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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

so poignant...and what took my breath away is geet...i love woman who are subtly strong...that makes us admire them all the more👏

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

beautifully written with pain

wat did maan do tat they are like this

and if maan is wrong than why is geet saying sorry

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

When ever you write comments..i just anticipate for your take on it...Your comments are like treat...in-depth writing..analyzing nuances of each and every character...emotion..be it anything...u just analyze beautifully. Now you are giving that same awesum feel to us!!!

No wonder this story also makes place in my HIT list !!! 😆😳

I like this sweet pain too 😃!!!

From now i have to stalk two threads😆

I love this story too 👍🏼

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Have you been taking classes from Palin (Life Partner author... if you have not read it, you must, I insist) on relationships

Avi,Its me who should take classes from onir..She is absolutely brilliant..I can totally understand,why did you mention Life partner here..This part reminded me of my own story..Though onir had not mentioned,what mistake maan had committed and how did he hurt geet But throughout the chapter,my heart believed,he had slapped geet...😛😆..

This chapter could fit in my story perfectly ,though it would feel like onir had given a wonderful "make over" to my immature writing...!!!!

Thank you so much onir for sharing your wonderful writing talent with all of us..

Your words were more than capable to encapsulate the intensity of maaneet's emotions..Its hard to believe its your first attempt at writing..

Kudos dear..👏

I loved it...😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: chavvi16
Ahhh so beautiful
The bond between a husband and wife
There is nothing one wouldn't do for the other
Am glad they still have some hope left

Thanks... 😊

Yes there's hope that they both are holding onto...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
This is what I get for being so MIA... Will be back later to read! :D

My dearest Angel... 🤗

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Susegad
You posted it.😲

CONGRATULATIONS ONIR🥳

I will definitely come back and comment, as soon as I am free😉

Yup I posted it, finally after overcoming my nerves... 😳

Thanks so much Nishaji. 🤗

Take your time, will wait for it.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: yappingduck
so poignant...and what took my breath away is geet...i love woman who are subtly strong...that makes us admire them all the more👏

Thanks... 😊

Yes even I'm all for woman being strong...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: freya123
awesome

Thanks... 😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sdlife19
beautifully written with pain

wat did maan do tat they are like this

and if maan is wrong than why is geet saying sorry

Thanks! 😊

About your questions, it will be answered in next part...