THE LOCKET (1) - Page 51

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

And you call yourself that you lack imagination? Someone fetch me a rod please. Avi, I would be honest, you just wiped off a smile from my face and left me with wet eyes. I can't tell you how moving this was.I am speechless Avi. The song was cherry on the top. I am listening to it on repeat and I want to kill someone. Rulane ka irada hain kya? Now I seriously am embarrassed and privileged at the same time that a writer like you is reading something written by me. I am hiding under my bed, never coming back.

Tu bina fight kiye kuch nahi kar sakti haina? Sowie about the emotional stuff but that's the way I am...😆 tu bina fight kiya aur main rulane bina kuch nahi kar sakti 😊... Oye DQ mat ban, am not good; pata hai... thoda toh respect kar, mazzak mat uda...

You know the mother son bonding, I have seen it from close and every time I just look at the duo in wonder. They play, fight, and waltz around, and when you described the teenage son taking her mother in his arms with adoration and love, and reverence, I could almost see them swaying to the music around me, and knowing that those moments would remain moments from now on, made my heart clench.
I would forever hate you for naming the adorable couple Raj and Kiran. After knowing you from up close. I can't help but notice someone in the couple's place and now after knowing you killed them, though it is a story, I tell myself repeatedly, I swear I want to, scream, cry and do something between both of them.

Isse pehle ke tu mujhe uski maa bana de... I love the bond esp the hand behind the back when the twirling part comes... You are lucky that you witness that...that shows the loving person the son is going to grow up to be..

Avi, this fic has jumped into one of my favorites because of the emotion emitted from it. Take a standing ovation Avi, you deserve it.👏

Upar likha hai.. mazaak udana bandh kar de... On a personal note... Thanks for the encouragement support and all your help Shika. I really appreciate it.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm really loving this pattern of story-telling. The way you take one character for each chapter and we get an insight of that character, letting us see things through the character's eyes, it makes the story all the more engrossing.

First of all, the name 'Geet' did drop my stomach a bit. I don't know what to say and what to expect...

I am glad that people are liking it... I think I scared people off with the prologue though..let's see..

You should know me better...😲
Maan, for me, is becoming more and more loveable with every chapter. His sacrifice for his brother is makin me respect him as an elder brother. I feel for him, so much that by the end of the chapter, reading about a son's attachment with his mother who he lost all of a sudden, it left me with wet eyes. Try however hard as anyone can, a mother's absence can never ever be replaced by another person's presence. Never.

Maan ko loveable kehne mein kya kabhi problem hua hai? 😆 You know the mother sentiments I have, so it translates for me...
Even though the song playing in the background was overwhelming and my throat was clogged with emotions, I couldn't help but smile at the scene which played not only in front of Savitri Devi's eyes, but mine too. I smiled at the lovely couple that Raj and Kiran made, waltzing around and singing together, I smiled at the young teenage boy trying to dance with his mother, learning gentlemanly ways from his father. Alas! The thought that right at that moment, the teenage boy - who's turned into a man now - sits all alone, recalling memories of his parents and trying to dissipate his pain in solitude, made me cry.

A lot of stuff being established in these parts plays into how his relationship develops. This guy is almost the opposite type of character than Dr. Khurana. I am having a hard time writing him only because I don't know any guys like this. Let's hope I can do justice to him as I go along..

I loved this chapter for the bitter-sweetness it brought out.

Thanks for updating Avi! 🤗

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

accha 🤔

lemme check...😎

Kal...waiting ..my dabba is also soona soona😳

Dabbe mein jo tha... woh toh tumne phek diya...