Rain beauty MG SS Note: pg35 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Superb start! update soon! well written
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hi
the up is really beautifull so mann gave ad for a home nurse for yash and geet came there as a nurse
geet and the two became friends
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nice update loved it,thank you for pm.
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Nyc update dear. Geet ki khubsurati me kho gya maan. Wow.
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Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...maaneet n yash sooo sweet...loved da friendship...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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amazing dear
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NICE PART DEAR GEET IS YASH NURSE VERY INSERTING WAITING 4 NEXT PART
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I dedicate this part to KINGKHANFAN as she made a wonderful vm by including the important scenes f this SS.I thank her a lot.I request u all to watch this vm and express your opinion.

vimeo.com/61523036

Some of you are wondering when Drashti wore such sarees.By the way the pictures of Geet in saree are made through pizap by me.
Geet opened the pipe of her bath room.There was no water.She came to Maan's room.

G:There is some problem with my bath room's pipe.

M:I will try to repair it.

He tried repairing it.But it was not working out.

M:I think we should call someone else to repair it.

G:Oh!But I want to bath.

M:You use my bathroom.

Geet was hesitant.

M:Don't be insecure.

G:Ok.

Geet got inside Man's bathroom.The sound of the fall of water drops made Maan feel that it was rain.Geet was bathing in the rain for him.

After bath,with wet hair Geet came out.Maan was lost in her.While walking out,by mistake her shoulder rubbed his.Though they both were conscious about it,they both ignored it purposefully.


After a few days...


Maan:Geet'Yash's birthday is coming up.We need to celebrate it.

G:Wow!That's so sweet.

Maan handed over a cover to you.

M:This is a party wear.Please wear this for the birthday celebration.

G:But what was the need of buying this salwar Kameez?

M:For my happiness.

She smiled.





Geet wore the party wear for the birthday celebration.Maan could not take his eyes off her.

M:Thank you so much for wearing this Geet.

G:I need to thank you for giving me such a beautiful gift.

M:You look gorgeous.

She blushed:Thank you Maan.

Maan and Geet brought Yash to the celebration room.

Maan held Yash's hand and cut the birthday cake.Maan and Geet sang the birthday song.Maan fed him cake.

Y:Thank you so much for making my birthday special.Friends like you both proved that my birth was something to be happy about.

M:Hey Yash'

They both laughed.Geet smiled seeing their friendship.

After the party'

Yash went to sleep.

It was raining.Geet went out in the rain.She felt being wet in the rain.

Maan went out and watched that beautiful sight.Because he loved Geet in rain.For him she was a rain beauty.

Geet felt that her pain was melting in the rain drops.Maan's eyes caressed her slowly.

He wished to dance with his rain beauty in the rain.He dreamt of dancing slowly with her in the rain.


Geet saw Maan observing her.

G:Maan'.you'here?

M:Simply.

G:Good night.

M:Good night.

She went inside.



Maan took his guitar and music started flowing automatically.

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(This is the song he composed.Please listen to the song while reading it)

Yash was happy to listen to Maan's new composition on Rain.

Y:When you saw Geet rainy music occupied your heart very fast.

Maan smiled:Yash'when I saw Geet walking in the rain'I can't explain that'I feel she made rain more beautiful by her presence.I have never felt the rain so beautiful and magical before.

Yash smiled:Arre yaar'are you falling in love?

Maan was shy.

Y:Then don't delay.Go confess your love.She will accept your love.She cannot reject her savior.Because she knows that she will be always secure in her savior's hands.

Maan's face blossomed.


Geet tried to dry her wet hair after bath,but it was partially wet.

She saw Maan looking at her with a smile.

A sweet smile adorned her lips.

He came near her:Geet,today I want to tell you something.I am a small music composer.I do stage shows some times.No helping Yash in his business.I get enough salary to look after my mother and sister s who are in Lucknow.I guess I can look after my wife too.Will you be my wife?

Geet was shocked:Maan?

Maan as smiling at her hopefully.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Maan is very fast waiting 4 geet answer
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nice update
hayye maan in love

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