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sg.dreamygirl

@sg.dreamygirl

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesomeee start...n nice charactr sketch...
So maan saved geet n geet dumb h...maan also felt little bad after hearing dis...
Different concept...waiting 4 nxt...

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divyaraghani

@divyaraghani

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Nice CS...looking forwards to read conti soon w8ing 4 more👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

nice concept 😃

geet ne to entry lete hi maan ki jeep mei kadam rakh diye 😉

👏👏👏

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Nyc start. Waiting more.
Maan ne bchaya princess ko. Gud.

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

nice concept..
would love to read it
plz continue soon

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

yet another great start
poor geet, she cant speak,
maan the hero comes to her rescue whenever she is in danger
so running after the cow can be really beneficial, afterall who knows you might get saved by a hunk!
just kidding
loved both
the character sketch and the start
looking forward to reading more parts
waiting for more
continue soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

part 1
awesome...
poor Geet...
and Maan actually helped them...
cont soon dear...

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

new one :D
congratss fr the new story

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Newton123

@Newton123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Great start sonia lovely concept liked the way u had started it now waiting for the story to be unfold do continue soon n sorry for such a late reply i'm busy with my final exams so not coming online in any of my social networking sites please bear with it for 20 more days than i will come on regular bases