MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate#2 **pt 20 Pg 28 11/3/14** ^ - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plzzz update...
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Waiting...
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sorry dear ..me having my pre-boards these days
me typing but still at a very snail speed ..

so only no update ..😭


really sorry to keep u all awaiting for this one for so long ...

hope i ll be able to complete it soon ...😕

will try n be back ASAP ..😊

luv ya
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yup ...😊
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Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


sorry dear ..me having my pre-boards these days
me typing but still at a very snail speed ..

so only no update ..😭


really sorry to keep u all awaiting for this one for so long ...

hope i ll be able to complete it soon ...😕

will try n be back ASAP ..😊

luv ya
sobia


OK dear...we'll wait..




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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOOD NEWS

hi all,
good news .. i got an unexpected holiday
so posting all my banked updates today ...😳

anyone waiting thr ..???
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Originally posted by: singh24


OK dear...we'll wait..





thank u for the wishes dear ..
but guess what i got an unexpected holiday today due to heavy rain so updating it all ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi all,
one big SORRY for not updating it for so long ..😳
but ii was in a flow with dastaan than my tests held me busy throughout ..

but now i have 2 days continuous gap before my final pre-boards so updating all my works be4 taking an official leave till the month of june ..
ill be typing its n bits of all in between though but updating i am not if ill be updating or not .. so u all might get a surprise upate in between which is very rare ..still ill try ..🤢

n for now utilizing my unexpected holiday due to heavy rain i am updating it ...😳
hope this 7000+ update will be enough for my delay ..

thnks a ton for all ur support ... i have given STORY TILL NOW at first page so those who any kind of mis conceptions or confusions plzz read it once plzzz ...😃
i have given the CS for upcoming character in this story ...n

here i am introducing another character .. sorry i didn't planned to reveal his part but went with the flow when typing so here is the villain of this story ..

Sukhlal Handa



he is the eldest son of geet's Darji ..Mohinder's elder brother
he cunning ..selfish ..greedy for money .. n can even kill his own blood for money n status ..
he has been influencing darji ever since Mohinder left HP with his wife ... n they point of edge he has is his Son Brij who is the Waris of Handa clan since they still don't consider TEJ thr legitimate heir with all thr heart though they pretend they have forgotten n forgiven Raghav for his past deeds but inside they haven't ...
a single hint ...all what happened to geet is because of HIM ...
lives in HP ..never comes here coz all the affairs of HP is handled by him only ..
Brij is his Son .. follows every command of his bauji ..
he is a fierce person ..dare devil ..a very cunning cruel person ..

another point ..

Tej has left handa House 2 years back when he took geet with him to mumbai .. n is no more in contact with any of Handa family ... geet leaves with Tej but now a days being a police officer he is under ground ..

hope u will enjoy this one as well..
will be waiting for ur reviews n likes

enjoy reading
luv ya all
sobia



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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THE DARK ANGEL
OF FATE ...!!

plss see the above note n the fonts in Blue are the blur images what maan sees ..


PART 16

Geet : nahi maan ...aaj ke baad aapko iss ghar aur apni life ki sachai batane ki galti nahi kar sakti mien ...
(smiled bitterly) .. brij handa ke ek thore se rough behavior se aap itna ghussa hugaye ...agar sach pata chal gaya tou aapka ghussa mere mummy aur papaji ke iss parivaar ko bikhir dega ... manti hoon mere liye yeh parivaar koi mayne nahi rakhta ..but mere mummy aur papaji ke liye tou rakhta tha ... aaj tak apni life apne liye jee hai maan ...pehli baar kuch apne parents ke liye karna chahti hoon .. plss mujhe rokne ke baare mien mat sochna ..
(removed her tears) .. mien khush hoon ke mera idiot dost aaj bhi meri ankhen parh sakta hai ...but i am sorry maan mien shayad abb aap par utna vishvaash nahi kar sakti ... apni problem mien khud hi solve karloongi ... i just hope aap yeh sab serious na lo aur bhool jao aaj ka yeh din ...



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Aniee n maan went to KM nearly at 4 ..the day was super un predictable for both in thr own ways … but for maan his life has turned 360 degrees .. geet's state all the info he got about her n his friendship …the way dadi maa is still un aware of the actual turmoil she went through … the fact how much she would have been hurt when he didn't took geet with him on his dad's funeral 😭..damit she couldn't even see him for the last time ..the person she loved so much ..the person who held so much of importance in her life ..she couldn't even see his face for the last time …his heart was aching all the time thinking about geet ..then her words he heard ..the way she was cribbing about him 😃..a tear skipped from his eye 😭..remembering her tearful hazels when he called her gudya ..thr was so much hope ..happiness filled in her with just his mere word ..what would have she gone through when he out right neglected her presence in front of him in all those years .. the way aniee n dadi maa are sure that its only him …geet will tell her heart .. it made him actually realize the fact how much geet must have trusted him ONCE in her life ..

Occupied with all the thoughts of the day sleep took over his tired eyes …

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A new day n new journey to be started .. clueless of what in store for them the 3 souls were sleeping in thr respective rooms …aniee in her deep princess sleep ..geet bit disturbed restless in her sleep …while maan sleeping thr uterly disturbed with some faint images of two children a boy n a girl playing guitar n the girl dancing …the melody was beautiful …thr were few elders sitting thr clapping at the end while the girl jumped up in joy …the sounds of her ghungroo echoing in maan's mind making him turn right to left ..sweating ..

It was 8 already ..all the servants were checking the clocks since 10 minutes checking if they are working or not .. guards were astonished .. n the moment dadi maa came out from mandir all the worried faces turned to her .. n finally nakul told dadi maa ..

