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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

yipee updating...



jald milega kya?

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

kitne der aur ho ????

shaaya 10 min aur...then will come at nite

monaaa


main abhi jaa rahi hoo yaar...

hae to rush now...

every nody is waiting for me... i thought we will leave after some time par nahi unhe abhi jaana hai

sowwieee

raat ko milthe hai...

donno at what time i will reach home... but as soon as i come i will be before my lappy for sure
tc

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

shaaya 10 min aur...then will come at nite

Originally posted by: crazydream

ME

WAITING

HERE

FOR

THE

UPDATE !!!!

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

byeee

meet u nite

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Part 66

"Geet will she accept me, will she be mine only, forever''

He raised her face holding chin. Geet opened her eyes and stared him who was waiting for her reply. She shied down her head, rested on his chest and nodded. Maan held her tight in his embrace, like never ever they will be parted from each others arms.

##

They parted after a few minutes.

"Geet, there is something for you in your wardrobe'

"Mere liye?'' She asked excitedly. He nodded and gestured her to bring that thing. Geet hurriedly opened her wardrobe and found a packet, she turned to ask

But she found him not there. She looked around but Maan had gone but before she could become sad her eyes fell on a note attached with packet.

"Don't worry I'm here Geet. I want to see you in this dress of yours, can you wear this again for making my moment special ''

She find around for him and then opened packet. It was her wedding dress. A fresh thrill runs in her body with old memories.

"Geet I'm waiting Jaan'

She startled with his voice and found him on window outside of room. She nodded and waited for him to disappear so could change but he was not moving!

"Ye jaate kyu nahi, how would I change in front of him?' She thought, waited for sometime and when he did not, she walked to window and closed it and then stood there shied in relief.

Maan chuckled. "I love to annoy you Geet' he self-talked' shook head smiling.

##

Geet worn dress but she couldn't find her Dupatta. She searched for everywhere. "Seems Maan forgot to bring it' She thought for asking him but "How can I go before him without it!! ' She shied.

After thinking for a while she went to window and knocked calling him. "Maan'

But Maan did not reply. She called twice but didn't get any answer. She got afraid if he is gone but then brushed off thinking no, he can't.

"Then why he's not replying?'

She opened window slightly and looked out to find him. "Where is he' she was wondering when suddenly felt someone presence at back.

She gasped when felt Maan aura submerging her, very closer and then his hand touched on her head, caressing down slowly to her arms leading to the end of hands and then rested on her bare stomach tenderly. She shivered with his touch. She felt a forceful tug on her stomach and found herself drowning in his passion very ardently.

"Your Dupatta !' she heard him saying and then realised he was making her wear her Dupatta. She turned to him.

Before she could utter out any word she found his eyes admiring her entirely. She was curious to hear words of approval but his expressions were adorning more! She shies and smiled, looked down.

"Geet do you know why I requested you to wear this dress at this moment'

She looked him and shook head.

"I wanted you to be blessed by Rano Maa also. This dress is her blessing for us, for you. My Geet can't be kept apart from her mother blessing at this beginning of our integrity.

Geet felt lump in her throat, no word could come out. His pure love for her was making her emotive which couldn't have been defined with the collections of words but could have been shown only with anyone's pure heart.

She rose in her height and kissed on his forehead. Only this could she reply but that much was enough for Maan to understand her entire gratitude and he approved it with smile.

Suddenly he carried her in arms. Geet drew back with this sudden move.

Maan where are you taking me out?

Just wait Geet you yourself will see"

Geet saw they were going toward up through backyard stairs. She didn't asked further but had been guessing that how much more he had planned within few hours.

Her thought halted and she found herself in a huge hall was build on the top floor and it was mild lightened. Maan brought her down on floor and held her hand. She was following him only without saying or asking related.

He stopped her in centre if hall and went to the switched board, did a switch on!

Geet covered her eyes with both arms when sudden flash light collided with her eyes. It took fairly few seconds to get her sight clearer and when she looked around and her mouth became wider opened along with eyes. It was her projection on all walls, made room so alive with her reflection every-around.

" Maan its..."

Before she could complete her word Maan pressed another button and shower of rose petals, started falling down, drizzling on her like small droplets.

Geet was stunned to see all. She was stood there amazed when Maan comes from back and patted her shoulder. She turned back but still was amused. She was not sure what to say, had no words to explain anything.

Maan smiled. He softly held her hand and kept it on his shoulder.

He held her waist and pulled softly closer. She was staring him for his next move and then she hears light music started. Maan made her move with him on rhythm of song and she followed him naturally.

They started enjoying their close dance when Maan pressed a button and small snow foams started falling down on them making everything so romantic. The whole inside filled with the projection of their intimate dance in every corner of room and rain of small white snows and red rose petals. It was not less then any dream world for Geet and seeing her happy, Maan heart filled with satisfaction of peace. They enjoyed every bit of it drowned in their love.

##

It was passing mid night. Maan was lying in her lap on floor bed and Geet was playing with his hair, mingling her finger in them. They were so tired yet thrilled with this enjoyment and were resting in each other arms.

Maan "

Hmm" Maan said with closed eyes

Aap mujhe itna kyu satate ho. You made me run up and down for whole day. My legs are still paining" She made face with cute pout.

Maan turned and raised her Lahanga little up and kissed her feet. Geet shuddered.

" To keep you busy Geet that I could do all this preparation without making you know" He spoke cupping her face.

She smiled thinking how naughty he is but she loved it.

"Are you still angry?

She shook head. "I was!'

' I know !'

"Maan now you should go and sleep"

"That only I am doing Geet" He again slept in her lap closing eyes.

" Maan please, you should take rest if Dadi comes to know she will be angrier"

" And who is going to tell her?

She had no answer but couldn't let him stay here for longer. She showed her big eyes and made angry face that Maan knew, she was faking but agreed to go for her sake only.

" Good boy" She smiled.

" Geet this good boy needs something"

Aur wo kya"

He came closer. "His reward!" and gazed at her lips. She blushed. As Maan bent to touch her lips she pressed him back and stood up instantly laughing. She showed her tongue and runs out laughing.

I just love her God !!!"

Maan spoke and laughed on his own changed state and left to his room.

##

Morning Geet got up and went to make coffee for Maan when heard Dadi was talking on phone with Panditji. She was talking about their marriage date and thus Geet comes to know that Maan picked a month after date on over of next week one. The whole incident of HP flashed in her mind.

' I can't wait for a month; I have to talk Maan about it"

She feared about Dev knowing he may return back home any moment from his office trip (As Dadi had told everyone) and she did not want to take any risk now nor could tell Maan about her fear. So the only option she had to get this marriage as soon as could be possible. She took coffee and rushed to Maan and saw he was getting ready for going office.

Precap: Geet- "Whom are you calling Maan'

Maan- Dev'

He dials his number and hears rings back from inside Mansion itself..

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Such a beautiful update. Loved the romantic moments in this one...they were just perfect. Superbly written as usual.