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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

last part
awesome dear...
loved it...
she got her share of happiness...

epilogue
lovely dear...
nice story...

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Dragon-Heart

@Dragon-Heart

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: Rajshree12
Richuuu..itni jaldi kyu khatam kar di yeh story...
I ws loving it ssoo much...
Btw read all three parts...
Superbbb updates..
Dev is such a b******..finally Geet came to know his real face & he got his punishment...
Geet came to know tht Maan is Samarth's son..poor Geet again thinking tht Maan also betrayed her...
Loved the way Maan manaofied her...
Finally happy ending...
Lived yhe story a llloottt...

sweety its an OS thats why :-

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

wow loved the last part shona haaye geet is in her sherni mode and then maan is all bent to melt her uff their passionate kiss was so hot...haayee loved the epilogue sweety hmm maaneet are all in full swing to have each other desperately...loved the story so much dear aise hi story ko likhna i love toe read urs...🤗

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Gurtian....

@Gurtian....

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

suprb ending!!!loved d whole story so much...

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maaneetkimeet

@maaneetkimeet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

awesome superb duper hit update

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Rose.Mahek22

@Rose.Mahek22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

sweet si story ka sweet sa romantic end ...

loved it Richa

dev was out of their lives and maaneet got happily married ...

thnx for pms dear

much love Rose

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

part 4

awesome update

maan getting protectivetowards geet

maaneet getting closer to each other

kamini sam

like the dialogues

tum mujhe itni zorse kyu dant rae ho? Aramse b to yai baat bol skte ho. Ek to mera sar dard ho raha hai uparse tum mujhe dante ja rae ho'.

sho cute

maan good news hai',she said innocently.

'itni jaldi?abi tak to maine kuchh kia b nai?'

Geet gave him a deadly glare and he sealed his lips,not with her. 😉

shish rich

chhi chhi babaji ye larki kya kya sochti he ..har seal ka matlab lip seal nai hota wese ..

wese mene lip seal hi socha tha ..loll☺️

ops maan told her about him living in hotel

now geet finding a place for him to live

maaneet passionate moment

stupid caller ..😡🤢