Nakul : dadi maa …8 baj gaye maan baba abhi tak apne room se bahar nahi aye ..aaj subha jog par bhi nahi gaye … aap dekheye na ..

Dadi maa looked worried of course she knew y is this happening the only thing she worried was maan's health .. she didn't wanted him to suffer again .. it was so painful to see him struggling to remember his own childhood memories n now she don't want to experience it all over again .. entering maan's room praying for well being of her son ..she sat beside him only to see him in deep sleep .. n some tensed lines on his forehead with sweat beads .. she guessed may be he was again having some flashes from his past ..caressing his fore head she sat thr little longer n then after one hour when his mbl buzzed with adi's call she went out to cancel all his meetings for the day ..

Dadi maa : adi maan ki tabiyat theek nahi hai …unki aaj ki saari meetings aap cancle kar dejiye hum aur koi stress nahi dena chahte maan ko abhi ..aur kuch time ke liye dhayaan rakheyega ke office ki tensions maan se door hi rahen ..

Adi : wohh sab mien dekh longa dadi maa ….par maan theek hain na .. I mean kuch ziada ..

Dadi maa : aap shaam ko ghar aaiye hum aapko sab batate hian ..

Adi : gi ..aap apna aur maan ka khyal rakhiyega kuch bhi kaam hu plss mujhe zaror call kar dejeyega ..

Dadi maa disconnected the call n went to cancel her NGO meetings ..

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KC ..

Pinky : WHAT …dd u mean MAAN sir aaj office nahi arahe ..
Adi sir koi mazaak tou nahi hai naa ..???

Adi : nahi pinky ji sach mien Maan sir aaj office nahi arahe unki tabiyat theek nhi hai

Pinky (low) : oh kya huya DD ko ..??

Adi : not sure of anything ..(st) i just hope mien jo soch raha hoon wohh galat hu .. kahin fir se maan sir ko stress attack nahi aaya ..geet delhi mien hi hai ..tou kahin uss se tou mille maan sir ..aur aniee bhi agayi hai ..

Sasha (opened the door of pinky's cabin with a thud) : ADI ..MK ko kya huya hai ..

Adi (amused n bit teasing tone) : ziada kuch nahi bas rooz rooz faltu log aur unki faltu batien sun sun kar unki tabiyat kharab hugayi hai ..

Sasha (got offended knowing he was refering to her) : WHAT DO U MEAN …??

Romeo : adi sir kuch serious tou nahi hai na ..??

Adi : ehehehe (his typical smile) .. arre Romeo babu humien tou laga aap sab log yeh sun kar khush hunge ke Maan sir aaj office nahi arahe ..

Pinky (angry) : kya matab hai aapka adi sir ..(turned her face away) ..

Romeo: adi sir hum bhale hi unke childhood friend na hu aapki tarha but MK ki izzat tou hum zaror karte hai ..😃

Adi (encircled his shoulder sideways said lightly) : mujhe tou laga aap log sirf MK ki respect unse darr kar karte hain ..

Romeo : MK se tou India ki PM tak darrte hain 😆…(laughs)… but sir hum tou apne aap ko khush naseeb samajhte hain ki MK jaise malik mile humien .. galti karne par dant parti hai tou ache kaam par shabashi bhi tou di hai unhoon ne …aaj jo kuch bhi hoon iss company aur MK ki waja se hi hoon …unka boora kabhi nahi chahonga mien ..

Pinky : wohh tou hai Adi sir ..hum MK ko hitler ..DD jo bhi keh lein but humare dil mien unki izzat kabhi kam nahi hu sakti ..

Tasha : hugi bhi kaise ..humare DD hain hi itne ache …kyun sasha (got a fuming glare from her).. I mean Maam …

Adi : chalo abb MK ke gon baad mien gana tum log sab kaam karo coz MK sirf aaj hi office nahi arahe kal office ayenge tou poori report mange na tou sari izzat waigaira bhool jaoge sab ..chalo kam par ..

Tasha : yeah right .. Pinky : true .. bhago

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Handa House ..

In the hall brij was fumingly narrating last night's incident to darji …n after that darji got worried ..

Darji : humien 2 saal pehle kahe huye geet ke shabd sach hote nazar arahe hain Brij … agar iss hi tarha Maan Khurana ke saamne sab raaz khulte gaye tou hum kahenke nahi rahenge … 13 saaloon ki mehnat par pani phir jayega …yaad hai na tumhain… kya kaha tha iss geet ne 2 saal pehle Mumbai jaate waqt ..

Brij went to flashback n remembers a 19 years old geet standing in the same hall bit bruised .. standing beside TEJ HANDA ..

Geet : akhri baar kehh rahi hoon aap log se ..galti bhi mat kariyega apne iss gande khel mien MAAN 😳 ko shamil karne ki …warna mien jo bhi gawaoongi (looses) wohh tou baad ki bat hai par itna yaqeen zaror rakhiyega ke sachai janne ke baad Maan aapko log ko nahi chorega 😉..iss liye mien chup hoon tou mujhe chup rehne dena 🤢…aur aaj ke baad dobara kabhi mere papaji aur mummiji ke iss ghar ki taraf palat kar bhi mat dekhna .. just go away ..😡😡

Brij came back to his senses when Raghav entered in the hall with an aching head due to last night's hang over ..n palavi came running from kitchen to hold his stumbling body ..

