maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb n beautiful...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely poems...

waiting fr d nxt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wah wah
wah wah
kya baat hai. all the poems were mind blowing
good girl and bad boy wali samajh me aayi baaki do nahin so
As i promised I m here with my comment for your poems

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OMG the poem u wrote for Good Girl Bad Boy cracked me up...

very good...

brilliant job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful works.all r awsme.I like all of them specialy poem 45.lovly work.thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahaha G2B2
poem s so funny ...loved it


loved My Teacher n Milan poem too

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow amazing poems
superb
love all of dem
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM : 39


AGAIN FOR MY TEACHER]
BUT IT'S FROM
MAAN SIDE


logo ki badua main , kaha woh dum tha
jo hame maar de !

yeh to aah thi mere yaar ki ,
jo hum ek pal main haar gaye !

kiya hai pyaar , to nibhaana bhi padegaa
yeh woh dard hai ,
jo duniya se kya ,
khud se bhi chupaana padgaaa !

tu jaan maang leti ,
to accha tha !
tune to meri wafaaye maang li !
naam dekar ,
mujhe bewafa ka !
mujh se mei khudai maang li !

nafrat tujhse to kar sakte nahi
par ab ,
mohabAT khud se bhi hum karege nahi !
yeh sazaa hai tujhe pyaar kane ki
ke zinda hai bas naam ke ,
kyoki ab markar bhi hum mare nahi !



This one i liked more...
perfectly depicts maan's {arjun's} emotion in the story...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM NO _ 45



ITS FOR my teacher
ff by amour_reet




kyu lag raha hai aisa
ke sab kuch tut kar bhi
kuch judaa hua baaki hai

aur

aur sab kuch
jodne ke liye
abhi bhi kuch
tutna baaki hai

kuch yu chali hawaa
ke sab kuch bikhar gaya
jo banaaya tha
maine apne pyaar ka mahal
woh sukhe patto sa bikhar gaya


unke bhikare hue sapno ke
chott yu lAGI mujhe
ke dekha jab aaiyna
to aayina bhi mujhe dekh kar
mujhe pahchanne se mukar gaya

Lovely dear...!!!
i loved these lines most...
aur sab kuch
jodne ke liye
abhi bhi kuch
tutna baaki hai

really wonderful...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poem no 44
Hehehe...very funny poem di...very well written...

Poem no 45
Lovely poem di...
Very emotional...

Part 46
Ufff...mind blowinggg...
Love the way u described love by various ways...
Superbbb...
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Posted: 12 years ago

yes dear
abhi aayi😉

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