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Posted: 12 years ago
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I LIKE THIS MAAN
HE IS CLEVER AND SINGLE MINDED REGARDING WHAT HE WANTS
HE DID HIS RESEARCH THOROUGHLY AND IS NOW LAYING THE TRAP TO GET HER
AND EVEN DESTINY FAVORED HIM TODAY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Maan reading episodes of RHDP n logged on IF! Maaneet meet at wedding...Geet shocked! well written, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 7

Geet's pov

Jerk how can he do this to me? Finally i was over him and i trying to live normally but he have to come from nowhere and ruin everything. That innocent smile plasted in his face is tempting me to punch his handsome face.

" who is this Geet?" maya asked

Now what am i supposed to tell? When i was about to fall he caught me. How much ever true it is Maya will not buy it. She is a kind of girl who can even formulate an affair between a cat and a dog. Before i could come up with something brilliant i heard Maan speak.

" please don't tell her parents " he said.

What do you mean don't tell my parents? I gave him a confusing look. We have nothing between us that could entertain anyone.

" are you two dating? " maya asked with a glint in her eyes. I hate her stupid brain.

" hushhh. Don't shout " Maan calmed her. " we don't want our parents to know"

" i guessed it. That is why you were drooling at her from far " Maya giggled.

What the he!! Is going on here? If you guys are talking about me let me remind you i m standing here alive.

" Shut up " i said angrily before they both unleash their imaginary horse.

" maya whatever you saw is not true he is bluffing."

Then i turned to Maan.

"what are you doing here? And what is with this drama ? " i asked

" come on mishty we can tell her she will not reveal to our parents " Maan said .

Again with 'mishty' he knows how much that name melts me yet he has to use that. Who said we are dating? What if our parents knows ?

" stop it Maan " i warned

" maya can you give us a minute. She is just angry that i didn't compliment her properly " he said with a wink much to my annoyance. Maya just giggled and walked away.

I looked at Maan accusingly when maya was gone. He has some serious explanation to make. He dragged me to one corner where possibly none has ever visited.

" why are you doing this ? " i asked

" i m sorry " he said

Seriously?! After what he has done All he has to say is sorry that too after so many days?

" is that all you got to tell ? " i asked raising my eyebrows

" no... i mean ... i... "

" i don't have whole day for you " i said as i was about to walk away.

" i love you " he said abruptly

I looked at him as if he had grown three heads. He was joking right?

" thats ridiculous "

" well that is a bit too much i agree " he said

See not even a minute before he said that he loves me and he is already regretting it.

" but i swear i like you enough that i know evetually i will fall in love with you " he said smiling broadly

What is wrong with this boy? He is confusing me well he himself is confused.

" Maan you are sorry i accept and so now push off " i waved my hands dismissively

" Geet i know i have hurt you and i m genuinely sorry. Frankly when we thought of starting the whole thing i didn't expect that it will reach here. Even now i don't regret what happened between us what we shared i just regret keeping you in dark about all this." He said

I looked into his eyes and a voice deep inside my heart said he meant all words that he uttered. I gave him a look that probably gave him hope as he began to talk more confidently.

" Knowing you was great. The time i spend with you were the best moments and i can trade anything to get it back. You make me feel fresh. Maybe its too early to say love but trust me even if i say that now i won't regret as eventually it will be true. " he said

" do you want me to fall for this? " i asked raising my eyebrows. But i know my heart has already melted.

Maan held my shoulders and i looked at him confused.

" you need to trust me Geet because ..." he trailed off giving me one of his smirks that meant he is up to something.

" Ab zindagi ki har suba tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tum par katam " he said perfectly imitating the infamous Amaan smile.

" you are kidding right? " i asked shocked. He smiled shyly

" did you seriously watch all that? " i asked

" yeah " he nodded

" i can't believe that " i closed my mouth with my hand in disbelief

" I wanted to know why you like it and maybe get some lessons " he winked

" Maan that is too much " i said

He couldn't have watched all that episodes. Whenever my cousins or my dad sit with me to watch they all complain for every scene about how crappy the show is. Romantic hindi daily soap is nothing but a suicidal attempt for men. But he watched all that just to know my taste.

" This is embarrassing but i did read stories in IF " he said almost blushing with embarrassment .

" Oh god that is so sweet " i said smiling wider. He actually did everything which is possibly a nightmare for boys.

