MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 50

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i always cried after reading ur updates
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wow diii soo beautiful banner me loved it n u too 😊❤️
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posting dii 😊
soo ready to cry
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Part 10


Past

Geet was sacred how she can go against his wish but she have to do it today for her child, geet was in her thought when heard maan harsh voice

My decision is final." n was leaving from there when geet ran toward him n hold his wrist n placed his hand on her tummy n said "maan ji I don't know y u hate me, but this is also ur part, this is your child too na then y u dont want it, I promise u i won't trouble u life tym, but plzz don't snatch my only happiness of life, if u don't like my face then promise won't show that too par it's our baby, don't kill our child , I want to give birth to it" she said with tears n with hopeful eyes.

"I said no means no, can't u understand in simple language geet"

"1st tym after marriage he called me with my name its looks so perfect from his mouth" geet st

"Ya u have decided to do whatever u want, hmm how can I forgot from this child u want to take my all money by giving it the name of Khurana."

"How can u think like this maan ji, I just wanted to have someone mine only whom I can love" she was breaking min by min

Maan smiled evily n said "I thought u have lil brain, but seems u don't have it, if anybody else on ur place must have understood that love n all is not made for u"

"I know I know this" maan was about to leave when heard geet voice

"I know everything maan ji, I know, then y r u gng back from ur plan, u gonna to get what u want, n my life doesn't matter to anyone but keeping her hand on her tummy this one matters for u na then y u want abortion"

Maan was taken back from what he heard from geet, is she know every truth but he wanted to know what she knows so he said" what u r talking"

She came near him clutched his collar n said "I know y u married me, u only want to have my kid na, soo see m giving u, u all hate me becoz I doesn't matter for u else a zaria to give child becoz sam ji wanted ur child, n she can't become mother, hai naa maan ji u soo rich na u can have any surrogate mother to, y u married me, does I m that bad, I m that unlucky that can't get love, y u married me bolo na to fulfil the dream of ur love, ur broke my dreams, I was happy in my papa house, I was studying, had servant's who at least to talk me, my mumma's warmth was there in every corner to cocoon my every pain but u brought me here made me poisoned in room, y u did that, y u broke my all dreams y"

She broke down in tears n sat near maan legs, n was crying bitterly, which not affecting her cold hearted husband


"So u know everything thing then y u r still here go from here na, who has stopped u"

"The vows, my culture n my love for u, I know u didn't love me but I love u without any expectation maan ji, shayad I doesn't matter for u but u matter for me, ur one glimpse is soo much for me that I can live my life with that only, plzz maan ji don't snatch our baby, I will be his/her care taker, but don't snatch this happiness from my life plzzz, I won't be able to live plzz doo some mercy on me plzz, mujhe mera baby cahie, I want to be mumma of my baby, kya itna bhi haq nahi h mera meri life pe, mere andar pal rahe iss bache pe kya mera koi haq nahi h( does I don't have any ri8 on my life, the baby which is inside me growing)"

After long thinking maan hold her shoulder n make her stand on feet, n said after thinking soo much "but u have to made a promise, if u want to give birth to baby"

"M ready for every condition, u say"

"When tym come geet, I will let u know not let's move from here enough of drama" maan said h left from there

Geet was happy that she saved her baby life, her jaan, her happiness, arjun came running n saw a content smile on her face n he doesn't need to ask much from her, doc. prescribed some medicine, diet n suggested to take rest, arjun take her back home.

Geet was thinking about the what condition maan gonna to give her, will he, but left her all thoughts n slept as medicine took toll over her.

Day by day was passing, n geet was happy, she didn't need anyone now but when her mood swings happen it was soo much difficult for her to control her anger, love, n pain but she can't share, where she used too see from far how everyone was pampering aniee, taking care of starving, bringing gifts, toys for her baby, she felt bad but not jealous, she was happy for happy n same sad for her n her baby, who are starving for small small things, nobody to ask is she taken her meal, or medicines, she used to be in her room, dying to eat ice-cream n mangoes, becoz she saw all eating it n she wanted to have it at any cost today, but how can she ask them if they got angry on her then, if they will again shout on her then, her maan ji will be angry, what she don't wanted as from a month maan stopped shouting at her, but didn't talk too or u can say he was not there for her.

She was sitting in her but today her starving were not letting her sleep, we was moving ne place to another in room, when maan came almost after a week n straight went to washroom n came after 10 mins, wher geet was still moving here n there n cribbing to har baba ji to do some magic today. Maan glance her becoz she different today, lil baby bump was visible but she has loosed weight too now she look weaker but more skinny n beautiful but same place restless.

She looks at maan 3-4 times, than at last thought to go n ask from aniee or arjun as they can order it by servants but she cant do that, but room door was closed n dark inside, so she understood they must be sleeping n looked at clock outside in corridor it was 12'o clock so she thought something n moved toward kitchen as all were sleeping n she can have some ice-cream or mangoes, she was 1st tym moving inside the kitchen it was big lavishing royal yet beautiful kitchen with all modern things, she straight went near fridge n took out some ice-cream in bowl n sat on one of chair n was relishing it while licking her tongue on lips or u can say she was real kid that tym which all had killed.

