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Hyyeee.. so sweet...
Tum sab ye kahan se latey ho...???


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This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all





Part 85

"Everything was same that day. The holy fire, this chants of vows, the color of Sindur, everything! In fact the man who was sitting beside, who was going to become the owner of my life was also same but today everything has got a meaning of them. The holy fire was witness of our bond, the chants is seeming so pure and heavenly and Sindur' It has got its real color back!!

That day though I was there, my body .. my skin was there but in a form of little dirt who wanted to be swirled and vanished in that dark sky. Yes, indeed my existence was not more than dirt which had stepped in his life to make dark mark on his name and family. I had no existence anymore. But he caught me, collected every pieces of me and gave a shape with his soft hands. He gave his breathes, his reflection and his name to me and I came in existence in this world. The world of his love and affection. Today, sitting next to him, taking the vows of marriage I am feeling like to spread in dirt pieces, blend in this breeze again so he could breathe me in and I could become the most needed part of him''

Geet got a soft stroke on her shoulder and found him' her Maan was looking her questioningly and he moved head asking "what happened Geet?' He seemed worried.

She shook head smiled weakly or was she feeling that emotional.. Repeating those holy vows again that could not kept her whole attention away from the thought of her previous marriage day!!

With completion of seven Feras, the priest declared them husband and wife.. The whole surround filled with blessings, echoes of happy talks and liquid emotions in few people eyes who had been part of their hardships throughout the time but now it felt, everything was worth playing their respective roles by getting the beautiful sight of today.

Dadi and Rano were happiest and fervent persons there. They could not have explained their feelings. There one more person was standing at the corner, little far with everyone who was as happy as everyone but had so much hesitation to exhibit it.

"Thanks Maan Beta' Dadi said holding tears in eyes. "Thanks for forgiving Dev and to give him second chance! Geet Beta thank you!! .. '' She kissed both's head with gratitude.

Maan did not need to fill any word in his silence but smiled slightly which was genuine acceptance. Geet stared her husband face and found charm of satisfaction on it, she relieved. She wanted to see this family, her family away from any problems and though, she made Maan agree to forgive Dev for the sake of Dadi and this family. Nevertheless, dev did not want to have any mercy on him for what he did and his this remorse, melted Maan heart and he decided to give him one more chance, brought back in mansion.

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Maan was so eager to go in his room where he knew, Geet would be sitting and waiting for him but these relatives.. urgh!!!!

"Babaji why did you make these rituals!!' he cursed each and every person under his breathe. His heart was not ready to spend a second without nearing her, looking her angelic face which he had been staring throughout of their marriage.

Finally after an hour girls giggles stopped in Geet room and Maan sharp ears heard every footsteps going out, with great concentration!! With every single fading footstep his smile was becoming wide and wider and exact this is what Dadi noticed.

"Maan Beta, why are you smiling like this!!'

He startled all of sudden. Shook head like fool.. "N-Nothing dadi.. Actually I was ' O haa.. I was feeling like to sleep..' He yawned.

"Really!!' She smirked.

"Then do one thing Maan.. go and sleep in my room. I guess your room is occupied with Geet friends na!!'

Maan face left its color. He stared her like stupid even knowing she must be doing fun, yet he knew she could do anything to pull his legs.

"Maan look your face Beta!!!!!''

SD started laughing her heart out following with Rano giggle who had just entered inside room. Maan thanked his stars that they were alone there. His face got red color of embarrassment and it looked at floor.

"Maaji, why you are making fun of my son!'

Rano made face same like Geet. She came and pulled Maan from arm.

"Let's go Beta, go to your room. Geet will be waiting for you!!'

Dadi smiled dearly behind his leaving and prayed to God to keep them always playing and happy like this.

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Geet was very happy today. She herself did not know, what could be the limit of happiness that could have explained in words, so was having celebration of it in her own way! She was humming love songs, she was dancing like a child-girl which always had been kept away from doing it since entire life! She was laughing; was smiling her heart out. She was holding Maan photo frame close to heart and was twirling, adored in her bridal dress. She had been waiting for Maan when Daadi came and said he will be late because of few rituals. Though Geet made disappointed face but after she started to become like free bird, spending her time with showing her happiness to herself in this beautifully decorated room. Their room.. Her room..!! This belief filled her heart with intensive joy. Her body was looking breathtakingly beautiful, gleaming and shining in red Lahanga and she was dancing, doing duet dance with his photo-frame. She took a long turn and landed in Maans arms who had been staring her since long..

Precap:And the journey of life begins... With the end of this story 😭😭



(My next FF will be The Downpour with same daily update.. Nothing more i need but yours all support n love & likes n comments only.. Please walk with me there also like you all had been doing in this FF 😊😊)

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Wedding me short-cut mar diya...
We want Epilogue also...






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Hyyeee.. so sweet...
Tum sab ye kahan se latey ho...???




geet creation gallery... link u will get in the first page of GF
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aree kuch nahi hua.. aaj thora jyada time lagta na post karne me so socha pahle update dedu fir baatchit hogi 😆😆
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Amazing update but sad this ff going to be end

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