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Maan is going to be J😛



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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- ⭐️100⭐️















He was not breathing. Her form draped in orange saree was enough to pull the air out of his lungs.


(Geet's Saree)


The beautiful face before him was in light make up n there was this orangish, shinning gloss on her lips. Maan had an urgent desire to suck on them.

For a change neither she lowered her eyes nor backed away.




He looked too amazing n had her frozen by the intensity in his eyes or was it the fulfillment of her hope as she saw the nude appreciation in his orbs. He moved forward n she took a step towards him then came back to reality as the distance between them diminished. He wanted to check that someone this beautiful existed n so raised his hand up to touch her face but before that she walked away hastily mixing into the crowd.

Everyone was enjoying. Everyone' except for two souls. Maan was standing in one corner keeping a vigilant eye on Geet while she stood in another seeming for the ground to swallow her or something like that.
Uff they are just impossible.
Shanaya drew her amused eyes at Rohan. They just need time.
Urgh, don't become Dadimaa part 2. Something is needed to be done.
What more?
The party was Rohan's, it was hard to say. While the crowd was usual it wasn't his style. He always went for rowdy, loud parties this one was surprisingly romantic. Perhaps it was Shanaya's air; his cousin had been trailing behind her like a puppy.
Maan looked at Geet. The whole time she had just concentrated on running from him like he was a ghost. Now she was standing alone in a corner looking down. What did she want? How was he supposed to approach that she didn't back away so painfully like she did?
He saw Shanaya joining Geet. Maan, drink this. Rohan caught his attention.
What's this?
It's Rohan's special beverage.
You mean alcohol?
Yes. Rohan smiled sheepishly.
I don't drink.
Rohan could have killed Maan at that moment but he knew better. After much fighting he made his hard-head brother drink n once it started there was no end.
Shanaya on the other side gave Geet cola. The nerve racking feeling faded with every glass n Geet felt so much better, light-headed n just a bit off-balance. Okay, a little more than a bit.
Someone asked her for dance and just as she started to dance with him Maan moved towards her n forwarded his hand. Dance? Without even looking at the other man, he asked or ordered was not sure regardless she gave her hand into his.

Dekha my idea always works. Rohan raised his collar.
Geet ko kuch hoga toh nai na?
Nai yaar Maan uska khayal rakkhega.
Aur Maan ka khayal kaun rakkhega?
Geet.
Shanaya rolled her eyes. Don't worry love they are adults, they just needed to loosen up a little. Now you ignore them n concentrate on the birthday boy. He said pulling her onto the dance floor.


