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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: dqno1

Yes it is...

Nisha...Mari is singing this tune now...

Dil deewana
bin shayar ke
maane na...
yeh pagla hai
samjhane se samjhe na...

❤️

Yes Kis ke chakkar mein sab ko bhul rahi ho Mari...😲

I have missed something here, but i think I can guess.😉

Toh ussi sur mein me continuing,😆

Tu shayar hain,

Main teri shayari,

Tu aashiq hain,

Main teri aashiqui

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: dqno1

Happy Gudi Padwa in advance!

Happy Gudi Padwa to you too Avi.😃

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: dqno1

Happy Gudi Padwa in advance!

Thanks... 😊

For me its more of a holiday... My friends celebrate it... 😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Nisha 🤗

You must be celebrating Gudi padwa na??

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Onir
Hmm... okay!! 😊

Yes I will start typing tomorrow... as I have a holiday for Gudi Padwa... 😃 Hopefully I will be able to update by saturday or sunday... 🤔

Alright

I is berry berry happy, though I still have to comment on Chapter 3. Yaar mere catching up khatam hi nahi ho raha. Though I have read all the updates at all the threads greedily, burping out comments is not so easy.

Awesom👍🏼 bolke khatam karne ko dil kar raha hain. I am confused between all the updates I have read. I may end up writing about WOL Maan on SYI thread😆

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Susegad

Alright
I is berry berry happy, though I still have to comment on Chapter 3. Yaar mere catching up khatam hi nahi ho raha. Though I have read all the updates at all the threads greedily, burping out comments is not so easy.
Awesom👍🏼 bolke khatam karne ko dil kar raha hain. I am confused between all the updates I have read. I may end up writing about WOL Maan on SYI thread😆

Take your time Nisha ji... I still have to read Binding ties ka update... I don't even know where did I reserve a dabba for me... Anyways hoping to do it soon. 😊

What is SYI ... ??? 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Onir
Take your time Nisha ji... I still have to read Binding ties ka update... I don't even know where did I reserve a dabba for me... Anyways hoping to do it soon. 😊

What is SYI ... ??? 😕

Your story... Nisha it's Seven Year Hitch, dear...😆

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AKSashadow

@AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

My comment on NOTE

Editing process takes time, sometime more than what we assume so you don't have to feel sorry. Afterall you edit for our comfort and enjoyment.

And What is this with update day? You think by not giving fixed update date, you will make reader happy.

Then listen (sorry read) , even if you didn't give fixed date for update we will be remain hanging in anticipation of next update anytime. Now, choose by yourself which is better, to keep reader hanging for entire time or just one day.

Secondly About shortening of update. I think , its good idea. Short update twice a week is what I would prefer.

My comment on CHAPTER

Looks like Bir-zara mairrage is going to be important event in maneet lovestory. Well waiting for the mairrage. The way you showed, maan's mother missing her husband on this special occasion was nice . We usually miss someone special and loved ones on the moment of happiness.

Game of Sliding of plates and ayush monologue was too good😆 .

Children are lovely ,sometime cranky but the biggest thing which i always feel. They are biggest kidnnapers. I always become victim of kidnaaping whenever i visit at my relative or friend's place.

Ayush grandfather's death even after being sad, I liked that you put this ,because life can't give only happiness to you, sometimes we have to go through unexpected situation too and losing of game after that makes it feel real because lack of one of important player will surely affect team.

And now ending my comment for your lovely update with these lines on maan's conditon.

Hath thame yun sath chalna,
Udasi me muskaan lana,
Aisi hi teri hazaaro baatein ,
banati hai mujhe tera deewana.

Moments about which i have not commented is because of my tired fingers though I liked whole update.
Now, waiting for your next update and some fun moment of maneet.

Edited by amks - 12 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Onir
Nisha 🤗

You must be celebrating Gudi padwa na??

Yes. Its a new year😃, so welcoming it with cleaning the house, which is a pain.🤢

Also going to put the gudhi up.

Last year, there was a salesman who came on Padwa day and he asked me what it was. I told him it was for warding off all evil and that I didn't think it was working😆