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CHAPTER 19 apr 21
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In meanwhile maan and karan come back... maan face is still hard and depicting every emotion but there is determines on his face like he decided something and going to complete it without any other thought he just go upstairs to geet room... priya and meera heart start to beat fast after seeing his firmed expression after lots of time they make geet smile again... now what will maan do hope he don't destroy anything.

Everyone is worried for geet now to see maan expression but decided to wait' if situation will go out of control they all will interfere now no what maan will say to them'. That time all are quite as first they have to concentrate on life taking situation but not now'. They will fight for geet if situation arise like that' but no matter what they are going to tolerate' if maan again scold her after all' this is his mistake must and geet reaction is right on her place but they also know maan is not like that and they don't want their relation suffer because of a misunderstanding.

"you know priya bhabi' may be I send geet back after what bro did to her but I saw her supab family also' and I just too attached with this innocent geet and know her tyai jii never will marry her to a good boy and we all know' how is maan bro" meera sighed little.

"I agreed with meera I also thought same" karan support her.

"Now leave this topic and concentrate further'.. I am scared to see bro expression" priya spoke worriedly.

"So I am" yash also support priya and eat one more apple in tension.

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Other side geet is getting ready in blue saree and minimal makeup just the way maan like her'. She slide bangles and blushed they are same bangles which maan gifted her in kathu'. Her cheeks turned red' but she startled with lighting and sees outside from the window a storm in on the way'. Very scary storm'. Geet felt shiver and close window as she is scared from lighting sound'. She wore a waist chain as one day maan said to her he liked to see her in waist chain'. And put same payal'. She just remembering maan all time and blushing'. A woman starts to blossom in her'. A natural change'. She is just turning with maan names only.


"Hey Krishna jii what happened to me?... why I am feeling goose bumps" geet spoke and watched to ceiling with a pout.

First time she is getting ready for someone who will praise her beauty'.. who is going to eyeing her everywhere like she is some treasure like he did in morning'. And that day also in kathu... All this thought is making her so girly and cute at same time.

She listened someone opened her room door so she hurriedly put her saree on her blossoms and full ready to go out in her room from this changing room'. But she again listen door sound to be shut'. She made her face like what was that.



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She come out from her room and saw a beautiful rapped gift and a card their on her bed'. She made confused her but decided to check it and give it to priya dii latter.


She took first card to read what is this but a very beautiful latter come out from the envelope and she is looking it with frown but opened it'.

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****Geet*****

"Today I didn't call you candy because somewhere I lost that right... but for me you was my candy ... and are my candy and will be only my candy." Geet eye turned wet to read this heart wrenching' whenever he called her candy she felt tingling session in her whole body'. Her tears rolled down on her cheek and she pouts also' she wants to maan call her candy only'. But she read further.



"I know you are shocked instead of drop you your home why I wrote this letter but geet just one one time only I want open my heart in front of you... I know that me and my heart now nothing for you... but a burdened relation... but when you tolerate me whole 10 days now just 15 minute more after this I will never bother you" geet saw ceiling after read this and murmur "are you watching him Krishna jii kya mai inne tolerate karti hu' and mr.khurana I will eat your brain whole life samjhe"'. A moan escaped from her lips to read this'. "why I am feeling mix emotion Krishna jii' but I can't see him like that' all bend he looks perfect with high neck only haa".

"geet I am not a man of words... bhuat kacha hu mai geet apni baat bolne mai... but I know I should explain you everything before only but I didn't... but what will I do geet we were stuck there... and I don't want to share my personal life with my siblings also... but you are going to be my wife and first time I want to share my feeling with my life partner... I know you don't want to be my life partner but for me you are only my heart mermaid..." geet smile to read this with tears "see Krishna jii' waise tu how he made fun of me and tease me and here saying he is not the man of words' I know that maan we were stuck there and you don't want to be made more tamsha'. See first he is claiming me aur phir candy bhi nahi bolte dusht" geet made baby face but read further.

"You are owner of this heart... didn't its weird that you touched my heart in less than one week but I am helpless something is about you made me skip my heartbeats... last week with you I again felt lively... somewhere in all city life my heart is in coma and you awaken him again... kyu jagya isse geet jab tumhe jaana is tha... but I know I pushed you so far from me now... where is only end of relation is only solution haina... but phir bhi this heart wishing to stop you..." geet made almost crying face "see he is full ready to send me' cant he stop me with the same right'. From which he slapped me huh dusht' ludkta bagan'. Kya heart bhi koi coma mai hota hai lol when I awake him'. Bhuddu hu app now I can see your other side where you hide all care and emotions for all of us' I come now more near to you after see your this pure heart maan' oye hello no end vnd smajhe' I am going delhi with you only" geet don't like this line and read further with all kind of face.

