If Only You Saw Me (10) - Page 74

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Mera bhi exactly yehi reaction tha! 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

I liked the cross examination Geet put her mother through about staying at Maan's house. It shows that the mother and daughter are close enough that every thing is out in the open. I liked what her mother said about trusting her daughter. Reminded me of my mom, there.

Mothers and daughters usually have a camaraderie like this, don't they?

So he wants to meet on Friday. Date is getting as postponed as the updates... hmmm, who could be behind this saazish, I wonder?

Hmm... Who could the culprit be? 😆

Maan thinking about and then rejecting Ranbir and Ayush to ask about the date. Yay! I like a person who makes the effort himself not based on what his friends say.

Me too!
Green eyed monster makes an appearance... taaliyan...waah, waah Maan such attention to detail... he is only supposed to hold her hand once? ha ha... so J.. reminds me of someone...lol. Ayush ka badla...ROFL

Wohi toh! Itni si baat pe itna J! 😆

Study session reminded me of my college days... ugh! Timing limits on everything..

As a matter of fact, I never had trouble with timings. 😆

Anaya and Ayush romantic dance and pulling Maan and Geet in was providence..

About the dance... what to say.. it was superb. Loved all the steps, passionate, possessive, like true lovers dancing together. The embarassment later, so typical after a first dance... haiyee marjawaan... so lovely, you took me back..

Glad you liked it! And I'm relieved to get firsthand experience that I didn't overdo the embarrassment part. 😆

Pillowji ko meri taraf se jhappis..

I was like 'what pillow? Maan ka pillow?' And then realised later. Actually, there was no pillow rehearsal. 😆

Poor Maan all gloomy and complaining about the date delays. Haan haan Maan I am with you. That's the way I am feeling too..

Why don't you two sit together and sulk for a while? Dil halka ho jayega! 😆

Dressing room --- yeah! you did it!!! Thanks for the compensation scene! Next compensation RTM! Loved it, their reactions. Wish I was around to see... Was his body this attractive in my dreams? Where does the author get inspiration for such profound lines? ROFL...Where I ask you?🤣

Why am I supposed to give another compensation scene? 😲

Pata nahin. Can't say anything about the author's inspiration. 😆

The passage scene was obviously my favorite.. Maan's overactive imagination or not😉, it was a mega romantic scene. Wonderfully worded, I could see all the steps they took. LOVED IT.

I got very very teased by my sister for writing that scene! She was saying 'I thought you write PG-5, How did you raise your level to PG-12?!'

You made us wait for it and I am glad. It was certainly worth the wait...😃

Phew! Shukar hai!

Thanks for updating...🤗

Thank you for being so patient! 🤗

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Awesome update

Originally posted by: HansaN

Nice

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

lovely update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

Originally posted by: divya22

woo superb part...
well i hope ki theres no restriction on love marriages in geets house...
loved maaneets dance n dat triall room scene...
n last part was awesome...
oh got he nearly confessed...
ab toh dono rast bhar nai soyenge...
n yeh i wa.ted to ask ki hw old dey both are.????.. as u mentioned dat they r in final year so i guess they must be 23 or nearby...
n secondly i wanted to ask ki whr they live... in one of d part maan had mentioned ki dey r away fron their motherland... so dat means they live in sum other country???

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Ending was mast maan thinking he is hallucinating geet 😆. No date atleast they got to dance together 😳. N d trail room scene 😳 too cute.very beautiful sweet n long update superb.
Plz cont soon 😃

Originally posted by: saf24

Awesome update. I loved the detail you have put into each scene that was written in this update. Beautifully written.Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Loved the last part and looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as always.