Darji (fumingly) ; lee ja isko bahu humari nazroon se door .. aaj iss ki iss hi sharaab ki adat ne humien iss musibat mien dala hai .. iss ki waja se hi uss geet ko sab sachai pata chali ..lekar jaa is ko yahan se ..

Palavi : ji …ji bauji (to raghav).. chaliye aap ..

But he snapped out of her hold …n stood in front of darji ..

Raghav : meri waja se ..?? bauji aap iss haal mien apni waja se hain aur apne uss bare BETE Sukhlal Handa ki waja se 😡😡..mere pujniye BARE BHAI SAHAB ..khud tou HP mien araam kar rahe hain aur yahan …yahan uss Maan Khurana naam ki talwaar ke samne mujhe latka rakha hai …meri hi galti hai ..agar 16 saal pehle aap log ke jaal mien na ata tou aaj kam se kam mera beta tou mujh se itni nafrat na karta …
Aapki waja se …sirf apki waja se aaj mera beta TEJ meri shakal nahi dekhna chahta .. ek sach …Bade Bhai sahab ke kehne par kiye huye ek dhoke ne mujhe meri bete se hi door kar diya …uss ek sachai ko jaan kar itne saloon ka baap beta rishta tor diya TEJ ne .. aur abb bhi aap keh rahe hain ke meri waja se yeh sab … sach tou yeh hai ke aap log ki hawas ne aur meri bewakoofi ne humien iss haal tak laya hai …par afsoos iss baat ka hai ke abb bhi aap log sambhal nahi rahe …
Brij : chotte chacha ji ..bas kariye ..oyee chachi lee jaa inko yahan se .. (palavi came forward but raghav didn't let her drag him)

Raghav : choro mujhe palavi …inki waja se hum ne humare bete ki shakal nahi dekhi hai 2 saal se … kya galat kiya mene ..boliye ..kya galat kiya ..nahi jhel paa raha tha 16 saloon se iss jurm ka bujh (burden) mien apne seene par … iss hi liye 2 saal pehle sharaab ke nashe mien mene sab bata diya geet ko .. kho diya apna beta aur geet ki nazroon mien apni izzat bhi ..(he was roaring in his frustration n palavi stood thr crying looking at Tej's pic hanging in one corner of the hall)

Geet who was till now in sleeping with great difficulty since the night's event was her reason to worry …woke up listening to the high pitch voice of Raghav ..n came out stood at the stair case with a cold blank look in her eyes as if nothing bothers her anymore …indeed after 2 years of suffering she has become cold to this family …but still thr is a string which is holding her here is HER PARENTShis father loved this younger brother of his to his dear life n that's the reason geet never says a words to him but her cold eyes filled with accusations is enough to make Raghav feel her hatred … but brij is not so pious to feel such feeling like guilt or any other morals … neither darji has any soft corner for this girl child of thr family who never lived with them ever ..but still his worry is now what will happen is she said all the truth to maan ..no doubt she was right Maan Singh Khurana will never leave them even in hell for thr deeds .. but now they can't do anything they themselves have made savitri devi think about geet n maan 's alliance by thr continuous reminders of thr parent's wish ..over last 6 months ever since geet passed her Graduation n completed her 6 month training period .. they were trying to persuade Savitri devi to come along with maan for this alliance though not directly but yes indirectly they were reminding her of maaneet's late parent's last wish ..

Raghav stood thr with his head dipped down seeing geet witnessing it all while …n geet went in her room ..n dropped down on her bed ..with a lone tear skipping her eye gazing her parent's pic ..n here down stairs after raghav left the hall with palavi ..



Darji : brij tou apne ghusse par qabu rakh abb uss Maan ke samne .. aur tab tak mien kushish karta hoon iss shaddi ki baat ko jaldi age barhane ki …

Brij : par darji woh larki ..

Darji : mat bholo ke galti hum ne ki hai …aur 2 saal pehle hum sab se bacha kar TEJ usko mumbai legaya tha .. agar 2 saal pehle TEJ ne usko bachaya na hota tou aaj halat alag hote …par abhi ke liye tumhain apna ghussa qabu mien rakhna huga ..ek baari geet ki shaddi hujaye maan se fir sab apna hi hai …na uss larki ko jhelna huga na hi iss nikamme bete Raghav ko …tou apne bauji ko bol ke waqeel se keh kar kagzaat ban wale ..

Brij : ji darji mien bauji ko HP phone lagata hoon .. wohh hi chandigar mien apne waqeel ko boldenge ..

On call with Sukhlal Handa ..

Brij : bauji ..darji ka kehna hai ke humien abb ziada dair nahi karni chahiye iss larki ki shaddi mien ..wohh savitri ji se baat karne wale hain ..aur aap wahan saare kanooni kagzaat banwa lejeye ..

Sukhlal (beamed in happiness) : wah putar kya khabar di hai … abb iss shadi ke baad hum par se saare karze (loan) utar jayenge aur who kulta ..woh bhi humare khandan se chali jayegi …

Brij (reluctant n scared as well) : par bauji agar iss geet ne maan ko kuch bata diya tou ..

Sukhlal : brij putar tu abb tak iss geet ko samjha nahi … agar iss ko kuch bolna hota tou kab ka bol deti savitri devi ko ..par nahi kaha iss ne ..
Iss ki yahi achai iss ki kamzoori banegi … tu dekhna ..yeh maan khurana ko kuch keh nahi payegi aur meri agya kari chote bhai ki saari jayedaad (property) humari mothi mien hugi …

Brij : hmm ..

Sukhlal : bas ek baat ka dhayaan rakhna …geet ko maan se ziada milne mat dena ..aur uss Tej se bach kar rehna ..

