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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

MISSED THIS SO WILL READ TMRW
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chola i'll start read tomorrow se ..:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO GEET AND MAAN MEET AND MAAN SAVES HER AS USUAL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part . ...
Interesting story. .
Continue soon ... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago
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Purely work of fiction as always this is creation of my mind. Every episode comes under my works.

Chapter 2

Poor girl somehow managed to sit at back seat of jeep covering face with her Dupatta .The young man her savior found her attics bit odd how she raped herself completely in dupatta


'Such a strange character' looking through front mirror he said


But he was not aware what was the reason behind her such doings. And that was her rowdy brother Brij and his goons...She got scared what will be the outcome if someone will find her sitting in a stranger's jeep? Till now her life was not more than a living disaster even if she had every thing in life, A name of well known wealth family and loving parents. But this man never let her feel that who she was.


'Bas Bas saab ji humko aap yahi utaar dejiye (Sir plz drop us here).' Ramu said pointing finger toward dispensary board


'Huh' young man at driving seat put breaks to jeep


Ramu jumped out of jeep to help Geet .She was struggling hard with own self to put a foot down out of jeep.


' Didi ji take Babaji's name and try to come out of jeep.Place ur one hand on my shoulder' Ramu who himself had been injured in all this incident tried to sympathize with her


Unbearable pain brought tears to her eyes.He savior who was just a silent spectator sitting on driver's seat till now, jumped out and in a jiffy lifted her up and took her toward dispensary


Shocked and stunned both Ramu n Geet were not able to understand what and why happened !!!


'uu uuu uuu' Geet started to hit against his chest with full blow of her fist.She was struggling hard to free herself even if she was not able to walk.


'hey why are u frowning ? hav u lost ur mantel balance ? Ek to is Baby elephant ko utha kar my arms are in pain besides being obliged u r hitting me..lo marro ' Irritated he dropped her down.But not like river side .this was hard surface so hit her badly on lower back


'Saab ji why u dropped her like this when she is already in severe pain' Ramu regretted making pity face looking at her condition.


'What ?Yeh tumne dekh liya I dropped her.But what about her ?Yeh nahi dekha tumne how she was hitting me ?' resting hand on waist he yelled.


'Saab ji u can't understand. This is rural area.No one will care whether she is not able to walk..No one ll understand the reason why u lifted her .But this can be a matter of gossip all around and to point finger toward her dignity It can create difficulty for her.Geet Didi ki family bahut conservative hai ' Ramu cleared the reason behind the odd behavior of her.

'What which kinda people u r ?..I mean people in this area 'surprised he said


'Saab ji nothing gonna change here.Let it be..as it is..Thanx alot aap humko yahan tak le aaye.Now we will go by ourselves. We are already too late.Chacha ji ne to cow ghar chod de hogi and we should also reach as soon as possible.' Ramu explained the reason behind Geet's odd behavior


'If some one has objection in this that is really pathetic. But there should be no reason to object if I drop u back.Both of you are not in condition to walk properly. Let the doctor examine u both.After that I will drop u' young man cooled down bit


'No no saab ji .I think u should go now.We will manage. No one will spare us after finding us in ur jeep.U don know her brother. He can create prob for u too without reason. Even if u helped his sister'


' Huh its all right even me don wanna put u in any trouble.I haven't know her brother otherwise I don care who he is ?' He looks back at Geet for a while and leaves the place.


What happened after that no need to tell.How both Ramu and Geet reached home in such a worse condition nobody could tell .But the news that they were spotted sitting in the jeep , had been reached home already


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Location Shift - Handa Haveli


Court had been been set.Judge was there, Prosecutor was there and the spectators all were there.But why the place Handa family seemed a court rather than a house ? 😲No doubt this was a house but the happenings in this house turned this house to be a court.


No one in this family had rite to take decision by own self coz the only decision maker of this family was Daar Ji Geet's grand father and head of Handa family. His widely used name was Chaudhary Handa but for family he wasDaar ji .Today he was judge as always and every one in this family was waiting for Geet to come .She was the main culprit today in this court and the whole jeep incident was her crime.



A poor creature who couldn't speak.Who couldn't put her side in front ofDaarji and there was no one who could help her even not her parents. No one had rite to defend her. Just prosecutor had any right in court to question any one...also to answer...and that was Brij.He gonna prove her guilty and Daarji will give his final verdict after this as punishment for her. That may be hitting her hands with stick keeping her hungry or to milk 4 cows alone without any help this was not just for Geet but for every one in family the punishment may differ but the basic thing was to give physical and mental pain.


But why Brij never became victim of Daarji's wrath ? Even if he was always guilty. Might be becoz he was the person due to whom whole community scared of Handas. It was true Daarji had good reputation as man of morals but Brij had ruined it now .It took years to establish this honorary image but now it washorror more than honor. People bow in front of Daarji more due to Brij's horror not as honor for Daarji.

Knock at door made every heartbeat fast.Every one was aware that who was outside but without Daarji's permission no one had courage to open it.


'Rano ja khol Darwaaza wahi hogi ' Daarji ordered Rano (Geet's mother) pointing his walking stick toward main door


She was waiting for it .Even she knew a new trouble for Geet was awaiting for her.She ran toward door .Rano was a mother how she could c her only daughter in pain. She was aware how she got hurt but that was an accident and the pain which was awaiting her that was intentional ...


