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Avi this one was as always another beautifully written part. I loved it as well as I love you 🤗
What I really liked is the paragraph where Geet tries to justofy her acts... "Darji never warned me against someone who doesn't talk at all... " And the whole paragraph, just showed how she is trying to justify her acts & feelings towards this man who has started affecting her senses. She is her Darji's girl very abiding & within limits, but then she can't stop her self from being intrigued by this Maan... the pain in his eyes. the loneliness that she reads in him might be feeling more alike for her as she too experiences the same as life has made her face similar situations like him, This connection that you depicted here was so good. 👏 Its as though she wants to give reason along with being clueless on why her feelings for him are getting stronger without her knowledge day by day especially more in his absence & not knowing how to give answers to her need to reach out to him & soothe his pain that she reads in his eyes.
You included everyone in the college paltan... 😳👏😆 You must have had a lot of fun doing that... 😆 Sharmeen I guess is Sheen... Guru a yoga teacher or helping in meditation how is it possible, how can you be calmed in his presence... 🤣 Yayy kicking girl threatening me... so true. Bechari me 😆 Sweety toh hamesha padhti rehti hai ... but she is sweet as well as spicy (Don't tell her this she will come to punch me ) Mari indeed is the mysterious girl, I completely agree. I'm reminded of the song 'Mysterious Girl' 😉 Akhir uske kamre me aisa kya chupa hai, me very curious to know, let's plan & raid her room. Nisha the administartor... I would love to be spending time with her for the jovial person she is, but would not near her when she is with her cats... would run miles away from her room where the cats would be. Madhu is adorable with her arz kiya hai... has me always in splits, her shayari are cent percent bang on! 😆
Darji-Geet scenes were so heart touching. The song just added to the feel. I loved those scenes the most. I could feel them all, the sentiments everything came out well with your awesome writing. The whole childhood description was such a mix bag of emotions, it was like a smile on the face seeing their bonding & love; and tears in the eye seeing their hardships & strrugle to face the world head on. 👏 Beautiful writing. I loved the symbolism used in form of Car-Litter & birds heading home. Yes the guilt was somethign that always engulfs us but then she needs to knwo that her struggling will b ear fruit as then she may be able to provide a better life for her & her darji.
I really admire their love & bonding, Especially when she punched the girl who teased her hair do done by her Darji. I was like so sweet😳
Waiting for Maan now... Also the new meaning you will add to the song with your writing... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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