... see u both soon...
MANEET LEFT ND GO KM...
EVER1 is evey happy for maneet... they all start work 4 party...

IN PARTY:
GEET: Thank you so much MAAN!!! TODAY u complete me... i'M sooo Happy...
MAAN: nahi geet ...mujhe tumhe thnx kehna chahiye... tum mujhe itne khushi de hain ki main tumhe bata hii nahi sakta...
BOTH HUGS EACH OTHER...😃

IN thE whole 9 months... MAAN TAKE FULL CARE OF GEET
HE made pani-puri.tikki, chats stole in their house for HIS GEET...

GEET BLEESED WITH A BABY BOY...
MAAN WAS IN seventh heaven today...😳
both named him "MANEET"...

THE BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY OF MANEET'S LIFE STARTS WITH THEIR CUTE BABY MANEET...😉
NDTHE END OF MY OS...

ME: mujhe lagta hai yeh part itna acha nahi tha bt main next time jarur aur aacha likhunge...😊
plzz like & cooment if u want😛... hope itna bhi bura nahi likhte main...😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start would like u to continue nilu
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thnks guys for ur comments! Main jarur continue karunge! I'm so glad that u all liked it!
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its cute os...continue it nilu
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superb
continue it dear😊
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MG OS :{ DIL KI DARKAN}
PART 2 NW JOINT WITH PART 1... CHECK IT GUYSS...
LIKE IF U WANT😊 ND COMMENT PLZ...😃
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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aersome os
wants to know what will happen to geet after 2 months

please update soon
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beautiful story..tk you..pls keep writing..👏👏👏
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A LOVELY SWEET OS NELU.U SHOULD WRITE MORE DEAR...

GOOD JOB.KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thnk u so much guys!! Ur comments means alot 2 me!

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