Brij : gi aap fiqar na karo ..

Sukhlal : tab tak mien yahan saari tyaari karta hoon ..

Brij : namaste bauji ..

N the call ended ..

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@ KM it was 10 am n maan's fever was lightened with constant cold water cloth remedy of dadi maa who was still thr taking care of him ..n finally he opened his eyes ..

Dadi maa (caressing his forehead) : kaisa lag raha hai abb maan bete ..

Maan (sat up) : mien theek hoon dadi .. I guess woh kal itna sab traveling aur fir aniee ke saath bhi 4 am tak bahar tha ..may be iss liye …

Dadi (placed her hand on his shoulder restraining him from saying much knowing he was lying it was all coz of his stress attack after knowing all the truth) : hum break fast aur medicine late hain ..

Maan (nodded than asked) : dadi maa aniee uth gayi ..

Dadi (smiled) : maan aniee kab se itni jaldi uthne lagi …(both chuckled)… soo rahi hai hum uthte hain unko ..nakul breakfast layenge aap kar lejeyega ..

Maan : ji theek hai .. mien ready hujata hoon office ke liye ..

Dadi (sternly) : bilkul nahi ..hum ne subha hi office call kar diya tha Adi ko aapki meetings cancle karne ko .. koi office nahi jaa rahe hain aap .. BAS

Maan (sighed) : plss dadi mujh se nahi raha jayega ghar par ..

Dadi : maan hum ne keh diya tou bas keh diya .. breakfast bhej rahe hain hum medicines ke saath ..theek se khana hum aapki princess ko dekh kar aate hain ..

The minute dadi left maan took his mobile n told adi to not cancle his meeting as he is coming to office but to his luck adi has already canceled all just one was left a meeting with a client at TAJ ..

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@ 10:30 in KM ..

The whole KM was at high alert .. servants rushing from one corner o another n aniee screaming for her one thing then other ..listening to the chaos maan came out of his room only to bump into Nakul ..

Maan (confused) : nakul yeh hu kya raha hai ..??

Nakul : chote sahab who aniee baby ..unko 10 min mien nikalna hai na tou yeh sab .. mien jaata hoon mujhe unka dress dena hai ..

Maan (smiled) : so geet was right ..yeh kabhi time par nahi uth sakti ..



IN KM's KITCHEN ..

Tarun : uff ..yeh Maan sahab ki cousin jab bhi aati hai ..poora ghar ka naksha hi badal jata hai ..

Nakul : jaldi sandwich banao aniee baby ko nikalna hai ..agar nahi bana na tou Chote sahab se ziada bora haal yeh kardigi tumhara ..

Tarun ; han hu gaya .. mien Maan sahab ka breakfast laga deta hoon table par ..

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At dinning table maan sat all dressed while dadi came angry to the bits

Dadi : maan hum ne kaha tha na ke aap aaj office nahi jayenge ..

Maan (made her sit on chair n knelt down) : plss dadi ..mien nahi reh paonga ghar par aise betha rahonga tou aur tabiyat kharaab hugi n u know that … I ll be fine at office aur abb please iss ke aage aur kuch nahi … mien jaa raha hoon office ..but abb chaliye aap bhi breakfast kar lijeye ..Tarun ne kaha aapne subha se kuch nahi khaya ..

Dadi : aapki zidd ke aage kab chali hai humari ..

Maan (smiled) : aapka kya dadi ..kisi ki bhi nahi chali ..chaliye nashta karte hain aniee ko tou abhi time lage ga

Dadi (st) : koi tou tha maan jis ko aapki zidd torna aata tha 😉…agar aaj geet hoti tou aap office kabhi nahi jaa pate 😛…(chuckled amusing maan seeing his arched brow she nodded n acted to be normal)… yash bhi tou nahi jaa pate thay geet ki zid ke aage 😆…kash aisa hote ke jo khwaab Preetie ne dekha wohh sach hujaye aur geet sach mien humari ghar ki bahu ban ke ajaye ..😳

Maan : dadi aap kha nahi rahi .. Dadi : han ..kuch nahi ..hum kha rahe na bete ..

While both were having thr food aniee came rushing down the stair almost tripping maan stood up with worry .. n she came running hugged him tight bidding bye ..but he stopped her holding her wrist ..

Maan : aniee break fast kar ke jao ..

Aniee (Came back n kissed his cheek) : geet ke saath karlongi bhai plzz …mien already late hoon ..

Maan : but princess ..aise

Anie (interrupted) : plzz plzzz plzz bhai …bye mien jati hoon

Dadi (came forward n handed over a box) : yeh lo sandwiches kha lena dono ..

Aniee (kissed her) : muhaazz luv ya dadi .. (ran away).. bye bhai

Maan : dadi mien bhi chalta hoon ..aap apna khayal rakhna

Dadi (stood thr in slight tears seeing his retreating figure going outside) : pata nahi kyun humesha na chahte huye bhi hum hi maan aur geet dono ki takleef ki waja ban jate hain ..

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Here geet got the call from aniee who was now sitting in her car ready to pick geet from Handa house but geet asked her not to come thr n told her to meet at XYZ place as she didn't wanted aniee to come thr n if by any chance she saw brij again like last night geet will never be able to explain her what kind of person brij is ..so she preferred to keep aniee away from her family ..her innocent sweeto will never be able to see such harshness of a brother when she has all her life only one picture of this relation n that was maan ..the brother who became more than a father ..

Geet got ready to leave n was about to enter her car when brij came from back n was also going some where but stopped seeing geet in a jeans n loose top ..

