FF MG~Beautifully Flawed~#2...Part 37-56 updated on BLOG, 21,sep '15 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Motives motives and motives, very person has his or her own selfish motive n that is exactly why this is a dark story.
I feel that though Maan might have a different motive while bringing Geet to his place but now he def has a soft corner for her n prolly loves her although its a bit too early to deduce that! Or u may be planning something else in the future!😉
Next comes Dev, well he wants to harm Maan in some way, maybe not in a major way as he himself said but he def may have a reason to do so!
Shaan, from what u have written it seems he wants to sleep with Geet or his motive maybe deeper than that as he may also want some of Maan's secrets through Geet! There may be more to his "sweet" personality than what meets the eye!
Lastly Geet, well I certainly didn't like her hurting Maan!!!! To me it's not yet clear if she harbors some feelings for him or not but she def doesn't wanna spy on him n cheat him in that way! Shaan is a good time pass for her n hanging out with him certainly provides her some relief!

U have written it really well, I am in awe of your writing style so truly looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
geet tell d truth to maan...bu u r tooo rude...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
marvellous!!the way u portrayed each emotion of both of them was truly terrific!!geet is soo much confused about all the things going on around her and my heart jst went out for maan when he was too much hurt due to her leveling him as a customer.
too much sad to wait for the next part.hope u write soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww !!!! awesome work di 😊 just read in one go !!!! lovely dark story !!!! and just loving ths Maan becoz in most dark stories maan is never like ths 😆 mindblowing thought 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I feel bad for geet but more bad for maan awesome upt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Geet is having difficultly in hiding n
Lying to him. But wat can she do. She
Is helpless.

Maan trying hia level best to understand
Her. Feeling sad for his state. He is trying to
Improve their relation.

Going out wid Shaan n giving info to Dev.
Maan hurt. N her words n accusations were
Piercing.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
congrates on new thread dear
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
this is jus wow
i mean i thought prblms will land wen dev will do some damage but they started much earlier
poor maaneet
both right in their own place n their anger hurt or disbelief is making them talk like this...
awsumm update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome .ye dev hi jarur MU karwayega maaneet k beech
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread..
Its so sad to see Maan like this.feeling sorry for him.I dont understand why should Geet hide this Dev thing from Maan.Am sure he'll find a way out of this.hmm..

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