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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

just came across ur ff...

read the whole story in a go...

loved how u weaved the story...

the ending too was lovely...

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

awesome yar...loved it so much😃...will miss it😭

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

It was amazing stry dear... Aww... Geet gussa thi bt maan ne mana hi liya & nw dey r happily married... Epilogue was hot wid our romantic maaneet... Wud miss dis stry...

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

that was the perfect end for a heartfelt story richaa

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

a beautiful end fr d story...

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Awesome update ...
geet come to know abt maan is that he is msk ...
maan manofying geet...
maaneet getting married n settle in india ...

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megha

@totinee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

itne mindblowing update read karkevi main dukhi hun?u knw why?that's becoz it's an end.ye OS mujhe bohot pasand thi.just awsm!!!!!!!

God bless u Richi...

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sg.dreamygirl

@sg.dreamygirl

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Superbbb...mindblowinggg update...

In starting geet's reaction was normal..first dev's betrayal n now suddenly dis new relatnshp...she was nt ready for dis...

Maan also got impatient as she is nt picking up d phn n went to her house...bt geet told him nt to cum again...
After dat geet's nightmare n maan ki wo baat mein apna chehra kbhi nhi dekhaunga geet mein dimaag mein aati rahi...she sensed sumthng bad may hv happnend...n den went to house n office n followed dev n finally maan tak pahunch gayi...

Maaneet hug n nokjhok..haayyyeee..
Thnk god geet called d polce on time n maaneet ko kuch nhi hua...
N geet ne achha jawab diya dev ko...
bt lst mein maan is samarth sir 's son ye janne k baad geet again felt betrayed bcz maan ne use kuch nhi bataya tha...

Awesomeee part...
Police also arrived finally...

Edited by sg.dreamygirl - 12 years ago

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sg.dreamygirl

@sg.dreamygirl

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Superbbb update...

Maaneet ruthna manana was so emotional...
Geet was crying n nt ready to listen anythng so he kissed her...
Kya idea h maan ka geet ko chup karane k liye hayyyeee...

Finally geet maan gayi...n said those three magical words to maan..haayyyeee..loved it...

Finally Maaneet ki shaadi hogayi...n maan thik se office bhi nhi jata h...daily honeymoon ;)
Sooo passionate n romantic part...
Finally end ho gaya...bt maaneet became one..loved it a lottt..will miss dis stry a lottt.n thnxxx a lottt 4 giving us a wonderful stry...

Edited by sg.dreamygirl - 12 years ago

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Richuuu..itni jaldi kyu khatam kar di yeh story...
I ws loving it ssoo much...
Btw read all three parts...
Superbbb updates..
Dev is such a b******..finally Geet came to know his real face & he got his punishment...
Geet came to know tht Maan is Samarth's son..poor Geet again thinking tht Maan also betrayed her...
Loved the way Maan manaofied her...
Finally happy ending...
Lived yhe story a llloottt...