Brij (sternly) : yeh kya pehna hai tu ne ..yeh tera London nahi hai hindustan hai ..yahan larki aise kapre nahi pehenti ..

Geet : plzz mera koi mood nahi iss waqt apse behas kar ke apna time barbaad karne ka just buzz off ..

Brij (was initially trying to surpress his anger seeing her in western but then with her harsh demeanor lost his control in his ego n held her hand bit harshly) : oyee larki tameez se baat kar ..aur abhi k abhi andar jaa aur kuch dhang ke kapre pehan yeh rumaal nahi ..

Geet (left a sigh looking down n then looked at him spitting fire) : brij handa sach mien buhat kamzoor yaadasht hai aapki … maan ne kal raat kya kaha bhool gaye aap ..(removing his grip over her hand).. buhat shook tha na meri shaddi karwane ka .. nahi mani aap logoon ne meri baat .. abb maan ko beech mien le hi aaye hu …tou mujhe lagta hai MSK ki taqat aur mere maan 😳 ke ghusse ki kam se kam ek jhalak tou apko dekhni hi chahiye ..kyun ..??😛😛

consider her in western

roko abhi call karti hoon maan aur bol deti hoon ..aap jo karne wale thay mere saath …(brij looked at her fiercely n also a tint of fear😆)… roko abhi call karti hoon ..(pretended 😛 to call him seeing the angry fearing expression of brij enjoyed every bit of it then removed her mbl from her ear) oh hoo ..meri bad luck nahi lag raha ..(brij left a silent sigh).. (geet with a bit of sternness n threatening way) .. par yeh mat samajhna ke kabhi nahi lage ga …😡 aap jante hain na ke mere bas moo kholne ki dair hai aur aap aur apke pujniye pitaji jail ki salkhon ke peeche ya fir I doubt may be arthi par honge .. iss liye bhalai iss hi mien hai ke apne haath aur zabaan dono sambhal ke rakhna ..(sarcastically).. warnaaa u never know kab mien maan aur dadi maa ko sab bata doon ..😉 ( n left leaving a fuming brij)

Brij (stood thr seeing her zooming out with her car n said with a smirk) : tu kabhi nahi kahegi geet … achai ..yeh teri achai jo hai na ..jis ne 2 saal se tere mou par taala dala hai wohh tujhe iss ke aage bhi kuch nahi kehne degi …mana 2 saal pehle Chotte chacha ji ki bewakoofi se humara poora plan barbaad huya aur tere uss MAHAAN veerji TEJ ke kaaran tou aaj itna urr (fly) rahi hai …par abb bhi teri achai hi teri barbadi ki waja bani gi GEET HANDA …(n laughed cunningly n left to his work) ..

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11:30 am @ KM ..

Maan reached the office ..n as expected every one was having a party time … he fumed in anger n roared standing at the entrance ..

Maan : yeh kya huraha hai …😲😲

Every member shivered with fear …n then cursed thr fate ..n adi sir as well to have informed them wrongly …n maan continued ..



Maan : yeh office hai ya koi party hall … Adi (adi came forward tumbling praaying for his life) meri absence mien office manage karna tumhari responsibility hai ..tou yeh hu kya raha …mien ek din office nahi ayonga tou tum log ko kya laga mere office ko circus banadoge ..

Sasha : nahi MK wohh tou bas actually ..

Maan (fumming red) : mujhe koi bahana nahi sunna Sasha …5 min ..sirf 5 min mujhe Chopra cons. house ki file aur Malhotra's ke project ke blueprint apni desk par chahiye …aur agar nahi laa sakti tou apna resignation letter le ana 😛..samjhe tum sab ..

Maan stormed towards his cabin slamming the door shut n every one sighed leaving thr long held breaths …

Adi : chalo jaldi sab file le kar aao ..😕

Sasha (stood wondering) : MK ko huya kya hai ..itna rude ..4 saal mien aaj tak MK ko itna frustrated nahi dekha ..

But went away to do her task while adi stood in his cabin taking the file ..

Adi : I just hope yeh sab gudya se related na hu ..kahin maan ko phir se stress attacks tou nahi arahe ..kahin wohh geet se mile tou nahi …I need to speak this with dad n geet as well ..😕😕

N he too went towards maan's cabin ..

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next part coming shortly ...😳

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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THE DARK ANGEL
OF FATE ...!!


PART 17

The day went so well for both the girls they roamed in anywhere n everywhere In delhi .. eating ..chatting ..aniee telling geet the whole 2 years of her life while geet also shared some important events like her convocation day ..her countable few friends of final year in mumbai college where she persuaded her last year of architecture .. deliberately avoiding many moments when she use to miss her ..miss her own life back in london .. n most importantly that how n y she came here though aniee tried many times but geet was smart to distract her everytime n aniee being the innocent angel was too easy to handle in this regard .. geet was just cherishing every moment of this togetherness for only she know how much she missed her in these 2 year n now also geet knows it not more than 10 days maan will let aniee be here its been like this ever since …maan use to take aniee with him on secret vacations avoiding the whole world's attention but it was never more than 4 days trip EVER ..even if aniee came to KM she wasnn't allowed to roam about freely thr were always guards around her ..she didn't have much friends here so all she do here other than teasing n troubling maan for one or the other thing is to shop ..shop n shop all the malls of Delhi .. leaving geet in london to just wait n same happened last time 2 years back when maan came to london all of a sudden n took aniee with him didn't even bothered to look for geet .. n she was busy getting a gift for him n planning his murder …:D but both girls were anaware that maan was taking aniee thr forever ..well the plan actually couldn't last long more than 2 months coz it was always threats n attack planned for maan n he didn't wanted to risk annie's life so he took her back but by then geet had left london … n here life has offered some moments to her again to smile n no way she is gonna leave that but the constant fear that one day she will have to answer all question of everyone is still thr making her stay quite … n moreover making aniee doubt …it was simply not her being quite .. saying in monosyllabic language ..she was the only one who could ive competition to the great anvesha khurana in talking business …but aniee thought may be meeting maan after so many years n than him getting to know everything is bothering her knowing how much she has waited for him to come back n take her back to her home ..thr home ..but he never did any of it ..