"geet I know you are so upset with me yes I didn't said angry because I know how innocent you are... but believe me geet I am the one who told you to raised your voice against abusive acts of naina and pari but see today I am standing in same boat as them... but geet this is second time I raised my hand on any girl but both time I lost control... leave first time we will talk about us... that day I was just come to listened that there are only 20% chance that we will be out from there... I didn't tell all this because I didn't want to see panic on my family face... I talked with officer he told me that not even helicopters help us... just save what you have to eat and drink so you can survive more days their... when I came near car I just see broke bottle and I lose my all sense and slapped you geet ... I felt like you broke a last hope also of our life in your childishness... when you said me you hate drinks not even ready to take as medicine... my already occupied mind just reached on conclusion... and when I saw broke bottle near your feet I just so scared what if you got some major scare and lost blood this feeling made situation more worst geet' and you wondered why I said to sat outside for 15 minute in cold as punishment when I slapped you'. I was shocked with my action also but know how strong my hand was for you there was no medicine so I thought to made you sit there your cheek will numb so you will not feel pain like we put ice on any swell place geet" geet drenched in tears after listen maan side how many false assumption she made for maan slap and punishment but she was all wrong maybe he was wrong but this is a mistake not sin' a misunderstanding' tension' situation draw a line between them' he is the only one who save her from tayimaa when naina and pari took her payal' he was the one who invited all village in her marriage before she voice out her feeling' he was the one who arranged for her school without even saying him' he is jam but little hard so what diamond is most hard thing in the world so was he? Or if he was not like that than how supposed to he took care of so big business alone in his teenage'. Geet tears in flowing on her chest also as realization shook her' she also judge him without listen him just like him we both did same mistake'. He broke my heart with action and I broke his by words'. She decided to read further and understand better to her life partner.

"believe me geet I am not able to meet my eye in mirror also after that day that why I kept a meeting here so I can think further about this... but I know you are right on your place ... no girl will be want to marry a man who slapped her even before marriage but geet I already give you a place in my heart which is only for my humrahi... I stopped to think you as third person... when I am saying my family ... you also a part of that family geet... I appreciate you took a decision geet ... a right from every girl point of view but geet ... I am helpless and once again requesting you just give me one chance I will fill your life with happiness but you are free to take your decision and I will support you no matter what... this time you decision is last decision... they are some lines which I wrote for you ... maybe I am not able to say what I want but poetry is my strength so I am saying my heart in my language now..." geet is in little shock as maan jii wrote poem also and also for her she eagerly see below to read poem

[all poems is written by me so not even think to copy them]

khata tu kar baithe hum
ye malum hai hume...
jise chaha tha usse hi rula baithe hum
ye malum hai hume...
koi mafi nahi hai isse gunha ki
ye malum hai hume...
phir bhi maafi ki umeed kar baithe hum
shayad malum hu tumhe...
bada jatan kiya hai isse privaar ke liye hume
mager tujhe par sitam kar baithe
ye malum hai hume...
bharosa kar mera mai nahi hu pather dil
mager pathru se jaida sakat bann bathie
ye malum hai hume...
teri tarah pyaar ke liye tarsa hu mai bhi
mager ussi pyar ko rula bathie
ye malum hai hume...
koi safai nahi hai mere paas
kyui guhanaa tu kar bathie hum
ye malum hai hume...
ager hai thoda bhi atbaar mujhe par abb bhi
raat ki chaadar nichache nitzaar kar raha hu mai
tu aaye gii ye umeed bhi kar bathie hai hum
shaya malum hai tumhe...
phir bhi chode ke jana chati hu tu
galti humari hai malum hai hume

tumhara guneghaar
maan





in english


I did a crime,
I know that'
I made you cry
I know that'
I insulted my love..
I know that'
You don't have forgiveness for me
I know that'
But I love you more than my life
Hope you know that'
I gave you pain
I know that'
But my heart is hoping for you,
Hope you know that...
You will forgive me
I know that...
I am waiting for you
Hope you know that...
You can leave me also
I know that...
But you are my last love.. and will be my love
Hope you know that...
Your culprit
maan


"There is a gift geet and two shawl is there if you... you want to go back than wear black one and if by chance you want to live your life this hard and idiot maan please wear a red one ... I am waiting for you... in backside lake park... come soon ...". geet kissed letter many time like she is filling maan face with her feel' "You are my humsafer maan not culprit' abb zindgi ki har subha tumse shuru aur tum per hii khatan hogi'. Now I will not even think to leave you' not in this lifetime no matter what now this geet heart will beat only for you' for her maan' yes this will so soon if I say I love you ' but I like you' I admire you' and maybe I love you".

Your culprit

Maan

Geet is full drenched in tears after reading maan hearts and poem... she just want to go and hug him like there is no tomorrow... how wrong was she? ... her krishna jii gave her a diamond and she thought him as stone... but she also got a wrong impact and her fear made her like that.