Maaneet danced on the floor n Geet looked lovingly into Maan's eyes. He though appeared angry. She turned his face towards her n he snapped it back staring at other direction. She did it again n the same result. It happened for quite a while. Then Maan got fed up n jerked her away. He still looks so cute. Geet thought n pouted.
He glared at her sexy pouting face n left from there. Babaji yeh toh aivayi naraz ho gaye. She followed him but in his drunken state too, he was fast. Geet after some time of following him got lost. She had come far away from the party n lights here were also dim. The surrounding was becoming scary with the sky darkening. She walked aimlessly then saw some light. Going closer it appeared to be a stable. It was and a large one at that housing almost 9-10 horses sleeping soundly in their respective stalls. As she entered Maan was sitting on the haystack with his face puffed up.
Geet hurried walked to him n held his hand. Mai kho jaati toh?
Kisiko khone ke liye use paana padta hai. Maine tumhe paya hi kab? Her filled up with tears. Naraz ho? He nodded. Maine kya kia? Tum mujhse baat nai karti, dekhti bhi nai. Jaise hi mai paas aata hu bhag jaati ho as if I am a ghost. With those big-big eyes you look no less. She giggled. Shut up. Okay. She nodded but giggles erupted again. She settled beside him n cupped his face turning it towards her; he did what he had done in the party. And she hit him on the chest. Ab mai bol rai hu toh dekh nai rahe. No, I won't. Kyu? Because' if I looked into your eyes I won't be able to hold onto my anger.He said so simply that Geet felt like flying. Hayeee' She sighed.
Maan'? Hmm. He was still looking at the other side. Agar mai baat karu, tumhare paas rahu toh tum meri taraf dekhoge? She pleaded. Mujhe accha nai lagta jab tum mujhse naraz hote ho. His eyes softened almost instantly as his face turned towards her. Tumhe farq padta hai? Haan, bahut. Your each word affects me. When you said I married you for money, that I tricked Dadimaa, I will hurt Jia. It all hurt so much. Maan pulled her into his embrace because tears had started to flow from her eyes. And when I told I love you. You didn't believe that, did you even hear it?
Hiding her face in the warm comfort of his chest, she sniffed. It felt so good to finally let go n accept him just for a moment, for a night. You didn't mean it.
He was angry again n Geet bit her lip missing the solace when he pulled her away. She tried to hug him once more but he held her intact. You won't hug me until we' solve this. She made a baby angry face. How can you say that I didn't mean it? Do you have any idea, how I have been living all these years. It wasn't easy Geet. I missed you so much my life depended on your memories.
What about me? You think it was rose walk for me? You... you don't know anything.
Then tell me, make me know.
First let me hug you. Fine. Then you will tell me, okay? Okay. He let her embrace him n his arms tightened around her. Her soft, ample breasts pressed to his chest, little gasps of her breath touch his skin. It was heaven. Now tell me? What if I tell tomorrow?
He growled n she swallowed.I waited for you in London. I made some excuse n mama, papaji n beeji left. I thought you will come for me. Like it happen in movies. But you didn't come. Geet you left that... Please don't interrupt. You want to hear or not? Hmm. He zipped his mouth which was very hard. You didn't come n eventually I also left for India but it was too late. Daarji had already passed away in fact he had died three weeks ago. Aur Mama and Papaji' It was all so confusing n Beeji was also not there. I was alone. Wo log acche nai the Maan. She was sobbing uncontrollable n her each tear stabbed his heart.Once, that women slapped me n they' there was that man he' he' Her body shook with cries, shivers going up n down her body. Maan rubbed her back but it helped little. I hate him. You know? And I hate you. She looked up at his face with her red eyes.
Don't say like that?
I will say whatever I want. She raised a finger n he nodded like a child but the rage that had filled him didn't subside. There was overpowering urge to rip apart everyone who harmed or even wished to do so to his Geet. Who were they? Who was that man? Shaking her head vigorously, she said, it doesn't matter. It was your entire fault. She held his collar.
Mine? Why did you left? Because you betrayed me and was marrying that Shreya. She stuck her tongue out at her name. Okay she was nice n beautiful. But where was I lacking? I was not that beautiful but Papaji always said I had a golden heart. She smiled at that, her loving parents. I miss him so much.
A tear escaped his eye at her gloomy voice but this was his toy girl. She spoke like her he felt such a rush of happiness when he realized, it was the old Geet talking, not the unknown one whom he had been living with. Who said you are not beautiful? Many. She replied sadly. They are blind. Her hazels were expectant staring deep into his, through his eyes trying to look past, see his soul. He cupped her cheek then. You are most beautifulest awesomest hottest loviest'. Smartest!! Geet supplied. Yes and sexiest girl I have ever met or seen. Geet grinned. Sacchi? Mucchi. You are not lying? Actually, yes. You are not smart, you are' dumb.Her jaw dropped to the floor. Yes, if you thought that I loved someone else you should have confronted me, slapped me, cursed me. Then things would have been different.
She lowered her head. I didn't want to impose myself on you. I wanted to you to be, happy.
Geet. Maan shook his head. Why are you so nice? Your one wish damaged us for life. I can never ever love anyone other than the girl I fell in love with at a mere age of 10. It comes back from that long? She asked surprised. Yes, it does. Her eyes had sadness, elation, doubt, regret, with loads of tears this time more of happiness.Why did you marry Shreya? I didn't want to Geet. I was forced. N Jia? Even she is not mine. His words felt bitter leaving a bad taste in his mouth. She is not mine. He repeated, tears falling down. Oh! You believe me right? He was desperate.
Yes. Surprisingly, she did, in that moment she did believe him. She wanted to. It was so relieving to just believe him and not think about the consequences. Yes, I believe you Maan. I do. But Maan couldn't believe that at last she finally trusted him. You..you' Shh' Don't speak. Tell me, if I asked for something will you give it to me? Her voice was just a whisper only for him to hear. What kind of question was that? Anything Geet. My life, heart everything I have is not mine. It's yours. Ask for anything.
Will you give me this one night?
Yes. He wouldn't have thought before answering even if he could and he didn't cared. He just wanted to please his love, make her believe, give her all the happiness.
Toh aapka answer lock kar diya jaye, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana? She giggled with the biggest smile on her face that he had seen in a while that made her look so enchanting, just like a fairy who had come to enlighten his dull life. The grief was forgotten so easily wish the same could happen when she was sober.
Yes lock me to you. She scooted closer n he did the same until both their bodies were lingering an inch apart. She kept her hand on his cheek her thumb caressed the length of his lower lip, back n forth. He closed his eyes. The touch was magical; flicking a light inside him. Like a dream it faded away n he opened his eyes. Geet wasn't before him n he got scared but then heard her.
Maan' See it's raining. When that happen? Maan wondered. It was raining heavily n he made a face. I don't like rain. Her brows raised as she turned to him intrigued. Why? Because it was raining when you left.After a second of grief her face lit up, eyes dancing with mischief, his heart fluttered erratically like life was blown into it again. He had thought he would never see that look on her face again.
It's raining tonight too. I promise you won't hate it that much anymore.