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While on the other hand maan had a super awful day ..he couldn't do anything just sat thr in his cabin blank ..thinking again n again about all what dadi n aniee told him about his life ..geet's life ..
Trying to remember any of his meeting with geet in those 13 years … it wasn't like he never went to london ..he did ..he use to visit aniee secretly avoiding media attention over his visits to London .. but how come he never saw geet or is it that he saw geet but never noticed it .. geet's painful hazel eyes filled with tears still flashes in his mind .. how could she be so happy with just a mere mention of a name from him ..HOW ..?? least he knew what emotions that one name held for her …!!



He closed his eyes wanting some peace .. answers to his queries .. only find that one blur image again ..one out of many memories he has forgotten ..

It was a girl hardly 6 running with great speed along with 2 boys elder to her may be 7 or may be 9 ..maan was not able to see any of thr faces only back running in a wide spread garden or park …that girl … she was laughing .. laughing her heart out while no one was able to catch her .. few faint sounds of a GIRL ..

Nahi pakar paoge .. nahi pakar paoge bhaiya ..aap mujhe nahi pakar paoge ..

While thr came another boy in picture running behind her .. n caught her by her waist but they both lost thr balance n fell in the pool of mud …both looked at each other …for a moment paused .. n than sat up laughing .. removing the mud

Girl : yeh kya kar diya .. mudy muddy hugayi mien ..

Boy : but I caught u gudya ..

Girl (stood up then fell down n stood up again with his support but snorted her nose high n jerked his hand off her n left saying) : uhh bade aye ..sado

The girl slightly trip when the 2 boys saved her n

Maan opened his eyes with a jerk sweating ..

Maan : fir se wahi sapna .. pata nahi kab ..kab iss sab ka aanth hoga … (left a sigh n after some time he realized remembering all what he got to know about his life) … woh geet hai .. geet hi hai jo itne saloon se in parchaiyoon ke zariye mere dil o dimag mien zinda hai .. par who do boys …may be prem n arjun ..but yeh ..
Mere sawaloon ka jawaab sirf geet ke paas hai ..
Par kya wohh mere sawaloon ka jawab degi ..??

Breaking his thoughts adi knocked his cabin n he asked him to come in ..

Adi : sir this the file for evening's meeting aap parh lijeye ..4 bje ki meeting hai Hotel Taj mien ..we still have 3 hours ..

Maan : hmmm ..

Adi stood thr for a second observing maan …he was sure something is wrong but wasn't getting the words how to ask him in Office ..if at KM he would have but now …but the way maan has been since morning he could guess thr is something drastic bothering him ..

Maan (looked up) : anything else Adi ..

Adi (fumbling bit nervous) : umm ..nahi ..wohh sirr ..actually ..wohh ..

Maan (irritated) : bolo adi ..

Adi : aap theek hu na sir ..?? I mean ..kuch ..

Maan (lost for a moment then answered) : umm .. han adi mien theek hoon ..don't worry .. aur kuch huga tou ill tell u (smiled at his friend's concern) don't worry(stern) now resume ur work ..

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It was nearly 5 in the evening geet n aniee were sitting in the lavish TAJ hotel's coffee house n after playing well enough thr was aniee again with her same question ..

Aniee : so now finally abb koi new place nahi koi exciting object nahi ..batao mujhe what came over ur dumb head ke tum 2 saal pehle bina kisi ko batye yahan India agayi .. u said u have had promised dad that u won't come back until ur studies are finished ..then y ..??

aur mujhe bhi kuch nhi kaha .. 2 saal se kitna try kiya mene tum se contact karne ki but u never did once even tried to ..(made a hurtful sad face then again tried to be normal).. u know wahan sab kuch kitna mess up hugaya hai tumhare jaane ke baad se .. mien bhai ko bhi kuch nahi keh payi ..unko tou kuch pata bhi nahi hai wahan humari life humare friends ke bare mien apart from those few odd meetings with amy n ridz ..

Geet (mist eyes low tone) : amy aur ridz kaise hain ..??

