REVANGEFUL LOVE #4 UPDATED PT 36 pg 113 19/7/2013

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Neeju
Superb update but painful😭

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: priyadarshini64
loved the part...
both are coming into terms but that dreadful day again reminded the fateful day and both maan and geet went to past...
maan punished himself doing tai chi rigoriously and geet cried whole day...
seeing blood drops on the floor geet got restless and she went to office in pretext of giving file to maan and she got the answer of her question...
waiting for next part...
i hope maan dont shout on her coming to office...

Thanx sweety 😃
and dont worry itni courage nahi hai usme ki wo use kuchh keh sake ab...

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: erumzaheer
thanks dear u have updated after a long time.
part 32 is superb geet realizing her feelings
for maan and maan is guilty and regreting.waiting
for next part.

Thanx sweety 😃

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan
Aww both are getting more closer when they remembered the day...maan punished himself for his sins & geet is so worried seeing maan's wounds & when she came to the office the client talked abt geet with cheap words which made maan so angry!Waiting for next dear👏

Thanx sweety 😃

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, nice part
loved it
emotional heart wrenching part
feel sad for geet
it'll take time as it's not easy for her to forget and forgive so easily
and maan he is repenting but few things also ran behind ppl
continue soon

bilkul sahi kaha apne di...

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Luvforever
both r in pain bt r also concerned abt oder... both r nw sumwhere dependent on each oder... & like to be wid each oder bt it needs tym 4 geet to understnd& accept it... wud love to read more...

Thanx sweety 😃

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maan n Geet getting comfortable with each other! Maan teasing her! Den the date ..it ws tht time a year ago tht he raped her! Maan works out n inflicts pain! Geet sad! Maan says sorry! Geet worried abt Maan! Maan beats up the client 4 loking lutsfully at Geet! Piyush intervenes! well written! update soon

Thanx sweety 😃

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: maanshi
Awesome Story

i read in one go

maaneet both r stubborn
maan's sin never let him n geet in peace ... after one year both fill same pain again
hope their love fill every wound with time soon

Thanx sweety 😃

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

TEASER BOTH WERE SIT SILENT IN THEIR CAR. IS NT IT THAT BOTH DONT WANNA TALK,BUT THE REMINDER OF THAT DAY PUSHED BACK TO ONE YEAR AGO.MAAN DROVE HIS CAR ON A LONELY ROAD AND SHE SIT SILENT NEXT NEXT TO HIM. NEITHER HE ASKED ANYTHING NOR SHE STARTED FROM HER OWN. MEANWHILE MAAN'S CAR STRUCK SUDDENLY IN BETWEEN THE MID OF THE ROAD. HE COME OUT AND CHECKED THE ENGINE. ITS RADITOR IS GETTING OVERHEATED. MAAN WENT IN SEARCH OF WATER AND INSTRUCT HER NOT TO COME OUT OF THE CAR UNTIL HE CAME BACK,BEFORE HE LEFT FROM THERE.MAAN TAKING LOT OF TIME AND SHE FEELS SUFFOCATED INSIDE THE CAR. IN ORDER TO GRAB SOME FRESH AIR SHE COME OUT AND START ROTATING TO RELAXED HER STRUCK BODY.THAT WAS HER MISTAKE. MAAN WAS RIGHT. ROAD IS LONELY AND FULL OF DANGERS. WHEN SHE WAS STANDING NEAR THEIR CAR SOME RUFFINS CAME ON THEIR BIKES. SEEING HER ALONE THEIR EYES GLEAMED WITH LUST AND THEY STOP THEIR BIKES AROUND HER... HI GUYS I HOPE GUYS YOU LIKE THE TEASER. WILL UPDATE AFTER MY TARGET IS COMPLETED 200 PLUS

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago