THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1121

Originally posted by: xolfiya
I started reading it recently initially I was confused with the intro of Characters n then I again read so I understand it...it is different n ur way of describe the story is totally differenti like it...I Love this story its Amazing n well written of every emotion... :)

Thanks it is my first FF so the earlier chapters were as much a mystery to me as you😆

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ppriyanka83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1122

I love d cncpt..
Devu n I-tara..n my fav..maan n geet.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1123

Originally posted by: bina_a
hey!!! walk in the rain superb :) why don't they talk to each other but I'm loving this maan n geet very very much. I-star lol you made of laugh ;) what do i say quite interesting conversations i must say don't think anyone can think n write like you seriously hatsoff. i thoroughly enjoyed. I'm truly loving dev-naintara's track too. thumbs up :)

Thank u 😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1124

Originally posted by: Aditi.kesari
how come i missed this ff for so long. i cant wait to read it in one go

Do keep posting your feedback so I know how you like it.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1125

I-star

aka Ms. Galaxy

aka Hathi😆

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1126

girl u have an excellent taste in music and the way u know which song to add to the update makes me speechless.

oh oh before i forget i must say loved the charecter pictures,especially the two hunks in tank tops showing their smiles and muscles

part 5-lol maan day dreaming about geet in the middle of a presentation and after comming out of it he is angry at adi and his team.luckily he is fast in pointing out the errors(bachgaye).felt sad when he remembered his dad sayings,but it's good that he is following them.yaar yeh maan aur geet dono toh pehle aap pehle aap kar rahehei to express their love 😆

part 6- for the whole update i was like 🤣

lol naintara's monolouge was hilarious.how does she remember all that rule book numbers at the tip of her tongue(may be she has photographic memory)

"Woh Daadima, elevator mein ek Haathi ne mujhe apni trunk se maara..." is my fav line in the whole update. rofl I-star and a trumpet call of an elephant as a theme song 🤣.he wants her to call him dev or even better devu on special ocassions.

part 7-very well written.i like the suttle way they understand small gesters,but are afraid to voice their feelings they have for each other.the song very well describes the feelings.

thx for the updates,loved it.

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Shawon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1127

oh wow... just finished thread 2... dev's character is awesome...🤣.. and the songsss😆

Edited by janna341 - 11 years ago

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1128

Wants 2 read more bt stopd to gv u a cmnt,,, it was awesome thread... I-star... O dat was so much fun... And maaneet r too shy wow new maaneet... Maan dreaming of geet in meating hahaha. K bye.

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nishnal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1129

So here comes the past n beginning of a new love story of two persons being silent...1 admiring ,loving ,caring ,desiring ,wishing ,living...waiting to feel n love the other...the gal being so innocent n having a golden heart works hard to get scholarship to study on her own n working at the same collge...,.though bring 2 diffrnt people of diffrnt status...they still try to manage the house hold responsabilities...by studing in the evng attending classes n othr way by doing their own jobs...hmm seems intersting how will they meet...n will they talk to each other