A Thrashed barrbie#1/added thread 2 pg 1 - Page 13

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

😆arre sorry kyu mai sab ko itna rula rahi hu thora tu mere ko bhi rona banta hai

and welcome to my writing world i know this is your first comment😳😛

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

no chappal

pleaseee

for late entry

hehhehehe tomato chale ge kya😆

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

hehhehehe tomato chale ge kya😆

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

please black salt bhi aath main😉😆😆

lol yeha tu party kA Program hai

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

lol yeha tu party kA Program hai

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

kabhi saamne aa kar

mujhe paas bula kar

woh mujh se milla bhi nahi

mere apno ne diye ,

jo jakham

jo sitam

aur tod diya mera har bharam

saath tha umar bhar ka

par woh saath na chale do kadam

to aise main ,

inka mujhe apnana

mere har zakham(emotional one) ko dekh kar bhi bhul jaana

kasoor inka toh nahi

jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi

aur

main unse baat karu

itna mujhme bhi toh hosla nahi

woh maang rahe hai ,

mere sach hone ka saboot

chahte hai mujhse ,

suraj ki roshni

aur dhoop

par yeh unse kaise main kahu

main sach hu din ke ujjale ki tarah

koi raat ka adhuraa khaab nahi

haan ,

yeh aur baat hai

unko dikha saku main yeh ssab

iske liye ,mere paas

suraj ki roshni to kya ,

ik mitti ke diye ki roshni ka saath bhi nahi

still more

you know what i am speechless i means you said geet pov so beautifully that i dont know what to say the comparison between dhoop and adhara ohh god awesome

and this line i just love it by my heart

jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi

will use this poem in next chap

@ bulbul.A :

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

@ bulbul.A :

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you really like it

Nishu I love it
Its so beautiful yaar just like moti (pearl)

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

<font color="#990000">kabhi saamne aa kar</font>

<font color="#990000">mujhe paas bula kar</font>

<font color="#990000">woh mujh se milla bhi nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">
</font>

<font color="#990000">mere apno ne diye ,</font>

<font color="#990000">jo jakham</font>

<font color="#990000">jo sitam</font>

<font color="#990000">aur tod diya mera har bharam</font>

<font color="#990000">saath tha umar bhar ka</font>

<font color="#990000">par woh saath na chale do kadam</font>

<font color="#990000">to aise main ,</font>

<font color="#990000">inka mujhe apnana</font>

<font color="#990000">mere har zakham(emotional one) ko dekh kar bhi bhul jaana</font>

<font color="#990000">kasoor inka toh nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">aur</font>

<font color="#990000">main unse baat karu</font>

<font color="#990000">itna mujhme bhi toh hosla nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">
</font>

<font color="#990000">woh maang rahe hai ,</font>

<font color="#990000">mere sach hone ka saboot</font>

<font color="#990000">chahte hai mujhse ,</font>

<font color="#990000">suraj ki roshni</font>

<font color="#990000">aur dhoop</font>

<font color="#990000">par yeh unse kaise main kahu</font>

<font color="#990000">main sach hu din ke ujjale ki tarah</font>

<font color="#990000">koi raat ka adhuraa khaab nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">haan ,</font>

<font color="#990000">yeh aur baat hai</font>

<font color="#990000">unko dikha saku main yeh ssab</font>

<font color="#990000">iske liye ,mere paas</font>

<font color="#990000">suraj ki roshni to kya ,</font>

<font color="#990000">ik mitti ke diye ki roshni ka saath bhi nahi</font>

<font color="#990000">still more</font>

you know what i am speechless i means you said geet pov so beautifully that i dont know what to say the comparison between dhoop and adhara ohh god awesome

and this line i just love it by my heart

<font color="#990000">jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi</font>

will use this poem in next chap

I just love your all poems in all ff

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

you know what i am speechless i means you said geet pov so beautifully that i dont know what to say the comparison between dhoop and adhara ohh god awesome

and this line i just love it by my heart

<font color="#990000">jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi</font>

will use this poem in next chap

I just love your all piems in all ff