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IMPORTANT NOTE







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Maan tortured her more while she was about to come when he inserted his hardness inside her softness and started rocking it kissing her thighs and feet passionately.Maan thursted deep inside her powerfully making her scream badly and took her swollen lips once again.Maan rocked backwards and forwards till Geet screamed more for it and they hit the climax.After several rounds of love making Geet slept on his bare chest totally exhausted and Maan more cocooned her inside his embrace.Geet was totally exhausted and she slept inside his arms more comfortably.Maan pecked her forehead lovingly and rubbed her back slowly to soothe her pain which was done by him passionately.Geet felt peace feeling his rubbing hands and she more snuggled inside him.

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On that time a girl was screaming & she poured the petrol on her & lit herself & there was the scream of a boy,"Anjali!"And he got up sweating badly.Sameera who was sleeping in another room entered inside the room & switched on the light.There sat Angad Khanna sweating badly & breathing heavily.Sameera sat beside him & said hugging him,"The usual nightmare?"Angad nodded snuggling inside her chest.Sameera took the glass of water from his bedside table & said,"Here drink some water!"Angad took the water & drank it silently.Sameera asked the umpteenth time,"Who's Anjali?What happened with her?"Angad said nothing while Sameera sighed thinking he's not gonna reveal it.Sameera stood & was about to exit his bedroom when she heard his voice,"She was my sister!"Sameera was shocked & turned facing Angad.

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PART 41

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It was the passionate night for both Maaneet while someone was burning in anger seeing their happiness & he was none other than Angad Khanna..who was seething.It was about 3 or 4 when Angad was drinking Bacardi Whisky(I dont have any idea with any brand of alcohol..so please give me my writers liberty guys)Angad's eyes were red due to lack of sleep & he was pouring the pegs after pegs down his throat due to frustration.Frustration on the time which were running bad in case of him.Angad said to himself pouring down another peg down his throat,"Bloody b*****d,how can he get up once again positively after having all the problems in his life which were created by me..me Angad Khanna..who is the greatest singer of this whole world'damn becoz of u i lost my best friend Veer,Maan!I hate u & that Veer always tails u..no matter what happens with me or my friendship!"



FLASHBACK'''''>




Rain was pouring mercilessly in the earths of Mumbai studio where Angad's shooting was going on..it was his hard work which was about to color out when Veer had destroyed it coming in between the shooting.



SLAP!



Angad was shocked when he got the hard blow from his beloved..his best friend Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat urf Veer.Angad said shockingly,"Veer!"Veer said angrily,"Dont u dare take my name from your mouth Angad..i hate u!Why are u behind Maan?What has he done?What happened with Anjali was an self-punishment..it was suicidal which was committed by Anjali only.Why dont u blame me as am the culprit who brought Karan in our lives'thought i wont be far away from my childhood friend!But why r u not blaming me Angad instead of u r attacking Maan & Maan's career & future!U have destroyed his live by making Sameera back out from the marriage & he marries Geet.Why did u do that Angad?U destroyed an innocent girl's life when u were abt to break his marriage!Why?"Angad was shocked & came forward try to keep his hand on Veer's shoulder when Veer shouted angrily,"Dont touch me!From today onwards,am not ur best friend..am erasing all our best memories as friends..everything with which we spent time together everything will be erased from my life Angad'now u wont have any friends..no one is in your life for which u can say that he's ur best friend!And dont u dare try to destroy his future becoz i will be behind just like a shadow & will always be protecting him fro0m danger!"



FLASHBACK ENDS''''>




Angad took his wallet which was kept beside his whisky bottle.He opened it & saw Veer & his photo standing keeping their hand on each others shoulder & smiling for the camera.Angad said,"Do u know how much u pain gave on that day breaking ur friendship with me?My heart never believed the truth..i know Veer still u have respect for our friendship till now that's why i havent said the truth that i was behind Maan's marriage breaking'i was behind the plan making Maan's life hell by sending Sameera back'i was behind the plan of Geet's kidnap..but trust me Veer..am doing all this becoz Maan was always wrong'always'he did to get Anjali & when his wishes got fulfilled on that time he threw Anjali out of his life making her pregnant & showed himself as good in front of everyone while Karan was made mental patient..a sadist in front of this society!While the truth is that he's sadist & u r protecting him & neglecting me!He's bewitching u Veer..with his charms & that bloody story of him that he's an orphan boy where he dint get any motherly love!"Angad said that with total disgust but also said with determination to the photo of Veer,"But i will make u see the true colors of Maan,Veer!He's not a worth of your friendship!"And he fainted holding the photo closed to his heart.

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At about 9am Geet stirred slowly & more snuggled inside Maan's chest while Maan was sleeping soundly & peacefully holding his jaan around her waist.Geet slowly opened her almond eyes & saw her most favourite scene.Her jaan sleeping peacefully.Geet rubbed her almond eyes cutely & saw her husband & a wide smile crept on her face where her swollen lips curved.Geet saw how she was wrapped around Maan like a vine & giggled softly.Hearing Geet's giggle Maan opened his one thief eyes & saw his jaan who was giggling softly.His one eye danced in his socket seeing Geet giggling while he closed it immediately when Geet saw him seeing from one thief eyes.Geet said cutely with wide smile,"Gotcha!"Maan opened his one thief eyes but cutely snaked his arms around her small waist & said opening both the eyes now,"Gotcha!"Her soft curves pressed to his rock chest where the CD which he had switched on was playing the song Meri Aashiqui song from Aashiqui film




[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=vYJdi5_CyxU[/YOUTUBE]


