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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Geet fell in love with Maan The Duke...

here Geet's father is blaming her for losing battles...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesome dear

geet is full lattu on maan

thanx for the pm

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parig123

@parig123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Superab update
Totally different from other ff's

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

part 2
awesome...
so she has fallen in love with the Duke...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

kahin inn dono ke chakkar mein geet naa aur phaas jaye
man this aint fair you know on her
why her people why her
so she has fallen for the duke and what of the duke
has he too fallen for her
or is she just luck for him
guess we shall know soon enough
hope their ending aint like Hades and Persephone

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

So intense and awesomely written !!!

Just curious, Did Maan kidnapped her to save her from anyone or a thing ???

I think he loves her way before the kidnapping act.

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582445

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

that was wonderful

it was creating a mysterious world .. lil bit of history .. lil bit mytho .. n Maaneet in it

passionate n romantic

loved d 1st kiss .. it happens just in a reflex .. n it was so beautifully written

then d dagger scene .. wow .. I love such romance where power play turn into passion .. it was so intense

oh n Geet kissed him .. it was so unexpected .. but so beautiful

I am loving ds story .. cont soon

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

a nice chapter as well 😊

The triplet part was LOL 😆

The sword practice scene made me remember the jodha akbar sword practice scene...😊

very well and creative dear!!!! 👍🏼

The whole chapter shows your hard work 👍🏼

But I the characters reminded me Chuk Blair more...in fact I forgot that I am reading Maaneet story...I imagined Chair at every scene... only their names were reminding me of Maaneet sometimes

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago

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Queen Bitch

@Mean.Girl

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: chavvi16
kahin inn dono ke chakkar mein geet naa aur phaas jaye
man this aint fair you know on her
why her people why her
so she has fallen for the duke and what of the duke
has he too fallen for her
or is she just luck for him
guess we shall know soon enough
hope their ending aint like Hades and Persephone

wait and watch to unveil the feeling of Duke..

hey story of Hades n Persephone is not a sad story.. though 50% sad 50% happy.. 🤣

Hades is my favorite Greek God..