(please play the song to get the feel)




He stood up. Her eyes clouded over as she walked closer to him. He understood what she meant, her eyes spoke volumes. When she bit her lip his gaze slid downwards onto them. She smiled n ran towards the window. The cool drops fell on her face n his heat touched her from behind.

Aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga
tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

He kissed her shoulder n she hissed, her heart stopped then raced with double the speed at the feel of his rough lips. She turned her face at him n he nuzzled behind her ear.



tu tadap ne laga, main machalane lagee

His hands stopped her from turning fully tightly clutching her.

bund tan pe giree,

She rubbed her wet cheek against his.

jan machalane lagee

In turn his long fingers softly tickled her exposed waist n she squirmed.

chha raha hai ajab sa nasha...
Aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga
tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

She pushed him away n showed him her tongue.

tu tadap ne laga, main machalane lagee
bund tan pe giree, jan machalane lagee
chha raha hai ajab sa nasha...

He took predatory steps towards her. She took steps back shaking her head.

Aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga
~Music~

Before he could catch her she ran out into the rain. Was it even possible? The clouds were rumbling, heavy drops splattering still it was peaceful n serene. She stretched her hands, dancing in the rain. There was no pain, no loss. She felt free, revived, sometimes cupping rain drops, something letting them wet her. She played with them like they were dropped on the ground from heaven just for her.





Her saree covered nothing it stuck to her skin revealing all she had n Maan drank her in more than that the happiness on her face made him go mad. This was his Geet, his toy girl. She lived each moment without any care in the world like it was her very first moment.

~Music~
thodee sardee bhee hai, thodee garmee bhee hai

The weight of his palm on her shoulder warmed her. She turned around to look at him. Every muscle was visible from under the thin cloth of his wet shirt. Few wet locks fell on his forehead while he stared at her with hungry dark eyes.

thodee hai bebasee, thodee marjee bhee hai
aise me hum bhala, kya karen tu bata
jo bhee hota hai woh, hone de dilruba

She looked at him from below her lashes, torn of how to live this moment but thoughts flew from her brain when he wrapped her in his strong arms squeezing her waist n kissing her all over the face.

Aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga

She tried to run away again but he held her pallu. Poor Geet tried to snatch it back but he just pulled it more n more. With each pull her breathing hitched. She knew it was lame when she herself wanted to be get caught n melt into him. But the small game has its own fun.

tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

They were just inches apart when she turned n found nothing.

~Music~

She came into the stable n searched for him. Walking to the back she checked behind every pillar n all corners. The fear inside her was immense. Like an insane she turned all around but to no avail he was nowhere to be seen. Endless possibilities rouse in her mind n she rested herself against a pillar.

~Music~

pas aau jo main, dil yeh darta hai kyun

A tear slid down her closed eyes when she felt him again.

dur jayega tu, aisa lagta hai kyun

Opening her eyes she stared directly at him. She was angry, she was glad and Maan knew it was all for him.

maine wada kiya, maine lee hai kasam

He wiped the tear n kissed her eyes one by one so gently that she swear there she born again.

umrr bhar naa kabhee, pyar hoga yeh kam

His silent vows touched her heart n she hugged him to her to never ever let go.

Aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga
tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

With a snap the dori of her blouse gave up. And she opened his shirt
buttons. Her saree was in a pathetic condition n the blouse hung loosely over chest yet her focus was somewhere else. She removed his shirt completely.

tu tadap ne laga, main machalane lagee
bund tan pe giree, jan machalane lagee
chha raha hai ajab sa nasha...

Her lips trailed up over the smooth panes of his hard chest. His muscles rippled under her sweet torture. She blew a shaky breath on his neck n laced her fingers in his hairs, pulling his head down.

aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga
tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

Their lips melted together and tongues massaged each other almost urgently. Nothing in world could stop them today. Heat started pooling at all the right places n Maan could take it no more. Geet parted as if she understood n he picked her up immediately. At the other end of the stable he laid her over the haystack.




She was burning all over but she gave him time to remove his pants n he soon joined her covering her body with his. Their lips met again while his rock hard manhood pressed possessively between her thighs.



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=75HcX3fNw28&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]

















CREDIT(S): 1. The awesome blossom VM by Nandu (richu26)
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2. The superb banner by Shru di (shrutheAjay)
Thnx u di muahhh😳😳
3. Song Ankhon se tune from Gulam





Wow three digits'. It feels so amazing that we reached the 100th parts⭐️⭐️. Credit goes to all the readers. All ur supports helped me write so much n also improve. Anyways, how did u all liked the century update?😕 I am sure that's was not what u all were expecting😛 even I had planned it a bit differently. From here things would take a new turn some new mysteries would arise while the old ones would be revealed. Also I would move the story faster n with that I hope Milan would end in 15-20 more parts may be.

Thanks guys for all your support n encouragement🤗. I lub u and on that note can u guys complete this thread😛? It could be tried at least, I will update faster😳.













Please LIKE N COMMENT if u liked the update...!!



Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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First of all Congrats for "The Century"..

It calls for a party... !00 updates down and milan is just going awesome... 🤗


Coming to the update.. It was an awesome blossom update and ofcourse the unexpected sweet twist... coz u always give jhatkas.. so this twist made a difference...

This Maan and Geet are seriously impossible... Geet is not ready to come out of her shell.. and since now maan is in this starting fresh mode and more in the love realization state, he doesnt wanna scare her or hurt her... completely hopeless cases... And so Rohan had to spike their drinks.. to make them talk and spill out atleast few things...

And i completely loved the conversation of maan and geet in that state.. i just got reminded of the maaneet before the separation.. i just could see the toy girl and her maan... they were completely cute in sharing their wishes .. their past.. their pain... the alcohol just made them shred their inhibitions and brought out their real self...

She did wait for him to come in London... but it was all too late... and something happened in India that is the reason for her depression.. and still that part of her past is yet to be revealed... the guy responsible and the extent of brutal things that happened is yet to come ...

And finally he confessed out that Jia was not his... openly... he was equally in pain... he was forced to marry shreya when his soul was Geet's.. and yet again, another blow for him awaited due to Jia... am wondering wat was with that shreya.. she seemed to be in love with maan,, but then she had another guy in her life... 😲 If just geet leaving him was so much, this added more misery and thus he became the angry MSK to mask all the betrayal and failure in his love...

Both their confessions were just so painful... they had gone thro worst without the other.. yet the way shared it was so cute... it just expressed the immense love... every talk had love.. And finally they wanted to move ahead in this rainy night... And btw it was wrong point to stop the update...

am wondering wts next... continue real soon... this is highly making me anxious...

Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Congratulation for 100th part
awesome, beautiful mind blowing part
loved it
loved the way described maaneet's condition
they r like kitne dur kitne pass
rohan is trying but as I say they need to communicate
and in their drunken state they poured out their pain, emotion
which they will never do in their original self
still there few things r unsolved will be wait with the story to know it
as geet's past and y shreaya did that cause right now the condition showing
along with maan's dad shreaya is another biggest criminal 😆 who separated maaneet and make them suffer
still want to know y shreaya did it
geet's past what happen to her
m feeling scared
maan finally confessed that jia is not his
both maaneet suffered lots and still in pain
maaneet's love passion longing craving , desire r coming out and finally they heading for the union of soul
well u stopped at wrong moment 😆
waiting for next part update soon dear
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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