THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 111

Originally posted by: prettyji

awesome awesome awesome dear

Originally posted by: tellyme

Started this thread dear..

was welcomed by Pinky and Adi...

I have seen my two girls suffer with guys like Adi and you know what after all these coochico talks they end up at last saying girl that their parents are not ready and they will have to part their ways...

these boys who are not bold enough to talk to their parents become bold enough to deny the relation...

Hope this Adi is not like that

Originally posted by: glassdoor

I know, I know...I am late...But you know how it is...😛


Part 8 :

At first I got a bit confused reading Rajeev's convo. And then I read the beginning again. I had missed the bold part as if it were fine print. 😆

downward dog 😃
I really liked how you used conversation at one end to paint a picture of all things. That is very creative.
Oh man this couple is so sweet! Rosgolla is from the east ! 🤣

By the way is it because Sujal always looks hot tortured that he is always made to suffer in love? 😆
I did not watch that serial of his completely but as far as i can remember he was the dark brooding types.
Haven't seen anything of him but pics and the movie Aamir... but your point is valid.
I liked the character of Sujal here too. A mature man who wants the best for his cousin though she does not like him much right now.

Part 9:

Men have fashion magazines! 😆 I thought that was only playboy. 🤣oh my. Those are the only magazines at doctor offices here, men's fashion I meant..😆😆😆😆

Ok I really like your sense of humor too! It is in the flow at all times and never forced.
May be you can write something fully in humor genre, what say?

Forgive me if my comments look fractured a bit...I am just reading for relaxing today...

You have explained branding in such a simple understandable manner. 👏

It was pure bull on Dev's part to put one over on NT. Surprisingly everyone bought it.

I agree with Naintara more that people define a company and not the mere figure head.
It is wonderful when people can share genuine experiences so others can learn from it and have fun in the meanwhile. Your writing has that accessibility which makes even complex things seem non-threatening. I would love to read more of that...

So we have friends as cast and crew members huh 😃. More the merrier...

Chap 10:

I liked his interaction with Loquacious girl 😆. It was so heartfelt and nice.

I had a suggestion to make regarding the timeline:
I can understand how difficult it is to convey the times correctly when the narration is not chronological. Every time I used to update people used to be drowned in questions about what happened when. 😆. Gradually I have learned to give some sort of handle or a brief precursor to the earlier event in the same update so it provides continuity. In the update sometimes I forget what the characters were feeling before the update....Just a suggestion...

Rest when I get to them...

Originally posted by: tellyme

part 10 loved it...

ohhh he is so much in love with her...

all are so sweet nd nice in this FF

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Nyc update. Thanks 4 pm