"I am sorry Krishna jii I doubt on your choice... this was our deal naa you will only choose my husband for me and forget about this but you didn't and you give me exactly someone like you whose heart is pure like... he did a mistake... but he was tensed for us only... he silently took all tension just to save us... even he can't be able to see in fear and here I am thinking he hate when he fighting with his inner soul... just to ask forgiveness from me... he is elder to me and also intelligent and his relation is also big al least for me... when he gave me a owner place in his heart I also have to give him that place naa from now on he is my everything... I will love him like I do to you Krishna jii don't be j ok" geet smiled when her eye pouring tears same time ... tears of joy and proud... proud on her destiny who gave her Maan jii her soul mate.

"But haa I will tease him ... see what will I do now" geet smiled mischievously... today she had her full smile without any ting of sadness... her all questions is answered now... she happily took red shawl and kissed it hug it and twirl in the room... and saw black shawl with frown... "There is no place for you in our life samjhi" she scope black shawl in her hand and scold it cutely... "But I will use you to tease maan jii abb thodi sii teasing tu banti hai naa kyu" she thought and smile like toddler who found his hidden treasure.

Geet wrapped herself first in red shawl and above this with black shawl and checked herself in mirror..."abb maza aaye gaa".

She left downstairs all are watching her in confusion but she is in her own dream land without any knowledge what is happening around... all decided again to keep quiet and watch what is happening actually first maan went in geet room and come out only after 2 minutes and left from same back door now geet also come full ready but her face is smiling and she also left for backside lake...

"What is happening after all" murmured yash.

"yash go and work for us as reporter" karan winked and send him behind maneet.

Geet is trying to make her face sad and cry but her inner goddess is smiling so she is turning fail badly but at last somehow act like how much sad she is... there she saw a figure dressed in black is standing there and watching far away in origin.

Maan listened payal sound and instantly recognized that geet is here his heart is beating so fast... he doesn't have guts see back and what shawl geet choose... in this storm also anyone can able to listen his thumbing heart beats... geet is his first dream which he want for himself... more than for her family... yeah he made a excuse but in reality he liked geet from the very first day.

But maan at last turned and see her dream is wrapped in black shawl and his dream also turned black today his eye also turned wet for some second he felt like everything is stopped for him ... his heart beat also... his first ever dream is broke now... maybe he is not good enough to get some love... someone in his desert life... his face expression is like a dead person somewhere maan soul is died... maybe he will never desired someone for himself... because if you attached your heart with someone this will give you pain and fear only he is happy as msk without anyone ... after his mom dad death he didn't open his heart but after geet he wants to open them but now geet locked them forever now she will take key also with her only ... he felt abandoned today and devastated '.. in tension to save everyone he did a mistake and he got a life time punishment for it... a lifetime scare... maan just closed his eye to shut all feelings just like before.

Because of dark clouds geet not able to see maan expression... and her one joke left maan devastated only but when maan open his eyes something caught his eye and his eye widen in fear one 4 feet long snack is near to geet foot...,


"Geeettt" maan shouted in fear.

maan just run with lighting speed and pushed geet from there and snack bite maan instead of geet... maan just lay there with this sudden act and geet also numb to see what happened suddenly.

words:3200

i need my like and comments to write with this pace and want 300 like back😭

Precap: wo tu bilkul nahi what you are thinking geet maan ki sewa kargii and all so big nooo abb socho.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Kabaab mein haddi ek saap!! that was my instant reaction!!
Maan's letter was so emotional, loved each and evry line of it and off course geet's cribbing too😉
Edited by Niharika.Nair - 12 years ago
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awesome👏👏


maan opens his heart to geet😃


i think geet will save maan😉


update soon😉
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waiting eagerly
update soon dear
loving ur ff
im in tension
wat is going to happen next
pls update soon
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awesome part
maan opens his heart to geet
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CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD LOVED THE UPDATE LOVED THAT SHE HAS GOTTEN HIS EXPLANATION AND HIS OPION AND HIS CLARIFICATION ON WHAT HE DID ON WHAT HAPPENED AND LOVED THE LETTER AND THE POEM THANKS FOR THE ENGLISH TRANSLATION LOVED IT BEAUTIFULLY DONE AND HE DID NOT GET TO SEE THAT SHE IS WEARING THE READ SCARF LOVED THE UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM
Drashti Dhami as Geet & Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan
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abb kya hoga...geet kya kar di tune...apne bachpana se usse marr diye...abb snake bite...kuch nehi hona chahiye...plz...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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super update...
Oh my god geet u r stupid u broke maan's heart...
Wat ll happen to maan????geet should realise her mistake oly by this...
Continue soon...

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