Aniee : tumhare jane ke baad ridz bhi chali gayi ..(shocked geet snapped her head up with this new revelation n said ).. abhi tak solve nahi huya unka fight ... (aniee continued didn't hear geet's words) ..pata nahi what happened Amy ne bhi kuch nahi kaha mujhe .. n surprisingly wohh tou sirf tumhare liye worried tha .. ridz ka tou mene usko bataya ke she has left london as well …aur upar se Bhai bhi wahan humare saath thay we just couldn't talk openly in front of him regarding U ..aapke mahaan kasam jo toot jati ..but good thing is Amy n Bhai became very much normal with each other the way they use to be be4 in mom's time …(smiled)… bas tumhari aur ridz ki hi kami thi ..tum dono hote tu that 1 week with bhai in london would have been the best time ..u know tumhare aise ghayab hujane par maami ji kitna tensed thi jab hum wahan puhanche saari situation itni messed up thi .. she didn't knew if maan bhai came looking for u or what ..then me asking her about u ..poor soul was so confused n then told me about u being missing ..prem bhai ..arjun ..preet amy everyone was searching u like maniacs ..but of no use n finally i was going to tell maan bhai everything ..but mami ji stopped me knowing from the police that u have traveled to India on ur passport n I called dadi .. fir dadi was searching for u ..aur insab mien mami ji ko police station ke itne chakar lagene pare n she was so worn out ..seeing this maan bhai decided ke mami ji won't be able to look after me in this stage of her life so he shifted me n mami ji in a far off mansion along with Dev bhai with high security be4 coming back to India …gosh it was hell for me ..me staying with Dev bhai whole 2 days …yukk u know geet he drinks … n party over night with girls n boys in his house …yukk gross bit***y girls I was soo shocked seeing him like that …u can't imagine how much I cried over the call to maan bhai for taking me from thr … n then he came back again to London n mami ji asked him to let us shift back to our house ..n eventually he did agreed ..Dev bhai is such a mystery ..ek tou he never even met us for once even after completing his studies dadi se bhi kabhi milne nahi aaye yahan …n then this kind of life ..seriously geet it was only mami ji who stopped me warna mene tou Amy ko call kar diya tha to take me away from thr …

All the while geet was only trying to stop her flooding tears ..dipping her head down while aniee kept on saying while munching her sandwiches ..the thought of her dearest friends apart toured her with guilt .. n then aniee facing all this only made her feel disgusted about her stupid impulsive decision .. blaming herself for all what happened n sat thr confused with dev's part …as all she know about him is that he is a step brother to aniee n yash adopted him when they both were in London ..dev use to live in some hostel ..they never even once met him in thr whole life of 13 years in London then y maan made aniee stay with him …she was hell angry with the fact that maan so carelessly left aniee with that stupid brother of his .. what if something wrong had happened to aniee .. the thought was going in all wrong ways n the guilt which she is living with from past 2 year regretting every second of her life to have left london like that … is now getting doubled listening to all this from aniee ..her hurt painful voice is enough for geet to know how much she missed her …a smile spread across her face .. a painful one ..thinking how on earth she will put it in words what she has been facing ever since she came to India ..how much she missed her life ..her friend ..top of all her reason to leave Aniee .. removing the tears from her eyes in the pretext of setting her hair geet looked up ..n saw aniee relishing her fav. Sandwiches n smiled ..

Geet : but maan ne tumhain wahan bheja kyun ..?? he knew na ke u don't even know him .. tou tumhain akele ..its really odd to think about ur devil sado brother leaving u alone with that Dev ..

Aniee : yeah it is for UR devil sado Best friend (while giving geet a teasing stare n then continued seriously) ..mene bhi bhai se yeh hi poucha tha ke all of a sudden y dev bhai ..so he said ke itne saloon se he is been living alone but it was because he was in some other part of England not in London ..but now since he is in London we should live together like siblings type … maan bhai initially tou rahe humare saath for 2 days ..but then India mien koi meeting thi he came back n dev bhai showed his real colors … n finally within 24 hours ..me n mami ji was back to our home sweet home ..

Geet : chalo good ..tumhain ziada time wahan rehna nahi parha .,

Aniee : but geet pata hai dev bhai is a real mystery .. pata hai maan bhai even asked me not to tell this all to dadi maa 🤢..like wohh dev bhai ki drinking wali habits n all ..dadi kitna hurt hujati na ..iss hi liye

Geet : hmm maan ne theek hi kiya ..dadi maa ko acha nahi lagta n maan must have sorted it ..tou kyun tension le rahi hai ..aur bata aur kya kya huya hai wahan meri absence mien ..

Aniee : BUHAaaTtt kuch huya hai madam .. Amy is now a surgeon that to a cardiac surgeon .. prem bhai is married ..preet gosh poocho mat he is all the more flirty now after completing MBA .. but pata hai prem bhai ki wife Heer bhabi she is really cute n sweet one ..
N the most pathetic part of all …maan bhai ka woh jerk Arjun humare ghar ke paas rehne agaya hai ..uhh its so damn irritating ..(geet smiled teasingly n said).. but wohh tou central london mien tha na ..

Aniee (frustrated tone) : yup but abb yahan shift hugaya hai ..seriously geet he such a annoying person ..har waqt qukum chalata rehta hai ..yeh nahi kiya tou maan ko boldega ..wohh kiya tou maan ko complain kardega ..uhh
I hate him …😆

Geet (with a loop sided smile) : really ..u do hate him sweeto ..??

Aniee : shut up geet … he is a jerk ..idiot ..n I hate him ..😛

Geet : mene tou sirf poucha tha …

Aniee : pouch tou mien bhi tum se rahi hoon subha se .. London chor kar kyun aayi aise .. pata hai sab kitne pareshaan thay ..aur agayi tou 2 saal se kyun sab ko avoid kar rahi hoo .. mujhe tou laga tha tum ne abb tak maan bhai ko sab bata diya huga ..but wohh bhi nahi kiya …whats going onn here gudya …

Geet was completely blank at this moment ..she didn't wanted her to know ..but also she is falling shot of words ..its not in her to lie conveniently .. its been always like her heart in her word n this sudden change with maan's entry in her life made her confused as to how to handle everything …lost in her thoughts avoiding aniee's question filled eyes .. when suddenly ..

