FF - Guzaarish - Blog Link to Part 11, 12/ Pg 83, 84: 2 May - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY PART
LOVED THE CHASE BETWEEN GEET AND BROWNIE
WILL THEY BECOME FRIENDS
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
the fight between geet and brownie😊
poor brownie got scared of geet
the part where maan telling his feelings abt his mishty to brownie was superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye di whenever i read this story main kisi aur happy wala duniya mein chali jaati hoon 😆


haye maan and brownie ki bonding i am loving it so much 😉 and the chase of geet and brownie its like a tom and jerry wala scene 😆


but y do i feel a negative vibes of maan leaving as a heart broken man??😭 aise hone mat dena please geet ki high head attitude se toh lagta hai aisa hoga 😭

maan speaking his feelings to brownie haye 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, cute beautiful amazing part
loved it
maan's love geet is increasing and how sweetly he confessed
loved the convo with browny so cute
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
oh geet again disturb there play nd brownie takes revenge frm her
luv the bonding b/w brownie nd maan
maan confess his love in front of brownie nd now he says that it's their secret
i think geet nd brownie will become frnds
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update⭐️
aww geet feeling sad n annie cheering her up😃
ooppsss geet make brownie angry n now revenge time 😆
brownie stole geet bunny n came in maan room n geet angry n giving galiyan 😆
maan shocked n thinking that geet was telling hin all that😲😆
oohhh nooo brownie tore geet bunny
hayeee maan called geet mishty 😳
aila maan telling brownie abt his mishty n how much he loves her 😆😳
hehe secret between maan n brownie 🤣
hmm maan telling brownie to say srry again to geet soo sweet😳
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
M in love with this ff.it was really a cutie ud.aww i luv Brownie.Maan nd Brownie's talk was really lovely.Maan confessed to Brownie.amazing.bt Brownie was bad to tore Geet's bunny.bt i love him.plz plz next update jaldi dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Geet running behind brownie...to kill him as he destroyed her bunny...maan consling geet...he said mishty...how sweet
Maan confessed his feelings about his misthy with brownie...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved the crazy and ferocious geet
maan who is calm shocked to see geet like this
running behind his dog brownie
maan makes geet understand and opens his heart to brownie
want to see more explosive geet
I have laughed so much reading this F/F
please continue and update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey di I'm falling in love wid this new FF of urs it sooo beautiful,warm & refreshing geet royi apne parents ke jaane par aur phir how cute ke annie was there to come & speak to her to make her feel better aur phir annie telling her ke she shuld be frnds wid brownie aur rabby aur geet ka reaction was amazing di aur phir annie telling her ke both of them are a part of khurana family aur especially maan bhai was cute aur phir geet wanting to know abt khurana family aur she started to know abt maan aur geet ka pehle sentense abt maan ke he's weird made annie angry di there's something jiski wajah se sab are sensitive towards maan di mujhe darr lag raha hai ke kahi hamare maan sick to nahi as in maybe heart disease kyunki di aapke banner main bhi heartbeats aati hai na me only thinking di aur phir jab geet ne kaha ke have heard he's a business tycoon lekin having dog & rabbit as pets is weird aur phir annie ka hasna aur geet ka uspar chillane ki wajah se rabby darr gaya aur brownie ko gussa aya (not gud for geet)😉 aur di annie ka answer was just perfect when she says to the outer world he's THE BUSINESS TYCOON lekin at home to his lovedones he's only maan aur yeh pets are a part of our family aur di sachi animals bhi sensitive hote jab unhe pata chle ka hamara pyaar share ho raha hai brownie actually starved for 2days when he saw ke maan was giving more attention to rabby but now both brownie aur rabby are BFF aur annie warning geet ke brownie apna revenge liye bagair chup nahi bathega aur di brownie ne bhi sherni ko lalkar diya uska fav bunny pakad liya aur geet k behadd gussa aa gaya aur dono chale maan ke room main ufff aur jab geet pyare words use kar rahi thi brownie ke liye to maan ko laga ke woh uske liye hai was hilarious 😆 aur jab geet buhut gusse main baatain kar rahi thi maan se to brownie really got scared aur geet ka bunny to kharab hogaya hayee ye kya ho gaya aur geet to aag bagula ho gayi thi aur maan calmed her down by putting his hand on her cheeks aur she did calm down aur maan bedhiyaani main geet ko mishty bolgaya but later covered it too aur promised her ke he'll get her a new bunny aur tht brownie is really sorry for his deed aur di maan ne brownie ko apne dil ki baat batadi awww di tht was sooo perfect aur di brownie did not like it hoping ke geet aur brownie can become BFF tooo di but me liking precap more brownie ka sorry geet ko hope she accepts it aur di loving this story aur hamesha ki tarah I know di this FF will be a BLOCKBUSTER like our loves L&H aur DL,DHL aur Destiny ki tarah(ameen) waiting for the story to progress further di
LOVE & ADORE U eversecond of my LIFE meri pyari di ❤️

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