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Chapter 5

Maan friends group

Adi

raj

Sameera

Maan family

Dadi

Randeep madhu - maan parents

Meera and dev - maan brother

Annie vicky - maan cousin

Geet family

Raj deepali - geet parents

A thrashed barbie chapter 5

In maan group his best friend raj ,adi or sameera ... they 4 are college friend and with their luck they 4 are working also together... raj and adi greeted geet and she silently said good evening to them like they are her teacher her way of talking made all chuckled little... but sameera don't like it as she is little selfish and she is always one and only girl in this group and when today maan eye gave attention to geet she doesn't liked this fact... and when raj saw her expression they teased her openly in playful mood now she is fuming after seeing geet who is sharing maan lunch.

"So geet which college gave you admission" sameera asked cunningly.

"Dii I didn't take admission anywhere till now" geet answered politely.

"So than how you come to khurana mansion ... I mean ...you know naa all small town girl is like that... don't be offend but this is common to them ... that trap a rich man in their fake innocence" sameera said as usual in her bitter style... raj , adi and maan don't like her way... but geet answer broke their thought.

"Ohh diii yeha aisa hota hai... i dont know much about India mai tu London se ayi hu naa tu don't have any idea" geet said very innocently without even understand taunt in sameera question... her eye are telling she just answered casually.

Adi and raj want to control their laugh but at last they burst into fit of laughter ... and sameera cunning mind is thinking geet insulted her purposely... but the one person is fuming in anger.

"Sameera next time think before you speak ... did you get that?" Maan said in very serious but slow tone.

Sameera just nodded her head and left from there... she is so angry "how dare he... MK warn me for that bi****. She is not going to leave her that is her promise again like last time which she made to maan wife's and her best friend Rasal... rasal only mistake is that she took MK away from me... MK is only mine and if someone come in between us ... they will pay with their life..." sameera thought and laughed like manic... she is obsessing for maan... which is too dangerous.

Sameera is in their group because she was rasal best friend and maan loved rasal like anything but 3 yr ago when maan was 21 yr old and newly married to rasal ...

That day maan was happy beyond his expectation as his 4 yr love is now become a life time commitment ... he is in mansion with his friend and his wife rasal is in outhouse as he planned a special sr for rasal and girls leave rasal in outhouse and come out to take maan but one blast turned all marrige house into a haunted house ... and maan life turned out black as his newly wedded wife is no more ... whole outhouse is turned out into ashes maan only got his maa kangane which he himself made rasal wear them but they caught maan eye and there is only one singed is left of rasal was his maa kangan nothing else not even a body so he will cried at least heart out all thought this is a accident but reality is always bitter which no one knows till today... that was the day maan closed his all desires and davotee his life for other seriously ... rasal is always alive in his heart but he never talked about her with anyone after that day ... maan took whole 6 months to come out from this loss but he did it for his family who are equally dying to see him like dead so maan decided to live his life for his family. He just forget everything as Randeep wants from him but deep down this pain buried in his heart.

Maan hearts sang only this lines again and again

Kyu ye waqt tham jata hai ek pal

Kyu saanse atak jati hai ek pal

Kyu zindgi darti hai ek pal

Kyu zindgi hasati hai ek pal

Kyu jeena majburi sa lagta hai ek pal

Kyu har saas bhoj sii lagti hai ek pal

Kyu ye ek pal ban jata kisi ki zindgi ka har pal

Akhir kyu aata hai ye ek pal.

Why time stopped at one moment

Why breath stuck at one moment

Why life is scared at one moment

Why life laughed at one moment

Why you have to live in helplessness at moment

Why every breath turned debt at one moment

Why this one moment become life's every moment

Why did this one monent come at one monent.

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At 8 pm

Maan is working in his cabin and geet was just sitting in one corner and reading some magazines which some ladies doctor gave her for time pass ... maan is so busy in his patients files he is perfectionists in every case so he studies case first than start their treatment... he can also understand geet conditions but his assumptions about geet is locking his way of mind... a prior assumptions is always a huddle to understand them well and naintara experience made maan more conscious.

Here geet is feeling so bore as there is nothing for her ... and on other side her fear from maan is making her situation hell.

"Are you hungry" maan asked while closing his bag.

Geet nodded her head in no...

"Ok than we will eat after reaching home" maan spoke and stand to leave for home.

Geet again nod in yes

"Geet you can talk with me... there is rule to be talk in signals" maan spoke sarcastically.

"Nahi vo tu" geet tried to form a stance but maan gave his hand to her leave from there... his cell buzz on right moment and saved with this awkward situation... she is not comfortable to hold his hand but if she denied it that must be look rude.

Maan is taking on phone and otherside holding geet hands and they come out in the parking lot as maan always prefered to walk till parking as he worked all day in his cabin only but now geet understood why he hold he hand as in front of his jet like speed she is nearly running but don't have any guts to maan to walk little slow but she glad that he is holding her hand or else she will be somewhere left behind.. other hand maan didnt had any idea about all this he is walking in his normal pace and talking on his phone.. But to geet reliefs they reached to the car and maan made her sat inside and himself took driver seat and cut the call.. he turned to see geet and to his astonishment she is drenched in sweat and her face is red.

"What happened geet any problem" maan asked in concern.

"Vo you are walking very fast so" geet tried to spoke meekly but maan understand as rasal always complained about his fast pace.. maan sighed and gave water bottle to geet.

"Geet! You are new in our life.. You have to tell us about your problem, like dislike and everything so we didn't hurt you unknowingly like morning incident now again.. you have to learn to speak for herself than only people consider you or else how they supposed to know about you.. we are human dear and will understand you yes it will take little time in twinning but it's not impossible.. dad accept you as khurana family and all of us also.. so I will appreciate if you tell us your problem instead of bear pain and leave us in remorse.. I know meera and from morning she is blaming herself.. now again you did same thing and left me in guilty so its really helpfull if you say instead of wait that we come to know after some disaster incident ok" maan tried to make her understand as she is going to live with them if she will be like this than this will be a headache so its better she talk.. and he liked bold girls who can stand for themselves he is little surprised also as geet is from London but still she look so innocent like a dew drop.. but maan brain is still not able to believe her fully because of his younger brother dev past and how nainrara fooled them with fake innocence.

After this long speech of maan geet only nodded her head in yes and made maan sighed on her silent behavior no matter what.. but she love to talked in signal language... with a long breath maan starts car and they both leave for km.

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They come to km which is drowning in scary silences which is unlike to km as his dad and younger sister and brother is always made lively to km but right now his sister annie and brother vicky is left to on trip of college... dev and meera or his mom dad.. maan and vicky annie lived there in km only.. vicky and annie is there cousin but after maan chacha chachi death they are adopted by randeep so they never feel lonely that time they were just 5 yr old so for them only randeep amd madhu is their mom dad... dadi is right now not here.. she wants to some relative.

They come inside where chinu dadi favorite servant is waiting for them for dinner.

"Where are others chinu" maan asked and rest on the couch.

"Arre saab jii they tried to call you because of bed wather there they will not able to come till tomorrow morning.. when you didnt receive call they left message with me.. khana laga du saab jii" chinu asked from both maan and geet.

Geet felt little scared to be here in so big house alone with a man who hate her.

"What will happen if some ghost try to eat me.. ye tu bachye ge bhi nahi mere ko" geet murmured and fear is visiable on her face.

Precap: maneet in one room and a leap of 2 yr in upcoming parts.

Thanks for all likes and comments they all are encouraged me so much to write further.

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nice part
such a cute innocent geet
some ghost may eat her hahaha

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