'Meri Bacchi tumko jayada chot to nahi lagi..bollo' grabbing her in arms Rano kissed Geet number of times.'Kaha kaha kagi chot'


'Bibiji Geet Didi has pain in her pain.Doctor gave her injection. These are pills .' Ramu answered the question Rano put to geet and gave medicine in Rano's hand 'Bibiji give this pill one in morning and one in night with milk and this is pain killer balm.Massage kar dejiye isse' Finding the seriousness in air Ramu found it much better to leave

'Arre oye Didiji ke Bhai ji ? Where are you going ? ' Brij yelled at Ramu.


'Ji Veerji ' trembling in fear Ramu said in low tone.


'U haven't heared what I said. Is Goongi (dumb) k sath aaj tu behra (deaf) ho gaya hai kya' Brij came at door where Ramu was just outside threshold and Geet inside


'Veerji I have injury on my foot and knee too.Socha thoda rest kar lu after that I have to milk cattle (procedure to get milk from buffaloes n cows)' he made pity face


'When u were enjoying ride in jeep at that time pain nahi tha tumko.When u both were wandering here and there shamelessly in jeep then where was ur pain' Brij grabbed Ramu from neck.


Geet got scared and she held her mother's arm tightly.She was shivering like a dry leaf.


'Veerji what u r saying that gentle man not just saved Geet Didi when she was drowning in river also helped us to reach dispensary. He was also ready to drop us back home.But we refused.'


'From dispensary to home u came on feet it was also possible to come back home from river side to home itni chot bhi nahi hogi k doctor ko dikhna pade but this my lovely sister she might have thought this is a better chance to wander here and there .No one will question her coz this injury excuse is enough to save her' Now Brij held geet's face from cheeks with her hand and squeezed it.She was not able to say any thing just tears were rolling down from her eyes.


'Brij chod de isko dek kitni chot lagi hai..reham kar is bejubaan per' Roni folded hands in front of him


'Chachiji what punishment she deserves we will decide later let me talk to Ramu first.And u Ramu for next one week u will bring fodder for whole cattle one cycle instead of tractor and now get away from here'


'But veerji I hav injury .I am not able to walk properly then how can I do this'


'U answer me back just get out I need no excuse' Brij slapped him hard and poor guy left place wiping his eyes.


Without saying any thing he closed the door and dragged Geet inside where everyone was waiting for the verdict Daarji gonna give.


'Daarji lejiye aa gayi hamari Purkho ki izaat (dignity of family) khraab kar k saare kasbe (town) mai' ' Brij pushed her such that her in front of Darrji that she fell down on floor.

'Daarji plz forgive her..she is already in pain'Rano dared to beg in front of Darrji

'Rano chup ho jaa .and the rest of thing is she did wrong and deserves punishment for it.We don know who that stranger was who gave lift to them.But this was Geet's responsibility to keep family's dignity in mind.So my decision is she will do whole household and dairy farm cleaning alone for five days.No one will help her .' After giving his final verdict he got up from cot.


'But Daar ji how she will ?' Mohinder Geet's father who was on wheel chair said with heavy heart looking toward unfortunate daughter 'plz daar ji don do this'


'Mohinder what I said that is final and I already told no need to question me.Isse iski akal tikaaneaa jaaegi (ll come back to senses)' saying this he left.

Brij also giving victories smile joined Daarji and both left place ..


'uth (get up) Geet uth meri bacchi ' Nurpinder Brij's mother came forward and helped Geet to get up who was still in same position fallen on floor.


'Dolly ja Geet k liye haldi walla dudh le kar aa' Nurpinder asked Brij's wife and dolly ran toward kitchen

'Geet tu fikar mat kar teri Maa hai na.Daar ji aur Brij kon sa saara din ghar rehte hai we will do whole work..No one let them know'Rano rolled hand over Geet's head and every one second her.

'Kitna ghatiya (bad) baap hu main .Who can't protect his only child .' Mohinder started to cry bitterly.


Dragging her leg with difficulty Geet came near to her father and bent on knees in front of him.took his hands in hers and kissed them .Placed her head on his knees to make his feel that he was not a bad father but the circumstances were responsible.


'I feel ashamed that I m mother of this kind son.He is reason why Daarji is also becoming such rude.Kirrhe(worms) pade isko'Nurpinder cursed Brij

'Some where we r responsible for this Nurpinder.Handa family get a son after long so Brij got to much love and affection .He took it in wrong way and making every one's life hell. Nw the situation is this that we can't say any thing to him as Daarji never let us ' Brij's father was feeling really guilty for the mistake they did unintentionally.

This is heavy update I know but this is base of story and much needed update .I hope I will be in rhythm soon as I was .Hop for better

Love

Sonia

Updated after long so plz give ur feedback .It deepnds upon response I ll get.Coz this is bit not mine kind of story u will get more plz hit likes


Tense liberties always here according to the situation demand and rules of contemporary writing



Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
Maan helping Geet and brij is cheap bas***d
Pathetic
Irritating person
Geet very much in pain nd has to do whole household work for 5 days

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Posted: 12 years ago
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