" it wasn't that bad though " he said thoughtfully . Of course its not bad in fact IF is AWESOME.

" Now when we go on a date i don't want to worry if i would be romantic as you know what i expect " i asked

" yeah ... what? " he asked me suddenly realizing what i said.

" Shouldn't we go on a date to change the liking to love? " i asked making innocent face.

His smile grew wide and he hugged me before i could protest


I was standing with some relatives and the ring ceremony was in progress. Maan popped from nowhere and held my hand thanks to the dim light no one must have noticed.

" What are you doing? " i asked trying to free my hand. If even one relative spot me holding hands with groom's brother then they would end up getting us married even before the couple getting engaged here.

" i doing the same thing that Amaan did in episode 253. Isn't supposed to be romantic? " he asked

I smiled waking his arms.

The laugh and fun didn't prolong when soon after the ring ceremony i was called by my mother . I went inside a room where surprisingly i spotted my parents along with another old couple who i don't remember seeing before.

" this is Geet " my mom smiled brightly introducing me

" namste " i said with a smile

" very pretty. Perfect for my son " i heard the lady say

What? Are you kidding me? Marriage ? seriously? My mom gave me a look that explained everything. They are the parents of the guy who i was supposed to meet after my exams. Just great. The lady was asking me random questions about myself and i was trying hard not to snap. Just now i got things sorted with my boyfriend and they have to ruin everything.

" and there is my son " the lady said looking behind me.

My eyes widened seeing him and his face reflected my expression.

" Maan this is the girl whom i wanted you to meet " the lady oops its aunty now said ." she is Mr. Handa's daughte. They are your to-be- sister in law's relatives. Isn't she pretty? "

I raised my eyebrows smirking seeing Maan's bewildered face. This is called co incidence.

After my mom convincing me to talk with the younger Khuranna we were left alone in the room . well the convincing part wasn't needed but i tried to play tough they can't know about us what if they cancel it?.

" this is ridiculous " Maan said

" do you know it before ? " i asked

" well i thought my mom was talking about maya. " he shrugged

" so Mr.Khuranna are you happy with the proposal ? " i asked playfully

" let me see if you fulfill the wish list Miss.Handa " he said looking at me from top to bottom

" you are ok ? " he trailed off

" really!!" i raised my eyebrows

" misty you are beautiful " he said

That was funny enough. This whole day seemed as if i was in my favorite show. Surprises, confessions and romance. If anyone is gonna come to me and tell that i m watching crap in TV and things like this never happen in real life then i have my own life as example to tell them that 'DREAMS DO COME TRUE'


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And yeah that is the end

While writing this story i realized how much i love GHSP and maneet ...I wouldn't say addiction its purer than that ... Once i remember i was watching GHSP scene in youtube with my friend and i was mouthing the dialogue along with maan and geet and my friend gave me " are you crazy" look... i was told that once the show is over everything is over but even after almost one and a half year i find the craziness only increasing ... I don't know who should i thank Makers, director or Actors but no one can deny that MANEET were / are / will be MAGIC




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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome amazing perfect
its was such cute and dreamy story👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
fine i am the 5th one 2day
ohk now read the update nd as usual it was awesome
oh how i wish i could get some1 like Maan who'd actualy put on the effort to do anything to keep me happy even if it meant watching GHSP with me 😳
its literaly the hardest thing a guy could do i've seen my brothers cursing my sis-in -laws so often 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update...well written! So all ends well! Love dit! Miss GHSP so much! thanks 4 an amazing SS! Pls post epilogue! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
me gonna miss this Love story alot😭
hyee Lovely cute sweet ending..Loved it very very much😳
wow finally he copied Amaan😆 to impress mishty n she really ipmress😉
Thanks for sharing such beautiful story nandy n PM😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great ending to an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is d last part.I was shocked.Anyways it was a beautiful ending.This is what I wished 4.A perfect ending rather than a sudden close 2 d FF without giving a proper ending 2 d story.Maan delivering Armaan's dialogue..even he hugged her like Armaan.wow!Damn romantic.He watched d show only 4 her,she realized it.Geet who watched d serial dreamt o sth & she she got d same thing.she lived the life f her fav serial in a way.Like that let every1's dreams cum true.truly a diff ff.is there any epilogue 4 this?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what this is ended...nooo...

awesome part...

aakhir Maan ko bhi manna pada that IF is awesome...

thanx for pm...

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