THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 105

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Posted: 12 years ago
tujhay Shaq hai kya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

tujhay Shaq hai kya



Aisa Waisa 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry guys

Network not available on my phone... Net real bad here... Back tomorrow, will reply everyone then

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Posted: 12 years ago
I adore the second scene when he was trying to get her to say the teen lafz...
Aisi achi penalty sirf meri BHB de sakti hai...🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

nauri😲😲😲 gets an entry😲 wo bhi maan ki firandd😡😭


BHB doesnt😭
dil toooting..mu ferring😭
Teri entry aa rahi hai...phir tu mere peeche dande pakaad ke aayegi...😆
Geets interest in floor when someone like maan is in front mai ti ghoorti rehti...with all 4 eyes 🤓

The description reminded me of "pyaar hua ikraar hua" but u chaged teh song😆

Mrs Iyer n mr shetty 😳 she didnt even give bhav to my maan n snatched second chance also 🤣
i tell u she needs increase in her chasma power

Mrs. Iyer villain types hai... and you know villains toh milne mein madad karte hai
I act like this song from before😉 My dads collection.

he was a Jagjit fanatic. SUbah me roz do ghante jagjit n chitra singh collections used to play in my house😆😆😆
These songs are Maan's Dad's generation for the beginning part until he comes back from London. Just to give that feel...

Always glad when my BHB is around...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

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'First Rain' had me dreaming
Avi , about the note I wud say, I want TL as much longer as yew can take it 😳 Thora xyada ki demand hai, par, 'Dil hai k maanta nhi ' 😆 Will try my best to extend it.
Ok coming back, start wid a beautiful poetry 👏 Its a pleasant surprise coZ I had forgotten this 😳 One of my favs 😳 I myself read it thrice 😳 Each word was having an essence of pure n shy love 😳 n it fitted their story perfectly, the choice was urs, so, gr8 choice 👍🏼
Main Maan ki classmate *dreamy* As Guru once said, 'Main hawa me urr k aata hun' Similarly, 'Main hawaon me urr k aati hun' 😳 😳 😆 Wish ! he wud have taken me rather than my diary 😳 😉 😆 Laut aa, laut aa... Mazaa aaya na? I was wondering how I am going to get a teenage boy to say shaiyari in a modern story... Tu aa gayi uski "classmate" ban ke toh sab hogaya...

Main hawa me urr k aagai 😆 Watching her laughing so freely must b a treat for him 😳
Seriously SRK from RNBDJ 🤣
I mean no offences from SRK fans, but he was looking ____ in the movie (blank fill kr k mujhe Aashu Sweety se pitna nhi hai, Mayyam is too sweet to even yell 😉 😆 )
Maan, our feelings r mutual 😆 So sweet of him to search the guy on YT just to have a look of what she likes in him, n then seeing Shahrukh, his reaction of jealousy was so common in these kinda feelings.. Him justifying his own thoughts of hatred towards the actor were cute 😆 His jealousy wud have been the same if it was anybody else than SRK 😆 I lyk Prof Shetty 😉 Matlab he cares for his student's safety, that's good 😉

I loved Suri and the power cuts that you guys experience everyday made its way in the story😆, Maan ka fayda hoga... Professors will help their story along... Koi na koi help ki toh zaroorat padegi both of them are so shy...😆

Walk in rain was so loveable, Pure ❤️ Love the concept there ! Him in black, one in many.. Her in white, a brightest star who illuminates his otherwise work-burdened, devoid-of-joy lyf 😊 Was so innocent of Maan to think that Y he cant b lyk Dev ! the carefree guy !
Choice of song 👏 The lyrics of the song r there in my collection, I've loved the beautiful poetry since I dunno when, but never have I heard the song, the credit goes to yew , Thanx behna 😊
I really felt this song for them was the right choice. Thoda old hai but wording was too good to let it go.

I hate Ms. Iyer 😡 in fact I dislike these kind of women, who just point their finger on Girl's character widout knowing anything 😡 But nevertheless, Maan had her, chup, bilkul chup 😉 😆
The eye to eye talk was ❤️ Her shyness took over n she hid behind the curtains leaving him wid a small hearty smile 😳 Lastly that puddle-kicking left me smiling 😳 That reflected his relaxed n happie attitude to me 😳 Rahi sahi kasar was filled by the last two poetic lines 😳 Loved those ,oh-so-katto pics Avi 😳 That pee loon wali pic is one of my favs n that shirt too 😳 MINE TOO.
Chapter kl lye 🤗, mere tantrums jhelne aur mujhe bardaasht krne k lye 🤗 🤗 😆
Precap is awaited 😳
Falling more n more for ur writing Avi 👏 Thanx heartily 😳

Tere tantrums kab huye? Agar yeh sab sikhna hai toh asli DQ's se sikho.
I know you are busy so other than taang khichayi aur kuch nahi karti main...😉
Maine Sheen se bhi kaha hai ki teri shaiyari bina my stories would feel incomplete to me and without her spamming and pics, my thread would be empty...🤗🤗
Thanks Naureen for being with me in my writing experiences...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Aviii missed you🤗

Me too! 🤗
Had a great time. Will catch up with you guys later, ab going to catch some ZZs
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

I adore the second scene when he was trying to get her to say the teen lafz...
Aisi achi penalty sirf meri BHB de sakti hai...🤗🤗


call me a bitch but i liked Sasha's constiptaed expressions more 🤣

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