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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Nauri thodi baad aungi😃


take care Heytu 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update Mayyo 😳
Poor Maan 😆
Waiting For Next abhi se 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


I only pick up some habits, not all of them. 😆
Hopes chakna chur karne ke liye toh main ma'azrat khwaa hoon. (Means I'm sorry.) lekin main assume karne ko bola tha hope karne ko nahin! 😆

😊Hi... 😊
Tera kuch nahi ho sakta...
My My mera knowledge for words increase kar rahi ho teacher ji... I like its sound... -ma'azrat khwaa hoon.. 😃
Tum toh kabhi kuch bolti hi nahi ho... very innocent of you... 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Aise kaise khush? Madochist toh aapka title hai. Main kyun chheenu aap se? 😆

Arey maine to apna promise pura kiya... so no more Masochistic. I give this honorary title to you... 😆 I take no offence at all... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing... finally geet is noticing maan... or humare maan babu toh already in luv... waise i think anaya alsoluv ayush... cont soon waiting 4 mre...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati


congrates on new thread dear

loved this update
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon


Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply brilliant.loved it


Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

wonderful update...poor maan 😆 jess will be tailing him..pls cont soon..


Originally posted by: Trisha4evr

I just love the ff...
Awesome update...
One thing which I absolutely love in ur ff is its simple... Not over the top... Like what happens in our regular life...


Originally posted by: Ru_21

Congrast on new thread

Awesome update...loved it



Thank you everyone! 😊

@Trisha4evr: Thanks for the compliment! I'm really happy to know that I'm doing fine with the story and you're liking it. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile


Take 6 dayz n give a lengthy one 😃
Take care 😃


Shukran! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir


😊Hi... 😊

Tera kuch nahi ho sakta...
My My mera knowledge for words increase kar rahi ho teacher ji... I like its sound... -ma'azrat khwaa hoon.. 😃
Tum toh kabhi kuch bolti hi nahi ho... very innocent of you... 😛


Bohat time ke baad mujhe kisi ne teacher ji bola hai. 😆
Of course, main toh hoon hi bholi bhaali! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir


Arey maine to apna promise pura kiya... so no more Masochistic. I give this honorary title to you... 😆I take no offence at all... 😆


So very innocent of you to think ke agar aapne ek chapter de diya toh aap Bach gayi! Ab toh buri phasi ho Onir! 😆
PS: I accept the title, and I'll have no issues sharing it with you. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

First of all congratulations on the new thread. Coming to the update, I like the way the slow progress happens between the leads. This story for the nth time looks like tumbled from someone's personal journal for the sheer brilliance of incorporating the thinking of real people in it rather than characters making it far more real and appealing.
Thanks Shika! And I'm going to say it again that it isn't out of anyone's journal. It's mostly made up but thank you nonetheless for your words. 😳
I had the great fate of witnessing some Jess' in real life too, thanks to my brother and my friends' brothers, and it is always a treat to tease brothers about such girls. The way they get irritated makes you laugh at their expanse.
Ooh! That sounds fun! It is indeed fun to tease brothers with the Jess of real life! 😆
Their first meeting had me grin stupidly especially when he hid his face in his elbow. That was so boyish.😆
Why, of course. Boyish it was! 😆
I like Ryan a lot and being a cupid unintentionally was just an added reason. I loved it when G said she wouldn't mind being at Jess' place if she wasn't married. Honestly I have had come across such comments from some married cousins and though you want to glare at them you can't help but giggle knowing what they mean.😆
Bingo! I've had such cousins too with all such wishes of theirs! 😆
Isn't Cupid actually portrayed to be a small boy? Imagine Ryan in that costume with a now and arrow! 😃
"Maan has become even more charming. Though I - '
I had felt a need to show Geet the bold-ed word. Words like Though, but etc,. are known to change the course of the flow and change the meaning of whatever you are saying until now so I am happily waiting for Anaya's feelings to be disclosed without being tensed about where her interests lay.
*Grins* Now that is a hawk-eye observation! I'm going to stay tight-lipped about it though! 😆
Ranbir's cheerfulness had me observe since the last update and I somewhere worried it shouldn't be Geet. Now I pray it shouldn't be Anaya either. And of course Geet isn't in the suspect list of Ranbir's crush anymore since she spent the day with Maan and family the very day Ranbir spent his time with his so called friend.
Oh, you actually noticed Ranbir's cheerfulness earlier. I thought no one did! 😆 And how did you assume it to be a crush? 😃 Whether you're right or not, you'll know soon..
I loved it for you to get the new twist, the trip. As a student I always hated the timing of these trips. Just before your exams. Won't let you have a happy trip with the exams demons lurking behind but who am I kidding the moment you go to the trip, everything would be forgotten.
That sentiment is mutual. Even I hated the time of trips though I didn't go with trips. 😆
Awesome update and I can't wait for Wednesday now!😆
]I'll try to shorten the wait for you! 😃

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