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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

man ek taraf hai geet the innocent girl tara is trying to protect
and then we have dev being a real jerk to her
dude no wonder she gave ya such hard time
he was so asking for this
hello kabhi toh aap sunte hain nahin inki
what to do with him
but i see dadi got to know of that
and so she made sure they both work on this project equally
wasie she made geet dev sister
but not maan hain
warna geet toh kunwari reh jayengi naa
gosh this should be good right
cheers for pm

Dev se bachana padega na, so Daadi made him her brother...😆
Aakhir kisi ki amanat hai... Daadi did not disclose kis ki...
Thanks for the comment Chavvi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Dev is really flirty.. But he liked to irritate naintara.. Dadine pahile hi Dev ko Geet ka bhai bana dia.😆 I m still waiting to know what happened to create MU in Maan's mind.. becoz I don't think..MU from Geet's side She still loves him..
Nice part.

Maan is always uncertain about Geet because she does not speak much to him. Seeing her in Dev's arms he wrongly assumes that he is not important to her and that there is something between Dev and her.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KomaLSunny

geet so sweet and innocent hate mu between maaneet

MU?
Right now, she has just gone to care for Darji and he knows that and supports her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited my comment on page 62... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

The title was bang on for many reasons'. Many people got their due in this one. Be it Geet's innocence, Naina's hard efforts, Geet's neighbour, Z's retort, & finally Dev the credit chor was caught by his Daadi for his taking situations lightly & basking in others hard work. 👏

You may be perhaps the only person who may notice it and tie it to all its supposed to tie to...👏

Geet the Bambi, I liked the whole description & connection that you brought about between Geet & this movie character. This style you use of giving new meaning to things that have their own symbolisation or meaning in our minds is very good. Naina being the mother hen to protect Geet's innocence somewhere made me feel that she was seeing her own self in Geet. The whole thought process she was ruminating upon just gave a glimpse that may be she too was same & harsh realities of life made her this hard & strict person that she has become now (are you getting what I'm trying to say here?). It was as though Naina was there protecting Geet's naivety & innocence as she doesn't want Geet to face what she has faced in life. In a way her own defence mechanism to bring herself out of the burden she has borne in past which led her in this shell so that she won't feel the helplessness that she sometimes experiences. I just love Naina here. The way she dealt with Mrs. Sethi in her own way was so good. Sometimes there are some nosy neighbours who tend to take advantage of the lonely & meek. It's not always the case but then sometimes people like Naina are needed to straighten some pesky people from taking advantage. Such Naina type personalities usually then get labelled as crude, rude & khadus'. But none of them go to see what that is led them to behave so. Also loved how she gave a fitting reply to Hansa's husband. I love this fiery girl a lot. 😉

Naina has become like this due to what her past is. Now that life has opened her eyes she knows how to toughen up and deal with people.

The contrasting scenarios you showed in Naina's life was so well brought out.👍🏼 Personal front she had to become the hero for someone while on professional front she so needed a saviour like Daadi to put in place her so called Boss. This chapter I so detested Dev. I don't know why? Must be because of his loose behaviour while handling work. you can't always be take credit when you haven't contributed one bit to it while the other person has struggled & put so much efforts just because he is the Boss and more so if he doesn't even acknowledge the efforts put in. Do something Avi, or I will surely strangle him. I wouldn't have minded if he would have given her due & credit or even appreciation for her work' but no khotta just goes & scolds her to conceal his carelessness in front of his Daadi & clients, when poor girl tried telling him the matter & also slogged the whole night for it.

But don't you think that in general rich brats who inherit a business will be like this? Delegate the work, take credit for success and blame the workers if something goes wrong. He is going to learn from both these ladies about being an owner and boss. Daadi will drag him through it. Abhi toh shuruat hai. Saari attitude will be stamped out by Naintara...😉

Zarin's entry, description & the song used was too good. 😳👏I liked Zarin for her catty behaviour, high handedness.😆 Loved Naina's retort to her & even Z giving it back to her. I love to hear these cat fights.😉😆 What I deduced is that Naina is also quite a fashionista or at least knows the brands & when were they in use & when outdated. Sexy back VM'. Hayee dead & gone to Maanland, though it was supposed to be for Dev- Zarin.

Yes she was from a rich family and was until recently very much a fashionista. I am trying to show the journey from Daddy's girl to a person in her own right. Perhaps my most favorite character here will be her. I love the girl to glory story. On the other hand there is Maan... who puts all my brain cells to the side. So both of them will hopefully be written well enough that you feel for them.

I loved Daadi here. She made Dev promise to treat Geet like his sister. Saving her for Maan. But Sanyasi Maan hum sab ki tapasya bhang kar dega'.. Especially in SBV'. ❤️ 😳

Daadi was indeed the saviour for Naina. Just shows she hasn't been running KC without knowing anything, she notices small gestures & even loopholes. Loved that whole scene when she put the clause for both of them to show their calibre depending on their own abilities, without any appendage of inheritance. Dev has to learn that he can't just bask in inherited authority he needs to earn each bit of it.

Daadi I loved in GHSP. I think there is a wisdom portrayed along with motherliness in her.

Continue soon'. This time I'm on time to comment. 😉

Thanks Onir. It made it worth my day and all the headaches of the re-write just to read your comment.🤗
No penalty this time..😉 bach gai...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome amazing update again Avi..muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome amazing update again Avi..muahhh

Sona kaisi ho ab dear?
Feeling better?
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Onir. It made it worth my day and all the headaches of the re-write just to read your comment.🤗
No penalty this time..😉 bach gai...😆

Glad I could make you feel so... 😳🤗
No penalty anytime... I will amke sure of it... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Twosome Update Avi 👏
Loved Naina's protective nature towards Geet 😃
Loved Zarin-Dev part 😉😆

Kaash VM me YT link na hota main bhi dekh paati 😭

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