If Only You Saw Me (8) - Page 34

Originally posted by: Onir

Aise koi sulaye toh anyone will have a peaceful and beautiful sleep ... 😳

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Abhi abhi maine iska segment dekha. 😃

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

kahan?? kidhar??
Aj NB me iska Performance dekha 😉

Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

sorry for the late comment

fabulous part re

Originally posted by: mayyo13

FB pe ek page pe. 😊

NB wala toh kamaal tha! Phir se dekha maine. 😳

Originally posted by: amks

My comment on NOTE

Editing process takes time, sometime more than what we assume so you don't have to feel sorry. Afterall you edit for our comfort and enjoyment.

And What is this with update day? You think by not giving fixed update date, you will make reader happy.

Then listen (sorry read) , even if you didn't give fixed date for update we will be remain hanging in anticipation of next update anytime. Now, choose by yourself which is better, to keep reader hanging for entire time or just one day.

Secondly About shortening of update. I think , its good idea. Short update twice a week is what I would prefer.
I have considered both the options. But I still believe that promising the readers a certain day for update and not showing up is worse than not having a fixed day. Thanks for your opinion anyway.
My comment on CHAPTER

Looks like Bir-zara mairrage is going to be important event in maneet lovestory. Well waiting for the mairrage. The way you showed, maan's mother missing her husband on this special occasion was nice . We usually miss someone special and loved ones on the moment of happiness.
Yes, the upcoming wedding is an important part of MG's life.
True, it's in moments of happiness that one misses his/her loved ones the most.
Game of Sliding of plates and ayush monologue was too good😆 .
Glad you liked it! 😊
Children are lovely ,sometime cranky but the biggest thing which i always feel. They are biggest kidnnapers. I always become victim of kidnaaping whenever i visit at my relative or friend's place.
There's an off-side to every good thing or person and the same goes for children.
Ayush grandfather's death even after being sad, I liked that you put this ,because life can't give only happiness to you, sometimes we have to go through unexpected situation too and losing of game after that makes it feel real because lack of one of important player will surely affect team.
Ups and downs, happiness and sorrows, wins and losses, that's the way life is...
And now ending my comment for your lovely update with these lines on maan's conditon.

Hath thame yun sath chalna,
Udasi me muskaan lana,
Aisi hi teri hazaaro baatein ,
banati hai mujhe tera deewana.
Great lines again! I really liked them. 😊

Moments about which i have not commented is because of my tired fingers though I liked whole update.
Now, waiting for your next update and some fun moment of maneet.
It's perfectly fine if you don't comment on every single thing in the chapter.
I'm glad to know that you liked it as a whole. 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I watched RTM today!! 😳 ❤️