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Posted: 12 years ago
read all parts together...beautiful story...waiting for next...is geet sams step sis...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely cute ff dear.. i missed it but today i read all te parts in one go.. very lovely cute , updates.. very interesting story, which film is tis?.. te way my maan and sam ki relation and te way geet is like a puzzle to my maan was so lovely.. but i know my maan will bring his geet out from her dark life..i love it so much dear



thanks for ur lovely comments
It is an old Rajshree production film featuring Raameshwari n the hero was d son of famous villain Late Premnath'.I can't remember his name right now. only the concept is inspired from d film n story of d ff is completely different.
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Originally posted by: paponecon

read all parts together...beautiful story...waiting for next...is geet sams step sis...


thanks dear for ur comment.In my next update I will start telling about Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

update kab milega????????????


probably on monday
guests are at my place so busy on weekend
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probably on monday
guests are at my place so busy on weekend


ok will be waiting
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ok will be waiting


thanks for waiting for me
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thanks for d like n comment
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Thanks😃
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DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

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part-9


all were preparing for their exams.Geet was going to give her board so was dedicatedly involved in studies.one positive point about pammi was that she never stopped Geet from studying. Geet also was taking care of Vicky's studies too so Pammi was stress free.Though he made a high hue n cry over it but couldn't save himself from Geet.maan was already committed to fulfill his father's dream.Sam was the only one who was studying only to get passing marks as her world of dream didn't need high marks.She was only studying to enter d second year of her college.

Geet was not depended on pammi to fund for her school fee.She was a brilliant student n was getting scholarship through out her schooling.She knew that she would have to work hard to servive without anyone's help.her next target was to seek admission in architecture.So she worked hard for that.


After exams Maan went to his home to spend holidays with his parents and devil dadi.

their result was out n every one got what they deserved. Maan got 9.37 percentile.Vicky too get a scholar bedge for getting 90%.
Sam was least interested in what marks she got. She was happy that she cleared her 1st year n was one step close to her dream.

Geet got 94.6% and she was the topper of her school.Every one congratulated her but in her home no one was interested except vicky who was very happy for Geet. Pammi was very busy with her business n other social activities so never had much time for children. Even she was not tensed about vicky as she knew that Geet was taking good care of him.

Maan was in touch with Sam,Vicky and geet.he got to knew their results and congratulated them.after few days result of Geet's enterance exams was out n she secured good rank. she was sure to get a good college on that rank.After attending counceling sessions she got her admission.



It was the first day of maan's second year in college.he was senior now.Every one was friendly with him. He was known for his dignjty. though he was a handsome ,with d growing age he was turning in to a look of greek god.

As Maan entered d campus eyes turned to him.He was here after two n half month's holiday break.Some of his friends knew about Sameera.Girls of his batch knew about him so never crossed their line but couldn't stop themselves from drooling n taking in cool breathes.

all his friends were excited as they were seniors now n can rag their juniors. they came to maan n ask him to welcome d freshers in their style.

Maan-But ragging is banned now it will not be right.

A friend-come on Maan .It was banned last year too but we were ragged.Now It's time 4 revenge.

Maan tried to stop them but they assured him that it will be only in a friendly way.

Freshers were coming through d huge gate of DEC.all seniors were searching a bakra for ragging. They saw a girl all excited n looking very happy.

One friend of Maan called her-hey girl in red n blue come here. She came near them n said-Hii !are u going to rag me? OMG i m so excited. All got shocked but one person was seeing her with his wide eyes.

Maan- Geet...here?

then he remembered that she wanted to be an architect.he took his steps towards her but she ignored him completely. Maan was confused.Our Geet is super intelligent.she knew that if any one came to know that she was friend of maan, she would be deprived of d fun of ragging.so she completely avoided him

One boy of d group-from which branch?

Geet- Architecture.Ab introduction ho gaya ho ton can we carry on with your ragging session?

all were confused-what type of a girl she is .every one is feared of ragging n here she is getting impatience to be ragged.


Maan- no!no one is going to rag her.

All were now frustrated first with D girl who is not fearing even a bit n now this man.

Geet-saw Maan annoyingly-why?
maan- because i m saying.

Geet- are u their leader?

One boy came n said. Maan what is ur problem?why are u denying?
Already he was not co-operating them now he was stopping them too from ragging that girl so they thought to do some thing unusual.

so they decided what they want

another boy-We will show u a boy. U will go to him will kiss on his cheeks n will say I LOVE U. but there is one condition he should not get angry on u for this

Geet-what? How will I do this.I know It's ragging nothing serious so will Say that but how can I say that he will not get angry on me?