A girl in a micro-mini dress entered in the lodge .. with black shades onn n bumped with an elderly woman ..though the woman was at fault bt it was her age that made her stumble n eventually the girl tripped down with her high 6 inch heels .. n eventually the girl scolded the woman quite harshly ..which irked geet ..though the matter solved but aniee n geet both witnessed this n were looking at that ill-manner girl with low eyes ..

Geet : I can't believe this ..i mean don't she have an inch of manners ..that aunty was so aged n this girl talked with her so rudely …seriously I am disgusted with even the sight of her ..

Aniee : truly inn jaise low standard girls ko tou na acha lesson dena chahiye ..bechari aunty sirf iss liye ke unki galti thi chup chap uss make up shop ki batien sunti rahi .. mera bas chale na tou ..

Geet (raised her brows with a mischievous shine in her eyes ) : TOU …😳

Aniee (smiled cunningly eyed at that girl coming towards them ) : Tou …😉

Geet winked at her ..geet was facing her back to that girl while that girl was coming to the table next to thr n geet deliberately held her leg out n made her trip again right on thr table on which chocolate moose was placed 😆..her face covered with moose making her look damn hilarious ..both girls giggled then stopped seeing her fuming face ..n geet stood up with a fake innocent sympathy ..

Geet (giving her napkin) : ohh my god ..aap tou kitna gir gayi ..😛(double meaning)

The crowd was having a tough time controlling thr laughter yet few were laughing opening making that girl embarrassed .. while geet continued ..

Geet (wiping her face) : I am really sorry mien tou uth rahi thi seat se ..mujhe pata hi nahi chala ke aap peche se arahi hai .. gosh dekho tou ..aapka face already itna full tha make up se aur mene I mean meri waja se aur artificial layer agayi …😆 (making a teasing sorry face) ..while aniee giggled passing more napkin ..

The girl fumed n snapped geet's hand off her face ..

Girl : get off u dumb head …aaj ka din hi kharaab hai ek tou I am late for my date n then that idiot lady n now u ..gosh if u can't behave in such high class place then y the hell u even come in such hotels ..bloody LS ..

Geet fumed in anger n aniee was ready to paste the pastry on her face when that girl's BF came to defend her ..

BF : baby ..r u okiee ..(turned to geet).. hi u girl don't u have any manners ..u did that deliberately ..

Geet (mocked) : oh really ..then prove it Mr.

BF : don't act smart girl ..i saw u ..u held out ur leg just make my baby trip ..(he was chipkkofying 🤢 with that girl who was by now at the verge of crying) ..

Geet (snapped back at him) : well I don't need to ACT smart ..coz I am ..n about this better teach ur BABY (emphasizing) some good manner ..or else every time she'll humilate any senior citizen she will have to face the same treatment ..n now if will move.. (threw some random bunch of money on the table n looked at aniee).. chal sweeto ..

Aniee stood up picking up both of thr's mbl n clutches .. n geet went out ..while she came back n gave a napkin to the girl ..

Aniee : guess u still need it ..(to the boy).. well u seriously have a pathetic taste ..God Bless U ..(n left giggling) ..

BF : ill see u girl (the girl waked him hard).. first take me to the rest room u idiot ..

Geet n aniee went out smiling giggling ..unaware of the pair of eye who witnessed all this from far ..by the time they reached to the exit door ..aniee got a call was engrossed in it eventually left behind with her slow pace ..while geet reached the parking lot ..n aniee still standing thr at the entrance of parking …

geet went towards her car ..while aniee was still talking on the call ..but geet sensed someone watching her ..n turned immediately but thr was no one ..she shrugged off her thought n went ahead but he continued following her ...his mobile vibrated ..but he dis-connected the call immediately .. n looked up but geet was no whr to be seen ..he was about to step ahead when with tight kick on his stomach geet made him fall back ...he was hurt with her sudden kick that to straight on stomach ..n soon his guards got hold of geet ..clutching her both hands tight while she was trying hard to get free ..as he turned she stood shocked ..

Geet : Aap ...?? how dare U ..choro mujhe u morons ...

Maan : agar tumhari jaga koi aur hota tou trust me that person would have been dead by now ..(to guard).. leave her

Geet : i know ..but what the hell were u thinking while following me ...??

Maan : well madam i was just trying to be sure ..the girl u just made fun off in the hotel ...her boyfriend was following u ..

Geet : i would have tackled him ...y were u trying to be over smart han ...

Aniee : geet what happened aur yeh bh..//

Geet (stopped her from completing her word) : nothing aniee this Maan was following us ..
come ill drop u home .. (turned her head from maan saying) .. uhh BADEn AYE ..
maan stood thr lost in her last 3 words it were the same words that he has often heard in his dreams ... he was still trying to comprehend what he thought was right ..it was geet all the while ..its her tag line when irritated ...while

they went ahead ..then geet came back ..stood in front of a lost maan ..



Geet (pointing her finger towards him) : door raheye ...BUHAT door ..samjhe aap ...

after few minutes when he actually came out of his thoughts ..he ordered his guards ..knpwing once aniee will reach KM geet will be left with no security .. he so much wanted to be sure she is save 😃 knowing that guy might be around ...

Maan : follow them ..

Guard : but sir app ..? it won't be safe .. commissioner has already warned about the threats ...(but was stopped with a fuming glare by MSK) ..

Maan : just do as i say follow them ..till the time both reaches thr home got that ..
i can take care of my self ..

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hope u all enjoyed it ..mighty big one i checked it now only its 7886 words ...
so i need bala wala comment from all ...😳
pluueeejjj ...😃

PRECAP :-
maan's car crashes with geet ... opssii thr are shooter following him ...🤢
abhi geet kya karegi ...??? 😉

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago

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