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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68


hold on Sia
cool down n take a deep breath
if u r going to predict on ur own then why i m here?🤣
will update soon


😭😭
aap na mujhe bohot confuse karte ho
u r here for writing update for me😛
jaldi dena
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia


😭😭
aap na mujhe bohot confuse karte ho
u r here for writing update for me😛
jaldi dena
waiting



so sweet of u
but u will have to wait
limit of my net connection is over so net is working very slow
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68



so sweet of u
but u will have to wait
limit of my net connection is over so net is working very slow



thank u
aap bhi bohot acche ho
aww jaldi recharge karwa dena
main wait kar rahi hoon updates ka
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Posted: 12 years ago

DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

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Thank u Sia you are such a darling.Love you

Part-7

Maan was driving fast all lost in his thoughts. he was still

trying to believe the view he saw in Geet's room. He didn't knew

where he was going.It was night very few vehicals were on road,

so he didn't face any problem. he pushed d door bell n Priya

opened d door.

Priya-aa gaye tum. koi problem toh nahjn hui na

Maan didn't hear his mother n he started to go to his room

Priya again-Maan ! are you listening what i m saying.

maan again didn't answer her.Priya stopped maan by placing her

hand on his shoulder. Maan came out of his thoughts n saw his

mother.

Priya- maan r u alright?

Maan -yes maa. Actually I m very tired. Can I go to sleep?

Priya-haan jaao Maan.In morning u have to go with Sam to

celebrate her birthday.


Maan didn't want to talk about her right now so he nodded and

went to his room after wising Priya good night.


After entering his room he went to take a shower to cool down his

mental fight but could not get rid of that.


he took shower n after wearing his night dress he laid on d bed.
but sleep was like miles away from him.

his heart n his mind -both were busy in that process of mental

fight

Maan's heart(MH) Maan's brain(MB)


MH-how it may be possible? they live in same house. both have

their birthday today. one is celebrating n other is not even

coming out of her room.

MB-Kuchh to reason hoga. Tum kahaan Geet ke baare me kuchh jaante ho?She never tells u about herself



MH-so what. every one has a different nature.may b she is not so

expressive

MB-how silly .Geet kaha se introvart lagti hai. She is a chatter

box.bus jab uske baare me poochho toh uski zubaan chipak jaati

hai

MH-but they r sisters.How can a mother be so partial for her two

daughters.Are they twins? but Geet is junior to Sam.She is going

to give her 12th boards.

MB-Ho sakta hai ki Geet ka padhne me interest nahin ho toh wo

fail ho gayi ho aur isiliye Sam aur Pammi us se gussa ho

MH- that's not possible-Remember in school Geet always helped Sam in her projects.even she is junior to her



MB-i think that Geet has done some thing so wrong that they r

avoiding her.

MH-Agar aisa hota to Pammi aunty Vicky ko Geet ke saath nahin

Chhodti.In Vicky's matter she trusts her more than Sameera


MH-I m feeling very bad for Geet. Apni birthday ke din she is all

alone.how i m so stupid that i didn't know about Geet's DOB. and

I consider myself her friend

Maan felt some wetness in his eyes as he imagined geet's face

which had teary eyes. He closed his eyes n left his heart and

mind still fighting.




In the morning it was 8 am n Priya still found Maan sleeping.She

woke up Maan n asked -Maan! u r still in bed it's 8 in d

morning n u all r meeting at 9. u will b late to go there.

Maan keeps his head in her lap n said-maa mera mann nahin hai

jaane ka.I couldn't sleep well at night.


Priya-(in teasing tone)Kyun Sam ke khayaalon ne sone nahin dia kya?


Maan-Come on Maa aap har baat ko Sam se kyun connect kar deti ho? Meri need ka Sameera se kya lena dena?

Priya-Ab mujhe kya pata ki tujhe neend kyun nahin aayi, maine toh aise hi uska naam le liya.Maan is every thing allright.Kal raat se dekh rahi hoon ki kuchh pareshaan ho


Maan-Can I ask u some thing?

Priya- U don't need my permission Maan to talk to me. Poochho kya poochhna hai?


