If Only You Saw Me (8) - Page 24

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: dqno1

The excitement and preparations for the wedding were very well captured. Zara assuming Geet and Maan are together...😳... sweet girl Zara. Noticed a little bit of someone else's personality seep in with the scenes in her behavior that Maan noticed in the shop...😊

It's only the two people in question jinko samajh nahin aata, baaqi sab wohi sochte hain jo Zara ne socha. 😆
@Bold: Whose?

Through out I was very uneasy at the part you left us last time, that the clock was ticking. I finally breathed a sigh of relief when the fingers were clasped crossing the road to get some ice cream. The care for making his disappointment go away... I think for the first time Geet is actively involved in doing something for him so boldly and I have to say I loved it.

Yes, this is the first time she actually did anything for him so openly. The clock is still ticking though...

The chocolate pastry part with Ayush being his naughty greedy self made me chuckle.

The text messages reminded me of...😆. The are you awake made me crack up.

That one was actually something I laugh at. Calling the other person and asking are you awake. 😆
Hubby andIhave this addiction to our phones and texting, it made me think of that.

The wise use of technology I say..😉

Very wise indeed! 😉

Felt sad for Ayush's loss. Hope teamwork wins and they do better next time.

That's the way life is. We lose people we love, we don't always win the things we really wish for, but life goes on...

Awesome update Mari. I for one am looking for shorter updates as you can give them.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know your preference. 😊

At the end of my comment I feel bad that I am not able to better capture what the update made me feel.

I loved it..

Thanks for the update...

🤗

Thanks for being here Avi! 🤗

"Borrowing" Sona's pic for you... love this...

I think you're right. I don't dislike any picture of these two. 😳 Love this one too! ❤️

Originally posted by: dqno1

😭

Waise update parson ka tha... post kal kiya tha...

Originally posted by: saf24

Congrats on the new thread and superb update. Really liked the wedding preparations with everybody coming together in their own way as well as Maan and Geet getting an opportunity to spend more time together. beautifully written. Loved every bit of it.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I know. And that's the reason I've started replying to comments so I can quickly move on to the next chapter and not have you guys wait for long.

Originally posted by: paponecon

when their formal friendship will bcome their normal friendship...maan lost n sad...n geet gave him a treat..thats cool...n she was feeling sad bcoz only 2 months left...will maan ever able to tell her what he feels for her...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mujhe daant ne ka compensation chahiye...😭

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Update Mari

Originally posted by: ammu5

congo, loved da update

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Kya compensation? Quick update?