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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
hello my dear readers😊
I know I have kept u all waiting for so long n couldn't even post the promised update. I m really sorry about that. My exam were suddenly preponed at last moment. but now mid terms r over n end sem is a bit far. So, I have sometime. I'll be posting the next part by the weekend as I m updating epi for TOFL 2morrow...but inorder to keep u all going, I'll posting a teaser...hope it'll satisfy u till saturday😉😆




TEASER-



They parted with the sudden interruption in the form of knock on the door. Maan grinned looking at a flushed geet, while geet looked everywhere, but him. A nurse entered the room with a tray in her hand.

Yes sister...maan asked turning his eyes towards the nurse.

Sir, its time for your sponge bath...she replied in a voice which instantly caught geet's attention, coz it was the tone which almost all nurses and lady doctors of this damn hospital uses on seeing her maan. She looked at the smitten look on the nurse's face and fumed more if that was possible.

Maan too noticed geet shooting daggers at the poor oblivious nurse knowing the reason very well, but then the devil inside him couldn't let go of the golden chance.

Smirking inwardly, he focussed his attention back to the nurse, still keeping an eye on geet from the corner of his eyes, maan said...oh...!!...thats so nice of you sister. I was feeling sticky in these cloths...and then turned to look at his fuming lady added with a smirk...can't wait to get out of these damn cloths...the last words laced with pure seductive touch and there saw the desired reaction as geet's jaws formed the hugest 'o' so far...!!



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Thanks for being there with me during everything. Bhai is one of the most important person in my life and if something...she could easily sense him choking up and placed a hand on his shoulders...

Hey, its okay. I haven't done anything special and if I start my thank you speech then it'll probably take the whole week to finish. So, there is no need...sneha gave him a cute smile making him smile as well.

He kept looking at her for some time and then whispered looking straight in her eyes...I love you, sneha...!!


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Stay away from meera...she said with a stern look on her face, while dev stood there dumbfounded. But then he thought she was again in one of her 'possessive best friend' mode...

Oh come on yaar, don't you think your dialogue has become boring...he chuckled and tried to move, when she blocked his path.

I am serious...!!

Her voice was very calm, but strict giving dev the feel that she was actually serious.

Whats wrong with you...??...and she is my friend as well, so there is no way I am doing that...he replied a bit agitated this time. He walked past her and was about to leave the room, when she blurted out...

I saw you both upstairs and I have been watching you in goa as well...!!




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c ya with the update soon😉

love

anupam
Edited by shining_moon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
amazing tsr..cant wait for update..geet going to kill the nurse😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63


welcome back... missed u... hope ur exams went well...

teaser was lovely... especially maaneets... me on dreamy mode...

will be waitinggg

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
will be waiitng dear
but say me do u want to update BTMD
or not
do u discontinue or stop tht ff abruptly dear
pls update
it had been ages
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

amazing tsr..cant wait for update..geet going to kill the nurse😆😆😆


yeah, but what about maan...??😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



welcome back... missed u... hope ur exams went well...

teaser was lovely... especially maaneets... me on dreamy mode...

will be waitinggg



aww...I missed u too...all my readers n frnds😊
exams toh humehsa hi achche jaate hain, don't know about results though😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: gmskasrkmadhu

will be waiitng dear

but say me do u want to update BTMD
or not
do u discontinue or stop tht ff abruptly dear
pls update
it had been ages


hey
I have just now posted a teaser for BTBD...check it out😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
wonderful teaser
looking forward for Dev's track
Maan gayi kaam sae .. sherni ab chup nahi rahenwali !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
finally teaser to mila 🤔ab update k liye doubt he mujhe abhi bhi
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
teaser
excellent...
now Maan is gonna see Geet's anger...
someone help him...
what did Dev do now?
cont soon dear...

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