Maan-maa ! Do the twins behave in same manners or they behave differently?


Priya- It doesn't matter they r twins or not.they can behave in

every manner. I mean they r two different persons only thing is that they r born together. they can behave in same manners in which two elder n younger sibling behave.But why are u asking these weird questions?






Maan -nothing maa! i m going to get freshen n then will go

Priya- it's ok main bf ready karti hoon

Maan went to bathroomn Priye too left all puzzeled


On bf priya asked maan if he bought any gift 4 Sam or not.Maan

was now little uncomfortable with his mother's continuous chants

of Sam's name. he left without answering her.

They all met on d meeting point n went to celebrate. Adi was

there as Sam had invited him. They all went to watch a movie but

maan was still lost thinking about Geet.He didn't know even d

name of movie which they were watching.he came out in d name of washroom n after a lot of thinking n struggle he called Khanna

House's land line.After few rings phone was picked up n he
heard-Hello




It was some servant so he asked-I m Maan . vicky ghar par hai kya

The servant told him that Vicky was out with Geet.on asking where they went he said that he didn't know.



maan was disappointed n he went back to movie all but didn't pay

any attention.Adi found him lost n surprised to see Maan behaving strangely on his girlfriend's birth day.Adi tried to ask him but Maan ignored.





then they all went to disk and Sam asked Maan to join her on d

dance floor but he avoided.Sam was also seeing Maan who was

almost on his maun vrat so she asked him

Maan-why r u behaving so differently? Is everything alright.

Maan -Yes I m fine.

Sam-so let's dance

Maan -no sam.I m in no mood to dance. you go n enjoy

Samdidn't say anything n went with other friends to dance floor.
At night after entertainment got over.Everyone parted n maan with

some hope in his heart to see Geet once, offered sameera to drop her to home.Sam agreed n they reached Sam's house.



Maan - Sam actually kal main Vicky ko uska gift dena bhool gaya tha.main uske room me gaya tha but he wasfast asleep so will give it to him now


.

Sam-Maan how rude! birthday girl ko no gift n vicky ke liye gift?
u didn't give me gift.

Maan- Yesterday Maa gave u na.

Sam saw him with a frown-maan I m ur Gf.u should have given me something special




Maan - Sorry . next birthday par pakka doonga Now call Vicky. Maan was hoping to see Geet's one glimps along with Vicky. He wanted to see if she was all right

But to his bad luck servant told him that vicky was tired as he

was out with geet n was sleeping.Maan was sad now n went back


Maan- (ST) Kisse poochoon Geet ke baare me.why I m so

restless.Vicky will not tell me anything because he has promised

Geet n above all he is a kid.Sam is out of question because she

is d only one who has problem with Geet.Pammi aunty se poochhna theek nahin hoga . she will b suspecious as she always supports Sam. this is another point that she does not say something bad to Geet like sam.Kisi servant se baat karna to bahut hi galat hoga. Kaun hai aisa jo Geet ke baare me mujhe bata sakta hai?
while thinking all this he reached home n to avoid Priya's querry about d day he said-Maa I m too tired. Good night.



and he went to his room n slept thinking about d options.Next day

day started as normal for everyone. Even maan was tired to think

n got busy in his studies n other works

two days passed n maan didn't get a chance to see geet.one day

maan returned from college n saw Priya little disturbed.When maan asked she told that cook's wife was sick n he went on leaven here r nothing to cook as the cook himself used to buy every thing 4 the kitchen and today he was planning to go to market but has to go on leave







.

Maan smiled at her n said -Dont worry maa. tell me I will buy the things 4 u


Priya got happy n gave him d list.He went to vegetable market.he

was buying vegetables.on one stall he saw Ramu kaka buying

vegetables.

he went near him n said-How r u kaka n everyone at home?

Ramu kaka-main theek hoon Aap kaise hai aur yahaan kya har rahe hain?


Maan told him every thing n kaka helped in buying things he

needed. after shopping when kaka started to go Maan stopped him.

he found kaka a right person to get his answers as he knew that

he was oldest servant of that house n loved Geet like his daughter

Maan-kaka!aap se kuchh poonchhoo to aap mujhe sach batttaenge?