2nd buy- that's your problem.

Geet (st)Geet teri izzat ka sawal hai.Agar tune mana kar diya toh sab tera mazaak banayenge ki abhi to tu unhen chalenge kar rahi thi ab darr se back out kar rahi hai. No u can't do that

Geet-ok I m ready who is d boy?

A boy pointed on Maan.Now Maan n geet both were shocked. Geet thought for a second n smiled-ok

Maan was super confused what Geet is up to. he didn't know that Geet was too bold.he always met her at home with everyone around.though she always chirped like a bird,but he didn't expect this coming from her.

Geet came near Maan n wisphered-Sorry maan.Pls don't get angry. pls bacha lo mujhe. i request u. pls don't get angry on me for this. pls pls pls.

Maan saw in other direction without answering her.

Geet cleared her throat n saw him with a puppy and murmured a sorry.She came near his face gave him a pack which was visible as a kiss for maan's friends but she didn't touch his cheek.then she said-I LOVE U
Now all were waiting for Maan's reaction as he didn't like these type of pranks. Maan raise his hand n all shut their eyes expecting a slap but their eyes snapped open when they heard-It's alright and welcome to the college.

All were gaping them as they were seeing two ghosts. Maan chuckled on their expressions n said- Guys meet Geet my friend n sam's sister.

All were disappointed for d failure on their ragging attempt as they chose two wrong persons for it.all were introduced n were happy to find one spontanious girl as their friend.
Maan-Geet these are my friends,shyam,yash,samrat n mayank

Geet said hello to every one

maan-you didn't tell me about joining this college. why?

Geet-Badla. matlab payback

Maan- payback?

Geet- bhool gaye. jab uncle aunty hamaare ghar aaye the toh tumne kye kiya tha. U can't even imagine how embarrassed i was that day. woh kya soch rahe honge mere baare me.Sam aur Mom ne bhi mujhe daanta tha.

Maan-But Papa was very happy that day.

Geet-Really.They weren't angry with me?

Maan-That day papa enjoyed just like a child

Geet-maan I need a favoure. Pls don't tell Sam anything about this ragging incident. u know it was only a fun.I didn't mean that what i said.

Maan-don't worry Geet i will not tell her.I m very happy to see u here.This is d best college in Delhi.But I didn't know that u r so different and u can dare your seniors.

Geet-I m too very happy.This is my world now.n U dont know much about me what can I do.

Maan gave a small smile n thought- u r right Geet.main kuchh bhi toh nahin jaanta tumhaare baare me par koshish karta rahoonga us laayak banae ki jab tum mujhe sab kuchh bataaogi.

geet went to her class n found some friends there too.they were pinky meera n Dev.Later Geet introduced them to Maan's group n all were comfortable with each other.

(I m not going to show their college life in details so all friends here are for name sake. Don't think that they have a big role here)

Days were flying happily for every one

For Maan nothing can be more lively with Geet accepting his friendship with open hands. Sam was more busy in copping up with d hardest task of studying and attending personality grooming sessions.She found that it wasn't an easy task.Thare were so many girl preparing for that aim.She also came to know it is not enough to be beautiful only to be a beauty queen. thousands other activities were involved in it.For Geet ,she was a free bird here she was the owner of herself here. No one was here to boss her.she can do what she wants for d time she was here.
Time came round off n it was d time again for Sam's birthday.In d morning Maan went to Khanna house n presented a gift to Sam n said -Happy birthday Sam

Sam was exited to see the gift.It was not like that she was greedy for gifts but she loved to be pampered.she liked to be the centre of attraction n wasn't ready to share her any right or happiness with any one.She always loved one person and that was SAMEERA KHANNA.No one was more important than her.Maan remembered that on last birthday she demanded a seperate gift from him so this year he was already planned to give her a gift.She opened d gift and her eyes twinkled to see it.maan has gifted her a ladies watch.it was very beautiful.
Sameera-It is so beautiful.

Maan -Sameera ! I wanted to say sorry to u for not coming today with u to celebrate ur birthday.actually same day my close friend's birthday falls n last year i wasn't there so this year I think u will not mind if i Go to celebrate my friend's birthday n we are going to celebrate it in college it self.it will be a surprise for my friend.If U want u can also join us there.


Sam-I m sorry Maan I won't be able to come as I have already planned for me today,and I have already got ur gift.Thanks for d gift

(it was fourth year of their togetherness so Maan was aware of Sameera's mind set,what she likes n what she wants.he knew that d gift was more than enough)

Maan-Vicky Geet kahaan hai?

