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Sonali

@maaneetkisonali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

loved this story a lots di... thanks for penning it down... i m sooo much hating geet's parents they r soo mean to her... can understand that she was an unwanted child in their life but she was their own daughter how could they behave so rudely with her...😡

poor geet she always craved for love but her parents always thought her as a burden..😭

maan is also right as no one can trust a stranger but hope he does not hurt geet in this...

i m sure now geet will get te love of a family n she will accept khurana's...

waiting for precap...

maanu plz geet ko jam mat khane dena...

waiting for nxt...

update soon...😊

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

hmm nyc part dii

but i hate the the people most n they are geet's parents ases thore hote h koi parents ...but randeep is nyc man..

he wants to keep geet n take care of her

n my poor soul nobody is asking to her wish

n here too geet ko shock pe shock mil rahe h

maan ki baate sun ke or dukhi ho gae geet

waiting for next...

precap quite interesting

geet ko jam se allergy h ..dekhte h kya hota h aage me waiting

Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Great update👏

Poor geet😭😭...Her family was heartless😡

Waiting for next part

Continue soon

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Geet's parents really they r heartless.. They don't even deserve to called be a parents.. Poor Geet.. Maan's talk... She will be definitely hurt... Hope Maan will manofy Geet. Nice update...😊

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

amazing painfull update...

poor geet.. feelng soo bad 4 her...

kaise parents haii geet k... geet iz dere child... der r soo selfish mean .. hate dem...

w8ng eagerly 4 next...

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

can i writ few lines dear

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
can i writ few lines dear

sure dear why not me waiting for ur poem

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

sure dear why not me waiting for ur poem

it officially my first comment

and

after rading part

poem wil be saddy dear

pahle hi sorry😉

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

kabhi saamne aa kar

mujhe paas bula kar

woh mujh se milla bhi nahi

mere apno ne diye ,

jo jakham

jo sitam

aur tod diya mera har bharam

saath tha umar bhar ka

par woh saath na chale do kadam

to aise main ,

inka mujhe apnana

mere har zakham(emotional one) ko dekh kar bhi bhul jaana

kasoor inka toh nahi

jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi

aur

main unse baat karu

itna mujhme bhi toh hosla nahi

woh maang rahe hai ,

mere sach hone ka saboot

chahte hai mujhse ,

suraj ki roshni

aur dhoop

par yeh unse kaise main kahu

main sach hu din ke ujjale ki tarah

koi raat ka adhuraa khaab nahi

haan ,

yeh aur baat hai

unko dikha saku main yeh ssab

iske liye ,mere paas

suraj ki roshni to kya ,

ik mitti ke diye ki roshni ka saath bhi nahi

hop you like it

sorry for mistake

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

it officially my first comment
and
after rading part
poem wil be saddy dear
so
pahle hi sorry😉

😆arre sorry kyu mai sab ko itna rula rahi hu thora tu mere ko bhi rona banta hai

and welcome to my writing world i know this is your first comment😳😛

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