She wanted to have more as she didn't had dinner too she looked at fruit basket there was mangoes her fav. Fruit , she grabbed 2 like a kid, washed it n started licking it, but her happiness last for some tym only, tara pari n dil was there standing n watching her, which fumed tara as how she stepped inside kitchen, she went near her n snatched plate from her, she was shocked to fund them 1st but was looking at mango which she wanted to have as she has started eating only.

"Pari take dil in his room, n started shouting mummy ji papa ji maan dev aniee arjun or u can say all family member name, geet was trembling with fear, how all will react, n how maan will react will he shout on her.

All gathered in kitchen to find geet there n some tint of mango pulp was there on her lips, n tara started her taunting

"See mummy ji, see this gal don't have any manner, she is now eating things without asking n more than that she came to our kitchen, must wanted to mix something in our food"

Sneha held her arm tightly n asked "how dare u to enter inside my kitchen, u didn't understand things in one tym, see maan y don't u make her understand things clearly we hate to see her face n she dng everything which is making us angry n unbearable" she said with disgust

Maan went near her n in fear she went backside until she touched the table n a vase fall down n broke which increased all anger more, before anyone can say anything arjun came, n said "y u all are shouting on her, without any reason"

"Arjun cant u see she came inside kitchen without asking n broke one of antique vase of mine" tara said angrily

"Bhabhi" before he can say anything maan hold her wrist n start dragging her toward their room upstairs

Arjun shouted at maan "maan are u mad, what are u dng see her condition her is pregnant don't drag her like this" but maan was angry n he didn't heard anything of arjun n dragged her till bed n forcefully made her seat, while all the way she was holding her stomach tightly n at last flinch in pain when with thud maan made her seat n locked the door

"What u was dng downstairs? Haan cant u let leave me in peace, whenever I came home u do some drama" maan said angrily without realising she is having lil pain n she was holding her stomach

"I m asking u dammit!!! Something reply me"

After composing herself she said in low meek voice "woh I was hungry, n starving to have ice-cream n mangoes, I saw today everybody having I tried to control myself but my starving increased more soo I went only to eat, I didn't mixed anything in food" n started crying

Precap- pata nahi dekhti hu kya aata h mere kurafati dimag me kal ke lie, kuch aache moments daalu kya bole toh maan fulfing her starving ya want cry cry ur choice say in comment


hope truth part aacha ho, as some truth are still to be revealed that will be in maan pov wait for that

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Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
for geet. i am feeling like...😭
for maan ...😡
nd for u...👏
update soon...
Edited by kainturakiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
again painful nd emotional part
really feel sad for geet
she has noone who cares for her
nd hate that maan really hate him sooo much
everytme gives her pain he dragged her after knowing that she is pregnant he doesn't care for her
hate maan's family too
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part.
Hope maan's part wil clear everythng.
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Posted: 12 years ago
arghh i hate maan
he accepted to keep baby with condition
but what it will be..
hope it didnot steel her small happiness too..
geet craving for food
noone is there to take care of her..
she was fulfilling her cravings
that too maans family did not like n shouted at her..
poor geet..having pain..
will maan take care of her..
n give her needed food
atleast for baby..
im waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago



really very painful...

if Maan wants baby from her then he can't even fulfill her small small cravings...whole family is so heartless...even seeing her pregnancy they don't even pity her...so much rich house and they can't even fulfill her pregnancy cravings...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful update ...geet ki condition is really heartwrenching ...
maan ne baby k liye geet se shaadi ki ...us sam k liye wo kisi aur se shaadi kar k baby laane k liye ready ho gaya ...
is he so HEARTLESS ..k usko ye pata nahi chala k wo ese me kisi ki life barbaad kar raha he ...
maan took promise ..pata nahi kyu mujhe lagta he k maan baad me geet ko baby chod k jaane ko bolega ..uski harkate to yahi bata rahi he ...
uff ab geet ki cravings ki bh ikisi ko chinta nahi ...
itna bura behave kar raha he maan geet k saath k agar next part me tune maan ko geet ki craving fullfill karte hue dikhaya to bhi uska sin kam nahi hojayega ...
tujhe jo likhna he likh but i want next part tomorrow ...
maan ko agar sach me geet ki cravings fulfill karni thi to uski maan k saamne atleast geet k support me kuch keh to sakta tha waha sabko bol sakta tha k this is his baby too to kam se kam geet k khane ka dyaan to rakho par wo usko drag karte hue room tak laaya ...
its very painful ...maan geet k saaamne sameera ko ice cream khila sakta he par geet ko sirf insult karega ...

I DONT WANT maan geet ki craving puri kare but i want k annie aur arjun dyaan rakhe aur sab kuch maan k aankho ksaamne ho taki usko ye realize ho k geet k saath kitna galat ho raha he ...

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