Sam wasn't concerned what they were talking.she was busy in that watch.

vicky was not much happy today but he said-Geet di aaj jaldi ghar se chali gayi thi.She will go to college directly.

Maan was happy today,he wasn't need to worry about Sam today as he already told her about his plans n she also didn't make a point.

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Geet does not have a phone so Maan called Pinky to bring Geet to d cafe during their break time.Geet pinky n Meera went to cafe n Geet saw there some students busy in preparations to celebrate someone's birthday. MAAN too was there..

maan saw Geet and came to her n his eyes were stuck on her.She wore today same dress which Priya gifted her n she was looking just kike an angel decending directly from heaven.

When Geet saw him standing like this she came near him

Geet- hii Maan,kya hua kahaan ko gaye?

Maan didn;t answer her and Geet waved her hand in front of his eyes. Suddenly he came out of his dream land.

Maan-Hii geet, aaj subah subah kahaan chali gayi thi?I went to ur home to wish sam on her birthday.Vicky told me that u left home early.
Geet-bus yun hi .I went to temple and then came directly here.what's going here. Is some one's birthday today that u all are asssembled here?

Maan-yes It's my best friend's birthday today.come join us.

Geet went all went in n geet asked-Whose birthday is today.

( Geet was use to to celebrate her birthday alone n never felt sad for it.)

Maan ignored her question n said - Meet my friend Adi. He is my good friend from school. Sameera too knows him.

Geet-Hello Adi. how are you.So it is your birthday today? I wish u a very happy birthday.

Adi laughed loudly hearing this.Geet was confused- why are u laughing like this.Did i say some thing wrong?

samrat-Come on every one It's time to cut d cake.

All gethered around the cake

Maan forwarded a knife towards her-Geet cut d cake

Geet-But it Is Adi's birthday na.toh main kyun...

Maan cut her sentence-No Geet It's your birthday today.and he pointed to a wall where HAPPY BIRTHDAY GEET was written with colorful papers


Geet was stunned n couldn't say a word. she saw him with confusion in her eyes. Mayank and Dev shook her with shoulder.

Mayank-Why are u watching him like this?Aaj tumhara birthday nahin hai kya?Tum toh aise behave kar rahi ho jaise tumhe pata hi nahin That it's ur birthday today?

Maan was monitering her very closely. he knew what was going in her mind.so he came near her n took her hand and made her holding d knife.

Dev-Geet ab jaldi se cake cut karo .I can't control more .It's too tempting.

Geet was standing like a statue . seeing this Maan said -Geet pls cut d cake.all are waiting.

Geet cut d cake absent mindedly.It was shoking for her.all sang a happy birthday for her but she was numb.Maan took a piece of cake n fed her

Maan - happy birth day Geet.

Geet could not handle it and ran from there.All were confused on the way she was behaving.

Maan said -she wasn't expecting it so she is behaving like this.all of u carry on with the cake I will see her.

Maan went behind Geet n found her sitting on a bench in d ground.Maan went near her and sat besides her.he saw that she was not crying but was sitting all lost.


Maan-Geet are you alright?

Geet-How did you know Maan.Did Vicky tell You?

Maan-How can Vicky tell me when u took a promise from him to not to tell me?

Now Geet was confused she saw Maan for a answer.

Geet-Phir tumhen kise pata mere ghar walon ke alaawa ek do log hi hain jo ye jaante hain.

Maan-last year.when all were at our house for Sam's birthday,their car broke down n I came to drop them.I forgot to give the gift to Vicky which I brought for him .When I went to his room to give the gift I saw Vicky going to ur room.As Pammi aunty told that u were having a headache that day so I followed Vicky to see u that you were fine or not. That time I came to know.
Geet-why didn't u ask me then about it?

Maan-Itna toh main samajh gaya tha ki some thing was wrong with u all.but I didn't want to ask as it would hurt u.I thought to wait for the day when you will trust me as ur friend to tell me every thing.I m sorry Geet if i was wrong. maine jaan boojh kar woh sab nahin kiya
Saying this Maan got up and turned to leave

Geet-I Have no one whom I can call mine.A m alone in this world. I m an orphen Maan.

Maan was shoked to hear this.he was not able to utter a word.he sat back near her and said-What are u saying Geet?How is it possible?


precap-Full past of Geet


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hello friends from now onwards I will tell u about Geet's past.some will be narrated by Geet but after that I will tell her whole past which I will start from d time when Geet was not born.Geet does not know every thing about her past.She will tell Maan only what she knoes about herself.(It can take two or more updates so pls bear me)
If u liked it pls leave ur comments

Thanks-Rashmi


Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
waiting for Geet past ...
please cont soon

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