Kaka saw him puzzeled n nodded

Maan-Main Geet ke baare me jaanna chahta hoon.
Kaka-Geet ke baare me aap kya poochhna chahte hai .Poochhne layak kya hai? aap ki dost hai. aap use jaante to hain.


Maan -Kaka main woh jaanna chahta hoon jo aap jaante hain.

Kaka understood somewhere what Maan wanted to know he took a deep breath n said



Kaka-Maan beta jo aap jaanna chahte hain agar Geet hi aapko
bataaye to theek rahega. main aapko kuchh nahin bata sakta.
mainne bata diya to aap geet ko daya ki nazar se dekhenge.Na geet isse pasand karegi, na aap aur na hi main.Main bahut khush ho jaoonga usdin jab Geet aap ko apne baare me bataayegi magar ye namumkin to nahin par bahut mushkil hai.agar Geet ke baare me janna chahte hai toh aapko uske dil me woh mukaam haasil karna hoga ki Geet aap par itna bharosa kare ki aap usse kabhi dosti me dhokha nahin denge.


Kaka left from there wiping his eyes n Maan was still there.He

made a promise to himself-I promise to myself Geet that one day i

will win ur trust n u will tell me every thing about urself.I will try my best. From now only I m ur that trustful friend who will be with u in every problem.

He felt light in his heart n smiled whole heartedly n went to

home






Precap-Maan taking steps to be a true friend of Geet.Meeting of

Geet with Ram n Priya.n small leaps




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Hello friends pls dont get mad on me for d absence of Geet.n u

all want to know where Geet was on her birthday .U all will get

ur answers in few upcoming updates
if U like it pls leave ur comments n hit like

Thanx-Rashmi





























Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia



thank u
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aww jaldi recharge karwa dena
main wait kar rahi hoon updates ka


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayeee luvd the whole update...:D:D
Poor Maan all the tym his mind is occupied with geet's thought instead of sameera as she is his gf aftrall...;)
nd evn in sameera's bday party he didnt showed any interest n sameera too didnt bothered much..kaisi gf hai..:/:/ n maan hw much he tried to get single glimpse of geet bt failed evrytym...n lastly he found ramu kaka as a best source frm which he can get info bout geet bt again kaka didnt told nythng to him instead he said ki first u hv to make ur place in her heart so that c can share all her talks with him...:D
Precap is interestng..:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
u know what di i m not angry on u
ki aapne geet ki entry hi nahi ki but i m very very very happy
in the whole update maan ignorned sam
dil ko kitni khushi mil rahi hai don't ask
mera dil garden garden ho gaya hai
love it
now maan have to prove himself as geet trust worthy friend
so that she can share her problem with maan
waiting for geet ram nd priya meeting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

u know what di i m not angry on u

ki aapne geet ki entry hi nahi ki but i m very very very happy
in the whole update maan ignorned sam
dil ko kitni khushi mil rahi hai don't ask
mera dil garden garden ho gaya hai
love it
now maan have to prove himself as geet trust worthy friend
so that she can share her problem with maan
waiting for geet ram nd priya meeting
update soon


thanx Sia 4 like n comment
Actually it is a surprise gift to u 4 ur all lovely comments

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PujaShree

Hayeee luvd the whole update...:D:D
Poor Maan all the tym his mind is occupied with geet's thought instead of sameera as she is his gf aftrall...;)
nd evn in sameera's bday party he didnt showed any interest n sameera too didnt bothered much..kaisi gf hai..:/:/ n maan hw much he tried to get single glimpse of geet bt failed evrytym...n lastly he found ramu kaka as a best source frm which he can get info bout geet bt again kaka didnt told nythng to him instead he said ki first u hv to make ur place in her heart so that c can share all her talks with him...:D
Precap is interestng..:D



Thank u so much Puja
mujhe laga ki Geet ke bina kisi ko psand nahin aayega par could't get space 4 her
now i m relieved it will b liked by all
thank u once again

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