MG(SS):Love from Across (Last Part X-Pg 22) 16/05 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow she wrote a letter to him n said it finally...n now he s goin for her ...glad😃
btw culmination??😲 so sooon?/😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
the sheer beauty of ur update gets magnified with ur exemplary writing skills...
good to know that geet has finally bared her heart and made him know through her letter about she was always in love with him... he is going chose her over his people , try to know what went wrong, why did she give up on him inspite of loving him... its going to be very interesting to watch how the story takes a turn ... i love the way u alternate between past and present seamlessly... am getting sad that this story is gonna end soon, but hope to get a promise from you that u r going to return with a brand new story and keep this forum alive with ur lovely stories😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shefali16

yay me first!😃

let me read

read😃

ofcouRse my maanu jaanu wud go after his geetu 😉 he luves her so much...now even more as she has confessed her love 4 him...he wont be able to control now...😃
for ur second question i think it relates sumthing to the world trade center in NY.. i dont know...i guess i guessed badly
and third question only u can anser my dear writer...but anyways u wud make them cum togethr i hope...as u urself cant see our maaneet away na😉


Hahahaa!
Thank you darling reader!
Well lets see if your 'guess' comes near the answer!!
And well yaeh, Your Maanu jaanu has to go behind his Geetu ;)
Oook, so now thats a leap of faith you're taking in me, huh? :P
Well, hope I can fulfil that ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

wow she wrote a letter to him n said it finally...n now he s goin for her ...glad😃

btw culmination??😲 so sooon?/😲

Yes yes!
Letters are best forms to express your heart, now arent they?
Yes darling, the story will come to its culmination as every story one day does!
But I will be back soon with another one ;)
Won't get off your backs so soon!!
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

the sheer beauty of ur update gets magnified with ur exemplary writing skills...
good to know that geet has finally bared her heart and made him know through her letter about she was always in love with him... he is going chose her over his people , try to know what went wrong, why did she give up on him inspite of loving him... its going to be very interesting to watch how the story takes a turn ... i love the way u alternate between past and present seamlessly... am getting sad that this story is gonna end soon, but hope to get a promise from you that u r going to return with a brand new story and keep this forum alive with ur lovely stories😳

Thank you!
Well, yeah there will be a turn in the story!!
Glad you like the way I swtitch over abruptly from present to past! I thought it was kinda unnerving for you guys LOL.
Awww... I'll soon be back with another story! Dont be sad yaar...
For now enjoy this one <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Yes yes!
Letters are best forms to express your heart, now arent they?
Yes darling, the story will come to its culmination as every story one day does!
But I will be back soon with another one ;)
Won't get off your backs so soon!!
<3


yeah that they are😳😊
but isnt there a looong way to go for them
but as long as u r gonna be here with ur stories, its ok😊
yeah nn we dont want u to do that tooo😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


yeah that they are😳😊
but isnt there a looong way to go for them
but as long as u r gonna be here with ur stories, its ok😊
yeah nn we dont want u to do that tooo😃

Hahahaa!
Glad you want me to stay!
Will definitely do for you guys and Maaneet!
I've found so much love here...
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional story..hope maaneet will found each other soon😭😭😭..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
This chapter instantly reminded me of "Veer zara" ..
I must say,you have presented it with as much perfection as Aditya Chopra had done,however it was relatively easy for him by using camera ,perfect locations,bg score and all...
You have done it solely with your words and take a bow for it dear...!!!!
Now coming to questions
1)Yes,he would..
2) May be WTC attack
3) I want them to be but it seems impossible right now..I hope{with my fingers crossed} that you have not planned a sad ending for them..However if you had,don't change it..I know,whatever it is,it would left us with sheer satisfaction...😊
You are a fantastic writer,starlit...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
i read both the parts together...
wow... Geet just broke their relationship.. but the pain of those pieces pricked her more ... god.. she might have been forced or something???? i dont know.. but if she did this after trusting him so much, loving him so much then defo there would be a good reason...
and Maan that was so so... i dont know the word.. he not thinking much of the consequences of his act helped her to go off to her land.. what does that mean.. when he knows she was not in love with him... when she broke him so mercilessly... but stil he feels so much for her.. that is what is called love or ibadaat... they say.. the feeling... is much much more than what the mere 4 letter word could ever depict...
fab yaar...
now waiting to see if he crosses... i think he will as he will destroy his existence to give her hers...

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