Maan immediately hovered on her body & asked,"Mrs.Khurana..how u felt last night..sore?"Geet's eyes popped up hearing his question when she felt pain between her thighs & said punching her fist to his rock chest blushing furiously,"Sore!Shameless!"Maan laughed heartily & whispered inside her right ear,"Only for my innocent wifey'Mrs.Khurana!"He bit her earlobe making her wince in pain & pleasure.Geet's hands went to his bare back & felt the scratches of his self-punishment for he slightly winced.Geet's eyes welled up feeling him wince & immediately said pushing his body from her,"Let me put the medicine for the scratches jaan..just control yourself for now!"Maan dint listen to her & slowly & gently bit her another ear lobe & said,"Hmm!"Geet's blood started to heat feeling his rough swollen lips but said taking the control,"Maan!"Maan saw her almond eyes leaving her earlobe when she cutely pushed him from her & immediately got up & was about to walk when she got pain between her thighs & she tripped & Maan caught him in his strong arms.


Maan said,"Jaan u r sore'u cant walk i will bring medicine for ur soreness'!"Geet cut his words & said,"And urs too'or else am not gonna talk to u ever!"Maan's eyes popped up but said cutely making puppy face,"Ok!"Maan gently made her to lie on the bed where the bed was messy giving the indication of their passionate night.The bed was messy with sheets crumpled & several bangles were broken.Maan saw the messy bed & blushing Geet taking the sight of it & teased,"Hmm!Its a bit less messy jaan..let's mess it more!"Geet saw him with wide eyes while Maan gave a lopsided grin at her expression.Geet cutely pouted & threw the pillow at him.Maan caught it grinning from ear to ear & gently placed it beside her & softly pecked her lips & said ever so softly,"I love u sooo much jaan!"And he went from there to get medicines.On that time Geet turned around her & saw the one 4th pt of the book dangling outside from the bedside drawyer.Geet opened it & tok the book.It was the very same book which had the collection of the important people which Maan's life saw.














Geet turned some random page & got a picture of a group which had Maan & Veer too.She dint know the remaining other two men.Geet saw under the photo which quoted as-Me,Veer,Angad,Karan.






Precap-Geet:Who's he Maan?"She showed the fourth person who was the last one.Maan's eyes clouded with anger & his jaw tightened & the anger came over in his face & he bursted,:He's a sadist'a sadist who was playing game in the innocent lifes of the girls to satisfy his urges & desires.Now he's in mental hospital under treatment but he enough damaged our friendship with Angad that is affecting me & Veer.He was the one who destroyed Anjali's life & put the blame on me to make himself innocent in front of Angad to be free..but me & Veer had figured it out & admitted him to the mental hospital in Mumbai.


PART 42





Note-Guys i want to say something about this track..I want to say firstly that please if u wont feel comfortable reading this track then do please back off & avoid the track.This content is strictly using for only entertainment.Dont take it off by heart..just think this as fiction as many of u people think it as reality these days.Though it has some reality still i would advice u guys to please avoid it if u wont feel comfortable.More truth is gonna reveal & the bond is gonna get stronger between Maaneet after this track.If u guys seriously feel uncomfortable reading this track then let me know i will fast forward the track & end it giving summary.





Note 2-Another important news is that the anniversary of Venomous Desire is gonna come as it turns one year on August 22nd & u know that how days passes with the wink of an eye.So it is ur hands guys giving the likes.I want to make that anniversary with part 50th..can u guys give me the likes?Please!Or else gonna give summary on that day only..so the decision is yours what u like!



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Posted: 12 years ago
once again belated happy wala brithday behna 😛


ME FIRST HAYEEE YUPIII

hmm veer ne sab pata kar liya
angad ko khud hi nahi pata sach kya hay
koi bat nahi sab pata chal jayega usko bhi

maaneet passionate moment hayeee

they r in their world forgettiing all

hmm geet ko maan ki past ki jhalak mila
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tks for the sweet yaar,hope u. had a mindblowing celebration..amazing hot update..love the story ..maaneet bonding is getting closer and i love it..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiyariya

once again belated happy wala brithday behna 😛



ME FIRST HAYEEE YUPIII

hmm veer ne sab pata kar liya
angad ko khud hi nahi pata sach kya hay
koi bat nahi sab pata chal jayega usko bhi

maaneet passionate moment hayeee

they r in their world forgettiing all

hmm geet ko maan ki past ki jhalak mila



thank u sooo much behna!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update😊
ohhh so angad veer n maan were best friends😲
ooopppsss naughty maan😳
toh all these misunderstanding between maan n angad is bkz of that karan grrr😡😡😡
plzzz continue soon want to knw more hw anjali related to maan n wat happend 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashmaaneet

awsum update😊

ohhh so angad veer n maan were best friends😲
ooopppsss naughty maan😳
toh all these misunderstanding between maan n angad is bkz of that karan grrr😡😡😡
plzzz continue soon want to knw more hw anjali related to maan n wat happend 😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update

so angad is frd to veer

but why did he say tat maan made anjali pregnant and who is this karan

a bit very confusing here.. as m still not able to get wat maan's mistake is

and angad broke maan and sameera's marriage na
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cool update, love it a lot.

So now kahaani turning to 4 friends hhuh?

Kya baat hai.

And i think that veer and maan should now talk to armaan together and prove everything.

at least maaneet ka ek enemy to reduce ho jaye avi!

And avi aur tora maaneet pyaar daal dena, okies?

Me will come phir se to read pt 42.

Tum ko "HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY"
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was hot n romantic..
angad..when he will come to know whatever veer said was truth..he was wrong analysing karan

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